Bina.... Yunhi...........................AD

by anjaan dharkan on October 31, 2009, 12:23:42 AM
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Bina paani jaise mahchli hai tadrapti,
Yunhi bina khanjar dil hai zakhmi...

Bina paron k jaise parinda gir jaye,
Yunhi ek hee pal me har khushi muhjse phir jaye.

Bina baaghon k jaise muhrjaen sub phool,
Yunhi mil jaen mere aansun aur dhool.

Bina fiza k jaise insaan bejaan hai,
Yunhi mere liye mar mitna jeene se ahsaan hai.

Bina taaron k jaise chand bhuja,
Yunhi mere kaanon me mera rona gunja.

Bina saaye jaise banda peehka,
Yunhi gir gir maine sambhalna seehka.

Bina tufaan jaise qayamat dhalna,
Yunhi subne mere zakhmon pe namak hai malna.

Bina barsaat jaise ghum barse,
Yunhi dil sukun ki ahat ko tarse.

Bina matam jaise pachtawa hota hai,
Yunhi pal pal mera bitaana hota hai.

Bina raha hum raste se guzar rahe hain,
Yunhi pal pal khud hee me mar rahe hain.

Bina sahaara jaise safar hai katt raha,
Yunhi mazeed hisso me dil hai batt raha.

Bina maekh jaise deewar se putla gir k toot gaya,
Yunhi shayad mera rab muhjse rhoot gaya.

Bina maange, ya rab, mere hisse ki gard mita de,
Yunhi ub tu muhj pe se saara dard hata de~~~



 


Please, duwaon me shaamil rahkiyega, sub loug

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«Reply #1 on: October 31, 2009, 12:35:46 AM »
this didnt make much sense, but jo zehan me aata gaya, jo kaifiyat utri, maine bayan karne ki koshish ki.... na pasand aye, tho suggestions zaroor dijiyega.

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«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2009, 09:30:35 AM »
Very Well attempt.. Bahoot bareeki se parkha hai cheeso ko aur unn sab baareeki ko bakoobi lafzo mea utara hai... bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: October 31, 2009, 09:50:58 AM »
nice one but it cud have been better.
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«Reply #4 on: October 31, 2009, 12:45:41 PM »
Bahut khub likha hai aapne AD ji....jaisa sophi ji ne kha bahut gehrai mein likha hai aapne.....bahut acche  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2009, 01:12:09 PM »
Nice and excellent AD Ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2009, 06:19:08 PM »
Sidraah sis Bahut Pyaara Likha hai.. Bahut Hi Gaharaai se Mehsooos kar Alfaazon Ko Sajaaya hai.. Mujhe Bahut Pasans aaye aapki Yeh Peshkash.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2009, 04:42:23 PM »
Allah Tumhe Sukoon Bakshe,.

Aameen,.
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«Reply #8 on: November 01, 2009, 07:33:13 PM »
thank u ever1
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