"" 5 August-2009:- 6 pm ""

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bhoole na bhulaye wo din
5 aug 2009 ki wo mnhus sham sad5
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kiya tha mene apni mohabbat ka jab izhaar
nikla tha wo din Raakhi ka tyohaar sad5

giri thi bizliyan dil pe hazaar
jab dia tha usne meri mohabt ko nakaar sad5

kaise samjhaaya tha khud ko mene, tab
jabki ho gaya tha mujhe 6 dino tak Bukhaar sad5

maut ka sakshatkaar thi wo zindgi 6 din
jeene ki kya chahat thi fir uske bin sad5

badi hi muskilo me pala tha ye nir
samjh hi nhi saka koi bhi hanste nir ke dil ka Peer sad5
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 11:10:47 AM »
hahaha..... good one nirala ji...
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 02:02:19 PM »
thanx Manzil-E-Ishq ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2011, 02:07:16 PM »
bht mast nirala ji.........
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2011, 02:24:06 PM »
nirala ji ........

bhagwan per bharosa rakho......

ek din sab sahi hoga.........

bas ab muje rona aa raha he.........muje akela chod do...... sad7 sad7 Feared. Feared. Feared.

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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2011, 02:28:06 PM »
hahaha---
mazaak hi to hai.
mazak me akele nhi sabke saath roya jaata hai yaara.
wese real fact ye hai ke uss din k pahle aur uss din ke baad zindgi me kabhi nhi roya:)
aur ye date time sab sachh hai Usual Smile
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aap dono ka thanx
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2011, 04:32:10 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2011, 04:37:00 PM »
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2011, 09:49:21 PM »
Bahut khoob nirala ji ye kavita mujhe kahiin se bhi mazakhiya nhi lagti bahut dard bhari hai...
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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2011, 09:49:53 PM »
Moved to appripriate section!

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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2011, 10:10:54 PM »
Bahut Accha Likha hai Bhai.. Har Baat ko Jaise Seedhe Kaagaz Par utaar diya ho aapne.. Nice Bro.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2011, 10:25:23 PM »
Geet:: aapne sahi samjha..
kamaal hai!! bilkul dard hi hai isme--aap ka jawaab nhi.
Mann bro:: lagaataar aapka dusra comnt dekh kar dil baag baag ho gaya Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2011, 10:30:34 PM »
Geet:: aapne sahi samjha..
kamaal hai!! bilkul dard hi hai isme--aap ka jawaab nhi.
Mann bro:: lagaataar aapka dusra comnt dekh kar dil baag baag ho gaya Usual Smile
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thanx

Jawab tou apka nhi nirala ji jo apne lafzo mein uljha kar sabko pata nhi lagne diya ki dard kahan hai aur mazak kahan..likhte rahiye.take care..
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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2011, 10:40:25 PM »
hmm --naakaam si kosis ki thi--
aapki paarkhi nazron ne pakad lia--
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bas wo din aur date aapke post ko parhkar dimaag me aa gaya tha--
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thanx ji--
take care aap bhi
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«Reply #14 on: March 02, 2011, 10:41:51 PM »
hmm --naakaam si kosis ki thi--
aapki paarkhi nazron ne pakad lia--
Usual SmileUsual Smile
bas wo din aur date aapke post ko parhkar dimaag me aa gaya tha--
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thanx ji--
take care aap bhi

Ji hota hai aur acha hi kiya jo dard ko lafzo mein utar diya warna khaas purani yado ka dard dil mein rehkar bada pareshan karta hai..t
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