{{Alwida}} _____ {Angel}

by angel4u on May 08, 2009, 03:21:56 AM
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Badi Aasaani Se Keh Diya Tha Usne Alwida Ek Roz,
Uski Ye Lafz Ne Jaise Meri Kaaynaat Ko Khaamosh Kar Diya,

Kehne Ko To Tha Ek Hi Lafz Ye "ALWIDA", Par Lagta Tha Jaise
Is Ek Lafz Ne Dunya Se Har Lafz Ka Maayna Mita Diya,

Dekhti Rahi Kuch Pal Ke Liye Uski Nazron Ko Main,
Kisi Dar Se Usne Phir Palkon Ko Aankhon Se Mila Diya,

Ho Gayi Meri Aankhon Ki Zubaan Khushk Patte Ki Tarah,
Jaane Kitne Khwaabon Ne Us Ek Lafz Se Apna Wajood Guma Diya,

Maine Palkon Ki Jhalar Mein Piro Liya Uska Wo Aakhri Lafz,
Ban Gaya Wo Kaanch Ka Tukda Jisne Mere Khwaabon Ko Kirchiyon Mein Badal Diya,

Dil Toot Ke Bikhar Gaya Mera Jaise Sahil Pe Samundar Ki Ret,
Ashqon Ke Toofanne Mujhe Lafzon Ka Kinara Na Naseeb Hone Diya,

Khamosh Thi Main, Khaamosh Hi Rahi, Na Jaane Meri Rooh Ne Sawal Kiya,
"Khush Rahoge Mere Bina?" Uski Har Dhadkan Ne Bade Guroor Se "HAAN" Keh Diya,

Sunke Uski "Haan" Khushi Hui Mujhe Bhi Ke Aakhir Khush To Hai Wo,
Uski Khushi Ke Liye Jaan Bhi De Dun, Ye Soch Ke Maine Bhi Alwida Keh Diya,

Ek Bholi Si Muskaan Uske Chehre Pe Aa Gayi Sunte Hi Mera "ALWIDA",
Jaise Uski Ye Muskaan Keh Rahi Ho "ALWIDA KEHNE KE LIYE SHUKRIYA"...
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2009, 03:22:23 AM »
Kitna Aasan Tha Uske Liye Ye Lafz "Alwida" Kehna,
Patjhad Ke Mausam Mein Sukhe Patton Ka Jaise Ped Se Jharna,

Ye Patte Bhi Uske Qadmon Ke Ronde Jaane Se The Zakhmi,
Uski Bewafayi Ne Jaise Lahoo-Luhan Kiya Mera Har Ek Sapna,

Sapne To Jalte Hi Hai, Palkon Pe Suraj Ki Pehli Kiran Padne Se,
Qasoor To Tha Hamara Hi, Khwaabon Mein Bana Liya Gharonda Apna...
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salma786
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2009, 03:27:52 AM »
Very very nice as usual Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2009, 04:10:40 AM »
Mind blowing ... as usual ... ak ak sher bahoot gehri baat keh raha hai...bahoot bahoot hi khubsurat si Dard ko pesh kiya hai..

tooo ....gud yaar
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2009, 05:20:44 AM »
kya khoob likha h angel ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2009, 05:26:20 AM »
WAH BAHOOT KHOOB Angel
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2009, 05:37:41 AM »
Wah Kya Baat Hai Angel Dear.. Waqai Bahut Pyaari Poem Hai.. really great words. Bahut Khoooob. Applause Applause


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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2009, 06:07:47 AM »
Bahaut khubsoorat likha hai Angel di... Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2009, 11:35:04 AM »
Bohot Khoob Angel, humesha ki tarah dil main utar jaane waala !
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2009, 04:07:54 PM »
Bahut bahut Khoob!! Jitni Tareef ki Jaaye,Utni kam Hai..Dil ko chuu Jaati hai yeh Kalam aapki..

Bahut Bahut khoob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hum Bhi Yehi Kehte Hai..

"Badi Asaani Se Usne Keh Diya Tha Alwida Ek Roz"
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2009, 01:58:08 PM »
Very very nice as usual Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Salma. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 10, 2009, 01:58:42 PM »
Mind blowing ... as usual ... ak ak sher bahoot gehri baat keh raha hai...bahoot bahoot hi khubsurat si Dard ko pesh kiya hai..

tooo ....gud yaar

Thanks Sweety Usual Smile achha laga ye padhke Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: May 10, 2009, 01:59:15 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waah ek aur nageena ye aapki kalam se nikla jo bus mahsus kar le koi to kuch der khamosh ho jaye..u r writing like an Angel..Angel ji..

Likha bhi to khamoshi se tha, khamosh saansien, khamosh dhadkan...
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«Reply #13 on: May 10, 2009, 01:59:45 PM »
kya khoob likha h angel ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Popzzz  Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: May 10, 2009, 02:00:12 PM »
WAH BAHOOT KHOOB Angel

Shukriya Di...
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