Aabaad na tha ye dil

by qqplus on November 21, 2010, 01:41:29 PM
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aabad na tha ye dil magar veeran nahi tha
tere khayalo me tha ulza magar hairaan nahi tha

kitne azeez the hum kitne kareebtar the
hamdard tha main tera par raazdan nahi tha

muze pata hai tu itni bhi nasamaz nahi thi
maine bhi kuch kaha tha; main bezubaan nahi tha

kitne duur the, apne khwab haqeeqaton se
kya apni zamee nahi thi, kya aasma nahi tha

kyu hamsafar na the hum, kyu hamnaseeb nahi the
kya main hamkhayaal nahi tha, kya tu hamzubaan nahi tha

koi dard bhari ghazal tuze humne bhi sunaai thi
fir der tak tera uspe koi bayaan nahi tha

tu bhi to jaanti hai ke manzil nazar me thi
fir bhi kehte rahe hum ke safar aasan nahi tha

teri aankhon ke aasu shayad ZIYAAD ke naam ke na ho
yu aankho se beh jane ka uska armaan nahi tha
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2010, 06:47:21 AM »
bahut khoob ziyad ji.....
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«Reply #2 on: November 22, 2010, 05:09:22 PM »
bahaut acchaa ziyad ji ...

kitne azeez the hum kitne kareebtar the
hamdard tha main tera par raazdan nahi tha

wah !
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«Reply #3 on: November 22, 2010, 05:23:42 PM »
wahhh wahhh wahhhh....
ziyaad ji bht hi umda likha hai aapne.....yunhi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2010, 05:29:59 PM »
bahoot umda likha aapne qqplus sahab.....har sher bahoot khoob
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2010, 09:18:39 PM »
bahut badhiya likha hai aapne...

Intezar !
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«Reply #6 on: November 23, 2010, 03:55:07 PM »
Shuqriya!

aab sab hi ka teh-e-dil se shuqriya.
bahot acchha laga ke aapne pasand kiya, saraaha.

shuqriya.
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