"zindagi agar aapki nahi hoti"

by aaina on August 28, 2009, 12:54:09 AM
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Jaanay kaha.n guzar rahi hoti
Zindagi agar aapki nahi hoti

Fariyaad o foghaa.n se kya hasil
Khamoshi mai bhi baat chupi hoti
 
Kaise aate johar manaane ke
Mujhse tu jo khafa na hui hoti

Waise to sab achay manzar hai.n
Tere saath inki alag dilkashi hoti

Sath tere hu.n to qeemti thehra
Wagarna kiski nazar padi hoti

mein hawaaon ke baandhta ghungru
agrchay Ruswaai ki fikr nahi hoti

kehte tum jo koi achi ghazal aslam
zaroor kisi ke dil mai utar gayi hoti
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 01:42:26 AM »
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nice one
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2009, 02:12:15 AM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji bahut khoob midblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2009, 04:32:36 AM »
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Aslam saaHeb:

Aadaab arz hai!

aapki yeh umdaah Ghazal dil meiN utar ga'ii.. baRii Khuub Ghazal kahii hay aapne.. liKhate raheN yuuNhi.. mere dil se niklii hu'ii daad qabUl farmaayeN!

KhuSh raheN.... apnaa Khayaal raKheN


duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2009, 03:32:27 AM »
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Usual Smile Sach mea Dil mea utar jaaye.. aisi Umda Ghazal pesh ki hai.. Bahoot bahoot khoob Aslam ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2009, 11:20:50 PM »
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nice one



thnxxx so much AD
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2009, 11:22:54 PM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji bahut khoob midblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



thnxx so much for ur appriciation madhu
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2009, 11:24:17 PM »
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Aslam saaHeb:

Aadaab arz hai!

aapki yeh umdaah Ghazal dil meiN utar ga'ii.. baRii Khuub Ghazal kahii hay aapne.. liKhate raheN yuuNhi.. mere dil se niklii hu'ii daad qabUl farmaayeN!

KhuSh raheN.... apnaa Khayaal raKheN


duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval









dhaval ji bhut bhut shukriya is zarra nawaazi ka aapki daad sar aankho par youn hi hosla badhaate rahiye

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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2009, 11:24:57 PM »
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Usual Smile Sach mea Dil mea utar jaaye.. aisi Umda Ghazal pesh ki hai.. Bahoot bahoot khoob Aslam ji



thxxxx alot sophi
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2009, 03:43:45 AM »
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Aaahaa... kitna accha likha hai aapne dear Aslam. Bahut accha laga ye gazal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Daad kabul kijiyega zarur  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2009, 08:53:14 PM »
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Aaahaa... kitna accha likha hai aapne dear Aslam. Bahut accha laga ye gazal  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Daad kabul kijiyega zarur  Usual Smile



thnxxxx so much roja dear
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«Reply #11 on: September 01, 2009, 11:05:56 AM »
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Good! keep writing
Jaanay kaha.n guzar rahi hoti
Zindagi agar aapki nahi hoti

Fariyaad o foghaa.n se kya hasil
Khamoshi mai bhi baat chupi hoti
 
Kaise aate johar manaane ke
Mujhse tu jo khafa na hui hoti

Waise to sab achay manzar hai.n
Tere saath inki alag dilkashi hoti

Sath tere hu.n to qeemti thehra
Wagarna kiski nazar padi hoti

mein hawaaon ke baandhta ghungru
agrchay Ruswaai ki fikr nahi hoti

kehte tum jo koi achi ghazal aslam
zaroor kisi ke dil mai utar gayi hoti

. Kuchh mere ashaar sun lijiye.
Wo nazar kyun idhar nahiN hoti
Zindagi ab basar nahiN hoti
Raat se ho gaya hai koi gunaah
Kyun abhi tak sahar nahiN hoti
Chaahta hooN miluN maiN GhazloN se
Koi surat magar nahiN hoti
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«Reply #12 on: September 01, 2009, 11:08:40 AM »
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bahut khoob doston....... kya khoob mehfsil sajai hai
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«Reply #13 on: September 01, 2009, 11:15:26 AM »
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wah aina ji
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aaina
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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2009, 09:39:41 AM »
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Good! keep writing. Kuchh mere ashaar sun lijiye.
Wo nazar kyun idhar nahiN hoti
Zindagi ab basar nahiN hoti
Raat se ho gaya hai koi gunaah
Kyun abhi tak sahar nahiN hoti
Chaahta hooN miluN maiN GhazloN se
Koi surat magar nahiN hoti

bhut bhut khoob waquif sahab, thnxx alot janaab
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