"" chandni ki syah raato me ""

by nirala on February 28, 2011, 10:07:24 PM
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  na koi dawa kaam aati na
     duaon se kaam chalta
      har mausam u hi ab
           ptjhd sa lgta

     so jau kahi duur neele
         aasmaan ke niche
moond lu palkon ko ab kuch u
  dhabbe ansuo ke mitt jaaye
 khudi se duur khuda se duur
   kuch aisi ho raat ghani koi
 khaab bhi na rahe palkon ko
                bheeche
   wo jaane kaun hai chupa
              ghatao me
 ek saaya sa dikh raha chandi
        ki syah rato me
wo apna hi ruh sa he taiyar
mittne ko ab kisi ki panahon me
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2011, 11:39:20 PM »
Bahut khoob nirala ji...
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 12:25:57 PM »
bahut bahut badiya niralaji....

kya baat hai....  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2011, 12:28:55 PM »
bahot hi khubsurat feelings likhi he nirala ji.......

maja aa gaya....so much touchy post......
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 10:24:52 PM »
Bahut Khub Nirala JI
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2012, 12:51:48 PM »
khub
aapki tarah ye bhi bahut nirali hai
padke dil mei cha gai haryali hai
  na koi dawa kaam aati na
     duaon se kaam chalta
      har mausam u hi ab
           ptjhd sa lgta

     so jau kahi duur neele
         aasmaan ke niche
moond lu palkon ko ab kuch u
  dhabbe ansuo ke mitt jaaye
 khudi se duur khuda se duur
   kuch aisi ho raat ghani koi
 khaab bhi na rahe palkon ko
                bheeche
   wo jaane kaun hai chupa
              ghatao me
 ek saaya sa dikh raha chandi
        ki syah rato me
wo apna hi ruh sa he taiyar
mittne ko ab kisi ki panahon me
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2012, 09:31:18 PM »
pataa nhi mai kya kya likhe betha hu

thanq Manojj
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2012, 09:33:56 PM »
nice to read your creation Nirala ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2012, 07:14:13 AM »
thanq suman59
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