Chup ka sannatta

by Pooja on April 02, 2008, 02:45:50 AM
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Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai

Bolti hai yaadein teri, madham madham samay ho jaata hai
Chup ke us sannate main, ek karwan guzar jaata hai

Sunta hoga yah sannatta tu  bhi to kabhi kabhi
Sochu yahi apne man main, kaya tere man mai atta hai

Chup tum, chup main, Juda yah raahein
Door talak raahon main yah sannatta bikhar jaata hai

Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai!!
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2008, 06:20:09 AM »
wah pooja bohot achchha likha he, sannate ko cheerta huwa har sher he, "boleto jhkaas"
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2008, 10:54:18 AM »
kehne ko sannata khamosh hota hai puja
par ye wo tees paida karta hai jo sahi nahi jaati

khamoshi se is tarah chubta hai sannata
ki dard ki aah bhi bhari nahi jaati

is sannate ki gunj dilati hai yaad unki
jinke paas hamari koi b sadaa nahi pohuchti
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2008, 11:57:25 AM »
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Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai

Bolti hai yaadein teri, madham madham samay ho jaata hai
Chup ke us sannate main, ek karwan guzar jaata hai

bahut khoob didi..  Applause
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zakhmola
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2008, 12:10:54 PM »
Aahat suno tum bhi zara
unke chhup ke sannate ki
wohh jab-jab chup rehti hai
Sannata goonjta hai Dilon mein Dhadkan bankar...
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #5 on: April 02, 2008, 12:20:12 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 02, 2008, 02:45:50 AM
Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai

Bolti hai yaadein teri, madham madham samay ho jaata hai
Chup ke us sannate main, ek karwan guzar jaata hai

Sunta hoga yah sannatta tu  bhi to kabhi kabhi
Sochu yahi apne man main, kaya tere man mai atta hai

Chup tum, chup main, Juda yah raahein
Door talak raahon main yah sannatta bikhar jaata hai

Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai!!


Tumhara bhi jawaab nahiN pooja...A fantastic post...tumhari har jagah shirkat hi tumhaari pehchaan hai pooja....tumhaare jazbaatoN ka silsila isi tarah bazm maiN goonjta rahe our iski rounaq badti rahe...yahi darkaar hai aapse....khuda aapko salamat rakhe....

Woh ret ka maidaan bhi samander nazer ata hai
Woh chup ka sannata ankhoN maiN nazer ata hai

Log chup rehte haiN kutchh kehte bhi toh nahiN
Par har lamha iljaamoN se bhara nazer aata hai.

Ye yaadoN ka marusthal jahaN bhi nazer ata hai,
WahiN sard daayoN maiN  aashiyaN nazer aata hai

Harash
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baadal102
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«Reply #6 on: April 02, 2008, 02:00:01 PM »
bahoot aache pooja ji wah  Applause
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aarzoomehek
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«Reply #7 on: April 02, 2008, 02:57:34 PM »
bohot acha likha hai pooja..keep sharing such beautiful poems..Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2008, 08:53:20 PM »
Kya baat hai!!! bahut khooob pooja..bahut acha likha hai aapne. Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2008, 08:55:34 PM »
Bohot khoob Pooja, Zakhmola, Bhawna and Harash !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: April 02, 2008, 09:01:07 PM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on April 02, 2008, 06:20:09 AM
wah pooja bohot achchha likha he, sannate ko cheerta huwa har sher he, "boleto jhkaas"

bahoot bahoot shukaria Sayyid Randeri ji!!

chup ka sannatta, kaya halchal mucha jaata hai
dikhta kuch bhi nahi, aor sabkuch badal jaata hai!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: April 02, 2008, 09:05:00 PM »
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on April 02, 2008, 10:54:18 AM
kehne ko sannata khamosh hota hai puja
par ye wo tees paida karta hai jo sahi nahi jaati

khamoshi se is tarah chubta hai sannata
ki dard ki aah bhi bhari nahi jaati

is sannate ki gunj dilati hai yaad unki
jinke paas hamari koi b sadaa nahi pohuchti


Bhawna, apki kavitaye bahoot bhawanao se bharpoor hoti hai!! bahoot acha lgta hai apko pard kar!! bahoot hi achi lines likhi hai apne!! Good creation!!

Khamosh sannatta apne hi dil ko torr jaata hai
Kahta hai wo, jo khud se suna nahi jaata hai

Zakhamo ko na jaane kaha tah kured jaata hai
Apna hi sannatta, apni jaan le jaata hai

Chupke se na jaane kab yaadon ka kafila mil jaata hai
Chup ka yah sannatta, dard-e-dastaan ban jaata hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: April 02, 2008, 09:07:37 PM »
Quote from: Roja on April 02, 2008, 11:57:25 AM
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Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai

Bolti hai yaadein teri, madham madham samay ho jaata hai
Chup ke us sannate main, ek karwan guzar jaata hai

bahut khoob didi..  Applause


bahoot bahoot shukaria Roja!!


Apne hi sannatto se ladti main rahti hu
Socho mai na jaane kaya kaya bunati rahti hu

Door talak ek sooni raah se guzarti rahti hu
Chup ke sannatto ko sunati rahti hu!!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: April 02, 2008, 09:10:32 PM »
Quote from: zakhmola on April 02, 2008, 12:10:54 PM
Aahat suno tum bhi zara
unke chhup ke sannate ki
wohh jab-jab chup rehti hai
Sannata goonjta hai Dilon mein Dhadkan bankar...
Chup ka sannatta, dhadkano main halchal muchata hai
Bhoole hue zakhamo se, unki yaad dilata hai

Bheega bheega sa ankhio main barsaat laata hai
Chup ka yah sannatta, ek tufaan le atta hai!!

bahoot khoob kaha zakhmola ji!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: April 02, 2008, 09:25:15 PM »
Quote from: Harash Mahajan on April 02, 2008, 12:20:12 PM
Quote from: Pooja on April 02, 2008, 02:45:50 AM
Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai

Bolti hai yaadein teri, madham madham samay ho jaata hai
Chup ke us sannate main, ek karwan guzar jaata hai

Sunta hoga yah sannatta tu  bhi to kabhi kabhi
Sochu yahi apne man main, kaya tere man mai atta hai

Chup tum, chup main, Juda yah raahein
Door talak raahon main yah sannatta bikhar jaata hai

Chup ka sannatta bhi kaya kaya yaad dilata hai
Nazar ke samne se na jaane kaya kaya guzar jaata hai!!


Tumhara bhi jawaab nahiN pooja...A fantastic post...tumhari har jagah shirkat hi tumhaari pehchaan hai pooja....tumhaare jazbaatoN ka silsila isi tarah bazm maiN goonjta rahe our iski rounaq badti rahe...yahi darkaar hai aapse....khuda aapko salamat rakhe....

Woh ret ka maidaan bhi samander nazer ata hai
Woh chup ka sannata ankhoN maiN nazer ata hai

Log chup rehte haiN kutchh kehte bhi toh nahiN
Par har lamha iljaamoN se bhara nazer aata hai.

Ye yaadoN ka marusthal jahaN bhi nazer ata hai,
WahiN sard daayoN maiN  aashiyaN nazer aata hai

Harash

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Harsh ji!! Apne itna kuch kaha meri kavita aor mere liye, dil se apka shukaria!!
Khuda her ek ko salamat rakhein….

Bahoot hi simple shabdo main apne bahoot gahari lines likhi hai… good creation Harsh ji!!

Wo ret hi hoga, tabhi mera pyar kahin najar nahi atta hai
Jitna bhi shiddat se chahu, us per asar nazar nahi atta hai

Zindagi ki mrigchika mai, her khayal bhatak kahin jaata hai
Chup ka yah sannatta, khoon ke ansuo se rula jaata hai
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