Tamanna-e-Dil.......

by punam on May 26, 2008, 02:29:02 PM
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honeyrose
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«Reply #45 on: June 03, 2008, 02:09:10 PM »
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unki khamoshi bhi mujhse baaten karti hai
woh bolte bhi nahin mujhe sunai unki awaaz deti hai..

hum rooh se alag hain par dil se nahin
yeh bas hum jaante hain koi aur nahin..

dhadkan meri judi hai unhi ke dam se
unki bahon men hona hai fana yahi tamanna hai..

...

Very nice line punam dear... Applause



Hum haale dil kya sunaye aapko
Muhabbat hogaye hai aapse milke

Taraste rahete hai hum aapke liye
Muhabbat hogaye hai aapse milke

Samjho meri khamoshi  ko
Dhadkane rookh jaati hai aapke aane se

Meri aankhon mein aapki tasveer liye
Muhabbat hogaye hai aapko samajte
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syednaami
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«Reply #46 on: June 03, 2008, 03:17:10 PM »
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Thanks Punam Saahiba...

HoneyRose Saahiba, Buhat umda aur bahtareen likha hai aap ne shama ko yunhi roshan rakhiye jee...
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punam
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«Reply #47 on: June 03, 2008, 04:51:58 PM »
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welcome syed ji....
Thanx Honey di...bahot acha likha aapne...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #48 on: June 04, 2008, 01:48:22 PM »
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welcome syed ji....
Thanx Honey di...bahot acha likha aapne...

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Thanks punam dear..Usual Smile
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syednaami
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«Reply #49 on: June 04, 2008, 07:38:19 PM »
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Very nice line punam dear... Applause

Hum haale dil kya sunaye aapko
Muhabbat hogaye hai aapse milke
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Meri aankhon mein aapki tasveer liye
Muhabbat hogaye hai aapko samajte




Haal-e-dil mera bhi buhat ranjeedah, -
Jabse huey dur hum tumse saajna, -

Takte rahte hain aapki tasveer ko, -
Sochte hain ki kab aayega waqt woh, -

Ek ho jaayenge hamaare dil do, -
Phir darmiyan koi duri na ho, -

Bas karke aankehn nam sota hun, -
Ishq hai aashiqi men bas jeeta hun. -



(Syed Naami)

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HoneyRose Saahiba, kuchh humne bhi arz kia hai...
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Pooja
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«Reply #50 on: June 04, 2008, 07:49:20 PM »
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Good oen Honey and Sami ji!!!
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syednaami
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«Reply #51 on: June 07, 2008, 09:48:28 PM »
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Thank you Pooja jee, So nice of you...
Shihab baba,,, aap to khamosh tamashai bane phir rahe... kuchh kahoge...?
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honeyrose
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«Reply #52 on: June 10, 2008, 02:21:43 PM »
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Shukriya dosto..

Shukriya aapka Sami,, Pooja sis ..


Jaante hain hum mera dil aapka hogaya hain
Kaise huey ye na samaj raha hain
Kehna tha tumse kitni muhabbat hain 
Aapne toh mere dil se saason ko aapne kar liya hain


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syednaami
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«Reply #53 on: June 10, 2008, 05:03:32 PM »
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unki khamoshi bhi mujhse baaten karti hai
woh bolte bhi nahin mujhe sunai unki awaaz deti hai..
hum rooh se alag hain par dil se nahin
yeh bas hum jaante hain koi aur nahin..

dhadkan meri judi hai unhi ke dam se
unki bahon men hona hai fana yahi tamanna hai..


Kuchh Khaas aapki nazar karta hun, Punam Saahiba...

Unki awaaz mere dil men goonjti rahti hai, -
Woh chup ho jaye to saari duniya suni lagti hai, -

Unki jaan men meri jaan atki rahti hai, -
Woh jaante nahin meri haalat unke bin kaisi hai, -

Unki dhadkan se meri rooh saans leti hai, -
Mujhe mujhse bhi ziyada pyar woh karti hai . -



(Syed Naami)
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punam
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«Reply #54 on: June 10, 2008, 05:45:32 PM »
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thanx pooja di..Honey di...shihab ji... and syed ji....

Honey di bahot acha likhe aap ne...


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punam
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«Reply #55 on: June 10, 2008, 05:47:38 PM »
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Kuchh Khaas aapki nazar karta hun, Punam Saahiba...

Unki awaaz mere dil men goonjti rahti hai, -
Woh chup ho jaye to saari duniya suni lagti hai, -

Unki jaan men meri jaan atki rahti hai, -
Woh jaante nahin meri haalat unke bin kaisi hai, -

Unki dhadkan se meri rooh saans leti hai, -
Mujhe mujhse bhi ziyada pyar woh karti hai . -



(Syed Naami)


syed ji jawab nahi aap ka..reply padh ke sach me maza aa gaya..bahot khoob...


Himmat na rahi kuchh kahne sun.ne ki
dil men aaj kuchh aisi uljhan si hai...
tamanna ab bas ek hi hai dil men
rakhe woh hamen apni palkon ke saye tale...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #56 on: June 10, 2008, 05:49:53 PM »
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Shukriya Punam dear..Usual Smile
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syednaami
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«Reply #57 on: June 10, 2008, 07:37:23 PM »
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syed ji jawab nahi aap ka..reply padh ke sach me maza aa gaya..bahot khoob...


Himmat na rahi kuchh kahne sun.ne ki
dil men aaj kuchh aisi uljhan si hai...
tamanna ab bas ek hi hai dil men
rakhe woh hamen apni palkon ke saye tale...


So nice of you,,, great reply from you too, Punam Saahiba... Thanks sooooooo muchhhhh
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syednaami
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«Reply #58 on: June 14, 2008, 12:19:27 PM »
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Haalat hamari kuchh aisi badli, -
Sahra men khade ajnabi jaisi, -

Kah na paaye Tamanna-e-Dil apni, -
Is umeed pe ki woh hi kuchh kahti, -

Intazaar ki ghadi bhi tham gayi, -
Par unki zubaan khaamosh hi rahi, -

Pyar ka nasha ya hamari Himmat thi, -
Unki baat apne shabdon men kahdi. -

Sar hilaya unhon ne aur haan kar di, -
Dil ki tamanna yun hamari puri hui. -



(Syed Naami)
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honeyrose
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«Reply #59 on: June 14, 2008, 06:53:34 PM »
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Buhat khoob Syed acha likha hai aapne.. Thumbs UP

Buhat ache lines likhe ho punam.. Thumbs UP


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