Chup ka sannatta

by Pooja on April 02, 2008, 02:45:50 AM
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Pooja
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«Reply #15 on: April 02, 2008, 09:28:52 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on April 02, 2008, 02:00:01 PM
bahoot aache pooja ji wah  Applause

bahhoot bahoot shukaria baadal ji!!!

Quote from: aarzoomehek on April 02, 2008, 02:57:34 PM
bohot acha likha hai pooja..keep sharing such beautiful poems..Usual Smile

Thanks aarzoomehek!! app bhi bahoot acha likhati hai.. kuch yaha bhi ho jaata !!

Quote from: khwaish on April 02, 2008, 08:53:20 PM
Kya baat hai!!! bahut khooob pooja..bahut acha likha hai aapne. Applause

Khwaish ji baat tab jayada banati jab apki taraf se bhi hume kuch padne ko milta!! bahoot bahoot shukaria ki apko yah pasand ayya!!!

Quote from: Celmira on April 02, 2008, 08:55:34 PM
Bohot khoob Pooja, Zakhmola, Bhawna and Harash !!

Thanks Celmira !!!
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«Reply #16 on: April 02, 2008, 11:48:39 PM »
Shukriyaa^h Pooja and Celmira..........

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Bahoot bahoot shukaria Harsh ji!! Apne itna kuch kaha meri kavita aor mere liye, dil se apka shukaria!!
Khuda her ek ko salamat rakhein….

Bahoot hi simple shabdo main apne bahoot gahari lines likhi hai… good creation Harsh ji!!

Wo ret hi hoga, tabhi mera pyar kahin najar nahi atta hai
Jitna bhi shiddat se chahu, us per asar nazar nahi atta hai

Zindagi ki mrigchika mai, her khayal bhatak kahin jaata hai
Chup ka yah sannatta, khoon ke ansuo se rula jaata hai

Pooja ji ye sab aapki badoulat hi toh hai...aapne achha likha so meri kalam mazboor hui na likhne ko.....sada khush raheiN....aapki likhi hui ye tehreer naya rang liye hue hai.....ye ishq ki tasweer hi alag hai dost.....

Ye ishq hakeekat hai afsana nahiN hai
Iss dard se koi bhi anjana nahiN hai.

Woh kon sa dil hai,jahaN dilbhar nahiN rehta
Woh kon sa der hai jahaN but-khana nahiN hai.

Jo tumko kahooN apna toh ouroN ko kya kahooN
Is gaaNv maiN koi bhi be-gana nahiN hai.


Harash
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: April 02, 2008, 11:51:08 PM »
bahoot bahoot shukaria Harsh ji!! bahoot hi acha likha hai aor bahoot hi sahi kaha hai apne apni lavita main..

Jo tumko kahooN apna toh ouroN ko kya kahooN
Is gaaNv maiN koi bhi be-gana nahiN hai.
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #18 on: April 03, 2008, 12:39:36 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 02, 2008, 11:51:08 PM
bahoot bahoot shukaria Harsh ji!! bahoot hi acha likha hai aor bahoot hi sahi kaha hai apne apni lavita main..

Jo tumko kahooN apna toh ouroN ko kya kahooN
Is gaaNv maiN koi bhi be-gana nahiN hai.

pasandagii ke liye sshukriyaa^h Pooja ji........khush raheiN
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search2love008
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«Reply #19 on: April 07, 2008, 06:46:44 PM »
 tearyeyed
tujhe moohabat jatane ke laakh bahane kiye hai may ne.
tere najdik ane ke laakh bahane kiye hai may ne..
tujhe khabar bhi na hogi ki may bhatak ta hoo..
teri galiyo se hoke aaj bhi goojarta hoo.
wafa ki khai thi kasme jo us jama ne me..
jo tha tera aasik kisi jama ne me
wo mar ke ho gaya fana ter thikane me..
may kar ke yaad tujhe aaj bhi tadap ta hoo.
may banke rooh abbhi tere aasiya se hi gojarta hoo..
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: April 07, 2008, 08:03:46 PM »
wow bahoot khoob search2love008!! bahoot hi dil se apne ek ek line likhi hai... simple but deep!!

Apka Yoindi amai sawagat hai!! Asha hai apki aor bhi rachanye padne ko milegi!!

yah line sto dil ko chu gai hai...
may kar ke yaad tujhe aaj bhi tadap ta hoo.
may banke rooh abbhi tere aasiya se hi gojarta hoo..
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #21 on: April 08, 2008, 12:29:35 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 02, 2008, 09:01:07 PM
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 02, 2008, 06:20:09 AM
wah pooja bohot achchha likha he, sannate ko cheerta huwa har sher he, "boleto jhkaas"

bahoot bahoot shukaria Sayyid Randeri ji!!

chup ka sannatta, kaya halchal mucha jaata hai
dikhta kuch bhi nahi, aor sabkuch badal jaata hai!!

Sundar Ati Sundar!

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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: April 08, 2008, 01:32:42 AM »
wah kaya baat hai Sayyid Randeri ji!!

bahoot sahi kaha apne!!
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #23 on: April 09, 2008, 12:36:39 AM »
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: April 09, 2008, 02:52:20 AM »
Bohot khoob Harash, Search and Sayyid
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Talat
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«Reply #25 on: April 09, 2008, 11:58:34 PM »


Khamoshiyon ki bhi apni sada hoti hai
Unko sunna bhi magar ek saza hoti hai

Gila kya karen teri jafaparasti ka
Lab pe ab bhi tere liye dua hoti hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #26 on: April 10, 2008, 12:16:00 AM »
bahoot khoob celmira
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Titanic26
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«Reply #27 on: April 10, 2008, 12:24:00 AM »
sannate ko bhi shayad chuppi se ghutan hoti hai,
tabhi to sannate me saai-saai ki aawaz hoti hai.
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #28 on: April 10, 2008, 01:02:16 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on April 09, 2008, 11:58:34 PM


Khamoshiyon ki bhi apni sada hoti hai
Unko sunna bhi magar ek saza hoti hai

Gila kya karen teri jafaparasti ka
Lab pe ab bhi tere liye dua hoti hai

wah celmira ji bohot hi behtreen likha he aapne.  Applause  Applause  Applause

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manu1979
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«Reply #29 on: April 15, 2008, 01:17:36 AM »
wwh pooja tum abhi tak is site se joodi ho, mai pahele akshar tumhe padhata  thaa, shayad ab to tumhe yaad bhi nahi hogaa,
achaa laga tumhe yaha dekh kar, tumaare kavitaao ne to kaafe tarakki kar lii hai

achaa likha hai
yunhi likhati raho
manu
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