"TUM"...

by vimmi singh on January 30, 2013, 10:45:35 AM
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tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar
geet bhi
sangeet bhi
tu hi zindagi
tu hai bandagi
meri khushi
meri preet bhi

tu subah ka os hai
sham ki laali hai tu
din ki khadi dhup me
taruwar ka chhaaya hai tu
sukh-dukh ka saathi
kan kan me samaaya hai tu

tum raahat
tum jajbaat
baarish ki thirkan
tumhi hothon ki muskaan
gadya bhi
padya bhi
tu hi khubsoorat alankaar
meri prerna
meri jeet bhi
tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar

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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2013, 10:48:03 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2013, 10:49:16 AM »
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tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar
geet bhi
sangeet bhi
tu hi zindagi
tu hai bandagi
meri khushi
meri preet bhi

tu subah ka os hai
sham ki laali hai tu
din ki khadi dhup me
taruwar ka chhaaya hai tu
such-dukh ka saathi
kan kan me samaaya hai tu

tum raahat
tum jajbaat
baarish ki thirkan
tumhi hothon ki muskaan
gadya bhi
padya bhi
tu hi khubsoorat alankaar
meri prerna
meri jeet bhi
tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar



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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2013, 10:50:43 AM »
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bahut khoob vimmi ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2013, 11:01:50 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob

shukriya saini sir ji..... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2013, 11:54:07 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne vimmi jee. dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2013, 12:38:55 PM »
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nice poem !
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2013, 01:22:29 PM »
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बहुत खूब
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2013, 02:35:22 PM »
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tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar
geet bhi
sangeet bhi
tu hi zindagi
tu hai bandagi
meri khushi
meri preet bhi

tu subah ka os hai
sham ki laali hai tu
din ki khadi dhup me
taruwar ka chhaaya hai tu
such-dukh ka saathi
kan kan me samaaya hai tu

tum raahat
tum jajbaat
baarish ki thirkan
tumhi hothon ki muskaan
gadya bhi
padya bhi
tu hi khubsoorat alankaar
meri prerna
meri jeet bhi
tum chahat
tum pyaar
dil ki dhadkan
tumhi mera sansaar


bht khoob Vimmi ji
daad daad
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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2013, 03:02:04 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause nice g
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2013, 03:49:50 PM »
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bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Vimmi ji.....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2013, 03:55:30 PM »
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tum raahat tum jajbaat baarish ki thirkan tumhi hothon ki muskaan gadya bhi padya bhi tu hi khubsoorat alankaar meri prerna meri jeet bhi tum chahat tum pyaar dil ki dhadkan tumhi mera sansaar

Aisi sundar sahityik bhasha me dil ke udgaaro ki abhivyakti dekhkar aseem prasannta huee..
aise hi likhte rahiye vimmi jee
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2013, 03:55:51 PM »
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boht khub vimmi ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2013, 04:27:34 PM »
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bahut khoobsurati se likha hai aapne vimmi jee. her ek alfaz mein pyar jalak raha hai. wonderful..... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #14 on: January 30, 2013, 05:24:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya qalb ji humaare hausle badhaane k liye...  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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