Kaagaz Ki Kashti _____ {Angel}

by angel4u on October 06, 2009, 02:54:47 AM
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Ek Kaagaz Ki Kashti Meri,
Bhanwaron Ki Khilli Udaati Hui,
Jab Bhi Har Leher Se Guzarti Thi,
Khud Pe Bahut Naaz Karti Thi,
Geele Samundaron Sang Gungunaati,
Na Koi Tamanna Thi Apna Maazi Se,
Khwaab Bas Kinaaron Sang Khelne Ki,

Apne Naseeb Ki Patwaar Ke Bina,
In Lehron Ke Dehekte Hue Jungal Mein,
Kitni Door Nikal Paati Wo,
Thi To Aakhir Kaagaz Ki Kashti,
Shayad Kitaab-e-Wafa Ka
Adhoora Koi Panna Tha Uska Wajood,
Dhundlaate Gaye Alfaazon Ke Moti Bhi,
Ek Leher Na Jaane Kis Jaanib Rasta Bhool Gayi,
Sama Liya Achanak Aagosh Mein Usko,
Simat Ke Reh Gayi Paaniyon Ki Tapish Mein,
Wo Ek Kaagaz Ki Kashti Meri...
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2009, 03:54:31 AM »
"Shayad Kitab-E-Wafa Ka
Adoora Koi Panha Tha Uska Wajood
Dhoondhlate Gaye Alfaazo Ke Moti Bhi
Ek Lehar Na Jane Kis Jaanib Rasta Bhool Gayi.."

bahut bahut Khooob Angel!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Gehre ehsaas Simte Hai Iss nazm Mein..

bahut Ache Huzena.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2009, 06:19:19 AM »
Wah excellent,bahut bahut khoob Angel ji very touching n mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Taasir siddiqui
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2009, 06:24:30 AM »
BOHOT ACCHI NAZM LIKHI HAIN AAP EK ACHE SHAYAR BAN SAKTE HO KUCH AUR APNI ORIGINAL NAZM ZAROOR LIKHNA, MAIN EK GHAZAL KA SHAYAR HUN AUR AKSAR KOI ACHI NAZM KI TALAASH MEIN REHTA HUN  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2009, 08:41:45 AM »
bahut bahut Khooob Angel!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Gehre ehsaas Simte Hai Iss nazm Mein..


And Khawaish ji apne bhi bahut accha likha h  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2009, 02:44:01 AM »
"Shayad Kitab-E-Wafa Ka
Adoora Koi Panha Tha Uska Wajood
Dhoondhlate Gaye Alfaazo Ke Moti Bhi
Ek Lehar Na Jane Kis Jaanib Rasta Bhool Gayi.."

bahut bahut Khooob Angel!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Gehre ehsaas Simte Hai Iss nazm Mein..

bahut Ache Huzena.. Thumbs UP


Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish Ji..

Aapka comment dekhke hamesha achha lagta hia,

Thanks for the support you have always extended to me. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2009, 02:44:32 AM »
Wah excellent,bahut bahut khoob Angel ji n Khwaish ji very touching n mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Madhu
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angel4u
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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2009, 02:46:14 AM »
BOHOT ACCHI NAZM LIKHI HAIN AAP EK ACHE SHAYAR BAN SAKTE HO KUCH AUR APNI ORIGINAL NAZM ZAROOR LIKHNA, MAIN EK GHAZAL KA SHAYAR HUN AUR AKSAR KOI ACHI NAZM KI TALAASH MEIN REHTA HUN  Applause

Shukriya Taasir siddiqui. Agar aap dekhenge to Yoindia pe meri kaafi original shayris bhi hia hi. you can read when you have time. cuz it is yoindia who has taught me the core poetries.
Thanks for appreciating.

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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2009, 02:49:38 AM »
bahut bahut Khooob Angel!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Gehre ehsaas Simte Hai Iss nazm Mein..


And Khawaish ji apne bhi bahut accha likha h  Thumbs UP

Thanks Rishi
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2009, 12:38:51 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: October 07, 2009, 12:48:22 PM »

waaah angel ji bahut hi badhiya...khuda kare isi hausle se apki kagaz ki kashti har tufan ko paar kare... icon_thumleft
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angel4u
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2009, 02:39:58 AM »
Thanks for these wishes BBL. Usual Smile
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Sammual
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2009, 08:32:47 AM »
Bahut Khoob Angel Ji. Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #13 on: October 09, 2009, 04:28:19 PM »
Ek Kaagaz Ki Kashti Meri,
Bhanwaron Ki Khilli Udaati Hui,
Jab Bhi Har Leher Se Guzarti Thi,
Khud Pe Bahut Naaz Karti Thi,
Geele Samundaron Sang Gungunaati,
Na Koi Tamanna Thi Apna Maazi Se,
Khwaab Bas Kinaaron Sang Khelne Ki,

Apne Naseeb Ki Patwaar Ke Bina,
In Lehron Ke Dehekte Hue Jungal Mein,
Kitni Door Nikal Paati Wo,
Thi To Aakhir Kaagaz Ki Kashti,
Shayad Kitaab-e-Wafa Ka
Adhoora Koi Panna Tha Uska Wajood,
Dhundlaate Gaye Alfaazon Ke Moti Bhi,
Ek Leher Na Jaane Kis Jaanib Rasta Bhool Gayi,
Sama Liya Achanak Aagosh Mein Usko,
Simat Ke Reh Gayi Paaniyon Ki Tapish Mein,
Wo Ek Kaagaz Ki Kashti Meri...


Wonderful creation dear hasina.. Applause Applause
Second para bahut khoob..... and those lines really touched my heart.
Good work dear. Keep up. Thumbs UP
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angel4u
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«Reply #14 on: October 11, 2009, 06:05:20 AM »
Bahut Khoob Angel Ji. Applause

Thanks Sam...
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