Aa Jaa _____ {Angel}

by angel4u on June 20, 2009, 03:37:04 PM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 930 times)
angel4u
Guest

Zindagi Mein To Maut Ka Manzar Dikhaya Tha Tune,
Aa Ab Is Maut Mein Bhi Mujhe Maut Ka Ehsaas Dila Jaa,

Bana De Apni Qabr Apne Haathon Se Aaj Tu,
Ke Aaj Apna Aakhri Farz Bhi Tu Ada Kar Jaa,

Janaze Ko Mere Tu Le To Aaya Is Laashon Ki Mehfil Mein,
In Mehfilon Ki Raunak Tu Apni Dilkash Muskaan Se Badha Jaa,

Gazal Likhi Thi Maine Bahut Teri Mohabbat Mein,
Aaj Tu Meri Rukhsati Pe Koi Nagma Sunaa Jaa,

Is Sannatein Ki Chhanv Mein Rehna Hoga Kayi Barson Mujhe,
Ke Do Pal To Mere Pehlu Mein Baith, Mujhe Deewana Bana Jaa,

Bheegne De Apna Daaman Tu Mere AshQonki Barsaat Se,
Mere Qabr Ke Registaan Ko Aaj Tu Sehra Bana Jaa,

Ye Fiza Hai Kuch Aur Bhi Haseen, Ye Sama Hai Khushnuma,
Aa Is Sama Mein Apne Pyaar Ka Jhutha IQraar Kar Jaa,

Ye Kahan Se Aa Gayi Chand Saansein Mere Bejaan Seene Mein,
Aa De Dun Tujhe Ye Aakhri Saansein Bhi, Inhe Apne Seene Mein Chhupa Jaa...

Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
_____ by muneeb in Shayri-E-Dard
*_*Faslay......._____ *_* by fakharenaveed in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
{{Alwida}} _____ {Angel} by angel4u in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
Aankhon ki Nami _____ {Angel} by angel4u in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
Kaagaz Ki Kashti _____ {Angel} by angel4u in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2  All »
Sammual
Guest
«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2009, 07:47:05 PM »
Nice Work Angel Ji. Applause
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2009, 11:54:01 PM »
Wah wah Angel ji,wonderful creation,touching,
bahut khoob likhi aapne,excellent. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2009, 05:35:23 AM »
Thanks a lot Sam and Madhu Usual Smile
Logged
SARVESH RASTOGI
Guest
«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2009, 06:05:34 AM »
Khoob, bahut khoob Angel Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2009, 06:20:02 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Sarvesh JI...
Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2009, 04:03:13 PM »
Beautiful Work Angel.. Ak dum jakaas likha hai.. Fantastic.. Bahoot Khoob!
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2009, 05:28:20 PM »
Thank you so much RE... Usual Smile
Logged
Rajesh Harish
Guest
«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2009, 05:31:01 PM »
Bahut Khoob Angel Ji
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2009, 05:35:29 PM »
Thanks Rajesh Ji...
Logged
bekarar
Poetic Patrol
Yoindian Shayar
******

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
53 days, 9 hours and 51 minutes.

Posts: 3738
Member Since: Oct 2005


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2009, 05:39:25 PM »
bahoot khoob likha angel ..
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2009, 05:47:02 PM »
Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Ji, Aapka comment dekhke sach mein bahut achha laga Usual Smile

Thank you so much
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
April 24, 2024, 12:28:33 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]

by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]

[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]

[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]

[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.106 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8498 Real Poets and poetry admirer