tanha si khaamosh raat... Intezar !

by Intezar on September 11, 2011, 01:36:50 PM
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Jo ik raat tum mere hontho se ho kar gujar jaate
Tanhaa toot kar tere phelu mein hum bikhar jaate

Na sada de sake koi na awaaz apni sun paaye
Siskiyon mein teri kuch is kadar hum utar jaate

Sard si aah liye baraste hain khaamosh baadal
Inme bhi tapish hoti jo apne darmayan hokar jaate

Baarishon mein bhi sulagti hai saanse hontho par
Karaar aata jo aankhon ke nam mausam gujar jaate

Kaanpte hontho me qaid hain jo aarzuyein hamaari
Lag kar labo se saari khwaahishen bayan kar jaate

Mit chale hain daag jo tune diye the milkar kabhi
Khwahish yahi k tum hume zakhm koi naya dekar jaate

Mumkin hai ki Roshni mein bichhad jaayen hum
Kaash ke intezar sehar hone se pehle hum mar jaate…!!!


Shukriya
Intezar !


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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2011, 03:26:56 PM »
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very nice poetry--
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2011, 04:00:44 PM »
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Intezaar Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah janab Waah kia khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne ...
Behad khub aur umdaa khayaalat ko pur asar lafzoN
meiN dhalaa hai...

Sabhi ashaar behad khub rahe janab ...
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..
Khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda hafez           





Jo ik raat tum mere hontho se ho kar gujar jaate
Tanhaa toot kar tere phelu mein hum bikhar jaate


Waah waah bahut khubsurat matla kaha hai janab.. daad daad           

Na sada de sake koi na awaaz apni sun paaye
Siskiyon mein teri kuch is kadar hum utar jaate

Sard si aah liye baraste hain khaamosh baadal
Inme bhi tapish hoti jo apne darmayan hokar jaate

Kia baat hai bahut khoob daad ...         

Baarishon mein bhi sulagti hai saanse hontho par
Karaar aata jo aankhon ke nam mausam gujar jaate

Kaanpte hontho me qaid hain jo aarzuyein hamaari
Lag kar labo se saari khwaahishen bayan kar jaate

Bahut khoob janab ...           

Mit chale hain daag jo tune diye the milkar kabhi
Khwahish yahi k tum hume zakhm koi naya dekar jaate

Achchi khawahish hai... tongue3         

Mumkin hai ki Roshni mein bichhad jaayen hum
Kaash ke intezar sehar hone se pehle hum mar jaate…!!!

Bahut khoob janab waah daad ...           


Shukriya
Intezar !


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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2011, 08:36:31 PM »
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Akhri kay do toh behad shandaar rahe dost..
Bahaut acha likha hai..
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Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2011, 06:55:39 AM »
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Bahut Umda Peshkash......  notworthy notworthy

jawab nahi aapka intezar sahab... wah kya khoob likha hai aapne... Usual Smile

lakhon daad....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2011, 07:25:36 AM »
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wah wah wah bahut koob likha hai aap ne...
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2011, 10:48:11 AM »
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wahhhhhhh yaar bahut khooob......,
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