AB MUSKURANA BHOOL GAYE...

by khwaish on May 19, 2008, 08:27:17 PM
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Tujhse door kya huwe,Hum muskurana bhool gaye
Zinda to hai par jeene ki ada bhool gaye...

Chalte-Chalte manzil par pahunch hi jaate "KHWAISH"
par Aakhiri Mukhaam par hi the ke,
Manzil ka Pata bhool gaye...

Na jaane kis baat par hum rote rahe yuh tadap-tadap kar,
Dekh meri deewangi,aaj rone ki wajeh bhi bhool gaye...

Bewafai ka ilzaam de gaya woh shaks kuch iss tarah,
ke ab Waffa kya hai??? Waffa ke maayne bhi bhool gaye...

Tujhse Door jaane ka kabhi socha bhi na tha
par ab jo door hue,tere paas vaapas aane ka raasta bhool gaye...

kuch beete hue palo ne diye hai chot kuch is tarah,
ke ab iss jism mein kuch ehsaas zinda hai bhi ya nahi,bhool gaye...

Band palkon se tujhe aaj bhi dekhta rehta hai "KHWAISH"
Jaanta hoon, kuch haasil nahi iss dard-e-safar mein,
par anjaam ke khauf se khud ko darana bhool gaye...

gham aur dard se rishta kuch yuh jam sa gaya hai apna
ke ab muskurana bhool gaye.....
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2008, 08:48:48 PM »
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KHWAISH JI, Apki sabhi rachnaye zindagi ki suchi bhawnao se jurri hoti hai. is baar bhi bahoot hi achi rachna ko anjaam diya hai apne. ek ek shabd dil ko chuta hua.. yah lines to bar bar pardi hai maine...

Na jaane kis baat par hum rote rahe yuh tadap-tadap kar,
Dekh meri deewangi,aaj rone ki wajeh bhi bhool gaye...

Bewafai ka ilzaam de gaya woh shaks kuch iss tarah,
ke ab Waffa kya hai??? Waffa ke maayne bhi bhool gaye...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2008, 08:56:42 PM »
pehle ki lines bahut aachi lagi khaeaish per last ka shayed match nhi ho paya.. bt. lovely one.

jub se tum gaye ho tumhari galiyon mein jaate nhi.
chot deti hai her baat, kisi baat per muskurate nhi
khud ke saamne khud ko tadap ker dekha hai marte.
ki koi hadse ab humko dehlate nhi.
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2008, 12:10:19 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 19, 2008, 08:48:48 PM
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KHWAISH JI, Apki sabhi rachnaye zindagi ki suchi bhawnao se jurri hoti hai. is baar bhi bahoot hi achi rachna ko anjaam diya hai apne. ek ek shabd dil ko chuta hua.. yah lines to bar bar pardi hai maine...

Na jaane kis baat par hum rote rahe yuh tadap-tadap kar,
Dekh meri deewangi,aaj rone ki wajeh bhi bhool gaye...

Bewafai ka ilzaam de gaya woh shaks kuch iss tarah,
ke ab Waffa kya hai??? Waffa ke maayne bhi bhool gaye...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob!!

bahut bahut shukriya poojaji...sach kahoon to hairaangi hoti hai ki log idhar-udhar ki baaton ke liye waqt nikaal lete hai par kisi ki likhi hui nazm padhne ke liye unke paas waqt nahi hota...

aapne padha aur phir saraha uss ke bahut bahut shukriya..umeed karta hoon aap hamesha hamara likha padhte rahe...shukriya
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2008, 12:15:22 AM »
Quote from: BHONDU on May 19, 2008, 08:56:42 PM
pehle ki lines bahut aachi lagi khaeaish per last ka shayed match nhi ho paya.. bt. lovely one.

jub se tum gaye ho tumhari galiyon mein jaate nhi.
chot deti hai her baat, kisi baat per muskurate nhi
khud ke saamne khud ko tadap ker dekha hai marte.
ki koi hadse ab humko dehlate nhi.


thanx a lot bhonduji for appreciating...

aur bahut khoob..bahut acha likha hai.
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2008, 12:17:06 AM »
Nice one Khwaish !
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2008, 12:24:07 AM »
Zindagi se door ho kar bhi,
Kuch log saath rehte hain

Dil se nahin nikalta koi
Log yunhi to nahin kehte hain !
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2008, 12:30:59 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 20, 2008, 12:24:07 AM
Zindagi se door ho kar bhi,
Kuch log saath rehte hain

Dil se nahin nikalta koi
Log yunhi to nahin kehte hain !


thak gaye hum bhi intezaar karte-karte
roye hazaar baar khud se takraar karte-karte
shikayat yeh nahi ke door hai woh humse,
par ab toot se gaye hai hum,
un par aitbaar karte-karte...
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«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2008, 12:49:39 AM »
Bohot hi khoob Khwaish...!!

Ban gaya hai wo raqeeb, magar dushman-e-jaan hai,
Banaya naya aashiaan usne, mera to wo jahan hai,
Intezaar ki shama bujh chuki ek muddat se
Ragon main ab bhi magar, wo khoon ban ke ravaan hai
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«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2008, 08:39:43 AM »
Bohot Khoob... Sab ne bohot achha likha he.   Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2008, 11:11:08 AM »
REALLY, TRUE HEART FEELINGS,
U WRITE KHAWISH JI....
CELMIRA AAPNE BHI BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA,
EXCELLENT WORK....
KEEP IT UP....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2008, 11:50:32 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 20, 2008, 12:24:07 AM
Zindagi se door ho kar bhi,
Kuch log saath rehte hain

Dil se nahin nikalta koi
Log yunhi to nahin kehte hain !


bahut khoob!!!
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2008, 11:51:46 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 20, 2008, 12:49:39 AM
Bohot hi khoob Khwaish...!!

Ban gaya hai wo raqeeb, magar dushman-e-jaan hai,
Banaya naya aashiaan usne, mera to wo jahan hai,
Intezaar ki shama bujh chuki ek muddat se
Ragon main ab bhi magar, wo khoon ban ke ravaan hai

bahut bahut khoob celmira..bahut acha likha hai
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2008, 11:53:08 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on May 20, 2008, 08:39:43 AM
Bohot Khoob... Sab ne bohot achha likha he.   Applause

bahut bahut sukriya randheri saab!! aap bhi kuch likhte to acha lagta
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2008, 11:54:08 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on May 20, 2008, 11:11:08 AM
REALLY, TRUE HEART FEELINGS,
U WRITE KHAWISH JI....
CELMIRA AAPNE BHI BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA,
EXCELLENT WORK....
KEEP IT UP....
BY. K.SHAEL

bahut bahut shukriya shaelji..
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