Waqt ki Vaaredaat Dil jaane

by Ghulam Haider on October 08, 2008, 10:10:05 AM
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Waqt ki vaaredaat dil jaane.
Sadma e haadesaat dil jaane.

Sab se yaksaaN kabhi nahiN milta,
Kis meN kya haiN sifaat dil jaane.

Aise seene meN shor karta hai,
Jaise ulfat ki baat dil jaane.

Apne ehsaas ki nigaahoN se,
Kya hai ye kaayenaat dil jaane.

Thi bohot khush guzaar us ke saath,
Ab ye kya hai hayaat dil jaane.

Woh gaya chhoR kar hameN "Haider",
Kaise guzri hai raat dil jaane.


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diya786
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«Reply #1 on: October 08, 2008, 10:21:30 AM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Haidar sahab
maine bhi koshish ki hai jawab likhne ki Applause

Is dil par kiye jo sitam tumne
woh bas mera dil jaane

Hai kya mere muqaddar mein
yeh bas mera khuda jaane
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2008, 11:00:43 AM »
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wow very good lines Haider ji... and nice reply diya dear   Applause
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Ghulam Haider
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2008, 02:21:28 PM »
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wow very good lines Haider ji... and nice reply diya dear   Applause
Aap bohot mehrbaan haiN haqeer par, ye to aap ki mohabbat hai ke jis ne khana e dil meN shor machana shuroo kar diya hai.
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2008, 02:28:29 PM »
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Bahut accha likha hai Haidar sahab
maine bhi koshish ki hai jawab likhne ki Applause

Is dil par kiye jo sitam tumne
woh bas mera dil jaane

Hai kya mere muqaddar mein
yeh bas mera khuda jaane

Bohot pyara khayaal hai. Lekin aap ko to koi aisi ghazal likhni chahiye jis se kuchh pyaar mohabbat zahir ho ye shikayat,.. kya baat hai? Is se dard e dil zaahir ho raha hai aour kuchh udaasi.
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2008, 03:59:09 PM »
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Bohat khoob achcha likha hai aapne Haider ji... Applause
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Ghulam Haider
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2008, 04:44:47 PM »
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Bohat khoob achcha likha hai aapne Haider ji... Applause
Aap ka bohot intezaar tha,
Aap ke liye dil be qaraar tha.
Abhi Roja ji se aap ki hi baat chal rahi thi.
Aap bhi to bohot pyara likhti haiN.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2008, 12:56:26 PM »
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tune mujse kabhi kahi to nahi
par tere jazbaat mera dil jane

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Ghulam Haider
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2008, 03:37:15 PM »
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tune mujse kabhi kahi to nahi
par tere jazbaat mera dil jane

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Saajid Bhi Aadaab.
BaRi mehbaani hai aap ki k mujhe yaa dkiya. Aap ke jazbaat ki qadr karta hoN. Pyara shea'r kaha hai aap ne. JahaN mohabbat ho wahaN baat zubaan se kehne ki zuroorat nahiN rehti. Dil khud mahsoos kar leta hai. Aap ka zikr "Brkaraar" bhai ne mujhse kiya tha. Mujhe Kuwait meN Call ki aour taqreeba 8 minutes tak baat ki. Aap ki bohot ta'reef kar rahe the.
Aap ka bohot 2 shukriya ke meri ghzal pasand ki.Insha allah rabeta barqaraar rahega. DuaoN meN yaad rakhiyega.
"Haider"
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«Reply #9 on: October 10, 2008, 04:40:43 AM »
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mere walid se mat bata unka beta ghayel ho gaya hain warna kuwait chod fauran qatar aa jayege  Giggle aur sach haider saheb main aaj bhi apne aapko shayer nahi manta muje to urdu tak padne ya likhne nahi aati bas aise hi simple se sade se lafzo ko lekar kuch na kuch pesh kar deta hu.
Saajid Bhi Aadaab.
BaRi mehbaani hai aap ki k mujhe yaa dkiya. Aap ke jazbaat ki qadr karta hoN. Pyara shea'r kaha hai aap ne. JahaN mohabbat ho wahaN baat zubaan se kehne ki zuroorat nahiN rehti. Dil khud mahsoos kar leta hai. Aap ka zikr "Brkaraar" bhai ne mujhse kiya tha. Mujhe Kuwait meN Call ki aour taqreeba 8 minutes tak baat ki. Aap ki bohot ta'reef kar rahe the.
Aap ka bohot 2 shukriya ke meri ghzal pasand ki.Insha allah rabeta barqaraar rahega. DuaoN meN yaad rakhiyega.
"Haider"
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