Chup ka sannatta

by Pooja on April 02, 2008, 02:45:50 AM
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«Reply #45 on: January 02, 2009, 03:50:59 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 02, 2009, 02:50:58 PM
Oh Ho, Kya Baat Hai Shally Partner,.
Tussi To Great Ho Ji,.
Kamaal Da Likhaa Hai,.

Shukriya Azeem,

Shally.
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«Reply #46 on: January 02, 2009, 03:52:34 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 02, 2009, 03:01:06 PM
Tere Shehar Mein Aakar Tanhaaiyon Ka Ehsaas Hua,.
Yun To Tanhaa Hi Tha Main, Magar Khush Tha,.

______________________________-Jaanasheen-

Very good lines azeem,

Tere jaane ke baad muskurahte to kya tanhaiyaan
bhi khamoshi ke sanatte me gehraane lagi...
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«Reply #47 on: January 02, 2009, 04:15:31 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 02, 2008, 02:45:50 AM
Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai

Bolti hai yaadein teri, madham madham samay ho jaata hai
Chup ke us sannate main, ek karwan guzar jaata hai

Sunta hoga yah sannatta tu  bhi to kabhi kabhi
Sochu yahi apne man main, kaya tere man mai atta hai

Chup tum, chup main, Juda yah raahein
Door talak raahon main yah sannatta bikhar jaata hai

Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai!!


Bahut accha likha hai Pooja di
kamaal hai !!!
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«Reply #48 on: January 02, 2009, 04:46:57 PM »
Quote from: ANAAM on January 02, 2009, 03:47:28 PM
Ye kaisi udasi ye kaisi mayusi hai
Kyu tune tanhai me jeene ki thani hai
Hain sangi sathi tu nazar utha k to dekh
Milenge Hamsafar tu do kadam chal k to dekh

Ye nay varsh ki nai subah aai hai
Sannato ko todti pakshiyon ne nai dhun gaai hai
Ham sab ne khoob  khusia mannai hai
Kyu tere chahre per muskan nahi aai hai

SUNA THA HAMNE Wakht ilaz he zakhmo ka
Aur kitna wakht chahiye nay beej bone ko ?
Padha tha kahin per hamne....
Kaun intezaar karta hai balo k sar hone tak....

ANAAM tearyeyed icon_silent

Waah Ji Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aapne,.
Nice One,.

Aye Dost Kya Baat Hai, Tera Mizaaj Itna Ghazadaa Kyun Hai..
Yahaan To Dard Bhi Baant Liya Karte Hai, Tu Sabse Judaa Kyun Hai,.

Main Bhi Dard Ke Maaron Mein Se Hoon, Phir Bhi Muskuraata Hoon,.
Tu Chup Chup Kar Haal Sunaata, Main Dil Kholke Sunaata Hoon,.

Aa Hum Sab Milkar, Dard Ka Kaheen Door Basera Kardein,.
Is Sooni Zindagi Mein, Aa Milkar Khushi Ka Sawera Kardein,.

______________________________-Azeem-
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«Reply #49 on: January 02, 2009, 06:40:25 PM »
wah wah kya likha hai.....
Dard ko bhulne ka raasta dikhaya hai
naya beej bo kar..kuchh naya ugaya hai
Bhulte ho dost, jo jami jal jaati hai
Wahan kuchh ugana, lohe k chane chabana hai..
Dard ko bhulana,ye nahi koi kaam aasan..

surendra "surya'
Quote from: ANAAM on January 02, 2009, 03:47:28 PM
Ye kaisi udasi ye kaisi mayusi hai
Kyu tune tanhai me jeene ki thani hai
Hain sangi sathi tu nazar utha k to dekh
Milenge Hamsafar tu do kadam chal k to dekh

Ye nay varsh ki nai subah aai hai
Sannato ko todti pakshiyon ne nai dhun gaai hai
Ham sab ne khoob  khusia mannai hai
Kyu tere chahre per muskan nahi aai hai

SUNA THA HAMNE Wakht ilaz he zakhmo ka
Aur kitna wakht chahiye nay beej bone ko ?
Padha tha kahin per hamne....
Kaun intezaar karta hai balo k sar hone tak....

ANAAM tearyeyed icon_silent
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«Reply #50 on: January 03, 2009, 01:14:40 AM »
Quote from: diya786 on January 02, 2009, 04:15:31 PM
Bahut accha likha hai Pooja di
kamaal hai !!!

Apko pasand ayya, acha laga mujhe. shukaria Diya.
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«Reply #51 on: January 03, 2009, 02:07:15 AM »
Quote from: ANAAM on January 02, 2009, 03:47:28 PM
Ye kaisi udasi ye kaisi mayusi hai
Kyu tune tanhai me jeene ki thani hai
Hain sangi sathi tu nazar utha k to dekh
Milenge Hamsafar tu do kadam chal k to dekh

Ye nay varsh ki nai subah aai hai
Sannato ko todti pakshiyon ne nai dhun gaai hai
Ham sab ne khoob  khusia mannai hai
Kyu tere chahre per muskan nahi aai hai

SUNA THA HAMNE Wakht ilaz he zakhmo ka
Aur kitna wakht chahiye nay beej bone ko ?
Padha tha kahin per hamne....
Kaun intezaar karta hai balo k sar hone tak....

ANAAM tearyeyed icon_silent


shukaria Anaam ji... kai baar apki yah kavita parri.. bahoot sahi kaha hai apne... magar

tanhaai ban gai mukaddar, maine nahi kuch thana hai
hota jo bas main mere, na hota phir yah afsaana hai

hai sangi sathi sabhi, tabhi to sansein hai chal rahi
warna is zaindagi ka, kaha koi rahta thikana hai

naya hai saal, nai hogi baatein is saal main bhi
magar kaya karu, yah dard bhi utna he purana hai

suna humne bhi tha ki waqat ke sath bhar jaate hai zakham
usse bhoolane ko, na jaane, kitna waqat aor beetana hai

intzaar hua zakhmi, umeendein bhi ab to kho chuki
rooh mar chuki kab se, ab to bas yah zisam chalaana hai
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«Reply #52 on: January 03, 2009, 02:11:29 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 02, 2009, 04:46:57 PM
Waah Ji Waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Aapne,.
Nice One,.

Aye Dost Kya Baat Hai, Tera Mizaaj Itna Ghazadaa Kyun Hai..
Yahaan To Dard Bhi Baant Liya Karte Hai, Tu Sabse Judaa Kyun Hai,.

Main Bhi Dard Ke Maaron Mein Se Hoon, Phir Bhi Muskuraata Hoon,.
Tu Chup Chup Kar Haal Sunaata, Main Dil Kholke Sunaata Hoon,.

Aa Hum Sab Milkar, Dard Ka Kaheen Door Basera Kardein,.
Is Sooni Zindagi Mein, Aa Milkar Khushi Ka Sawera Kardein,.

______________________________-Azeem-


bahoot khoob Lil bro
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«Reply #53 on: January 03, 2009, 02:15:22 AM »
Quote from: smardia on January 02, 2009, 06:40:25 PM
wah wah kya likha hai.....
Dard ko bhulne ka raasta dikhaya hai
naya beej bo kar..kuchh naya ugaya hai
Bhulte ho dost, jo jami jal jaati hai
Wahan kuchh ugana, lohe k chane chabana hai..
Dard ko bhulana,ye nahi koi kaam aasan..

surendra "surya'

wah kay abaat hai.... apki likhi yah do line bahoot pasand aai:

Bhulte ho dost, jo jami jal jaati hai
Wahan kuchh ugana, lohe k chane chabana hai..
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«Reply #54 on: January 03, 2009, 03:40:17 AM »
shukriya didi,.
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«Reply #55 on: January 03, 2009, 02:03:27 PM »
Apko pasand aayi,acha laga mujhe. shukaria Poojaji....

kisi kavi ki ye pankti yaad ho aai...
Wo kya jaane peer parai,jiske paav kabhi fati n bivai...

surendra mardia
Quote from: Pooja on January 03, 2009, 02:15:22 AM
wah kay abaat hai.... apki likhi yah do line bahoot pasand aai:

Bhulte ho dost, jo jami jal jaati hai
Wahan kuchh ugana, lohe k chane chabana hai..
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«Reply #56 on: January 03, 2009, 02:09:53 PM »
Chaha tha ki khushi se gujar jaaye ham ishq ki galiyon se,
Aabhi kadamo ne shuruaat hi ki thi ki chaaro taraf chup ke
sanaate chaa gaye,
Haste hai aab kabhi khud par to kabhi hota hai malal tujhse
chootne ka,
Dekh na ham chalte chalte aaj zindagi ke aakhri manzil tak
aa gaye...
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«Reply #57 on: January 03, 2009, 02:49:42 PM »
Bahut Acche Doston..POOJA JI, AZEEM Bhai, SMARDIA, ANAAM JI, Aur K.SHAEL Sabhi Ne Bahut accha Likha Hai.. Applause

Daad Kubool Karen..!!

**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #58 on: January 03, 2009, 03:04:06 PM »
Shukriya Mann ji,

Aacha lagta agar aap bhi kuch saath likhte,

Shally.
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«Reply #59 on: January 03, 2009, 03:48:01 PM »
"Aabhi kadamo ne shuruaat hi ki thi ki....
zindagi ke aakhri manzil tak aa gaye..."--shally
ishq ki galiyon me ye tera kaisa safar..
Pata hi nahi chala kahan shuru kahan khatam...

Quote from: k.shael on January 03, 2009, 02:09:53 PM
is
Chaha tha ki khushi se gujar jaaye ham ishq ki galiyon se,
Aabhi kadamo ne shuruaat hi ki thi ki chaaro taraf chup ke
sanaate chaa gaye,
Haste hai aab kabhi khud par to kabhi hota hai malal tujhse
chootne ka,
Dekh na ham chalte chalte aaj zindagi ke aakhri manzil tak
aa gaye...
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