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vikas2210
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Darad kaya hai jana hai maine
itne dino akelepan ka ehsas shaha hai maine
apne bhi paraya ho gaye hain ab to
saathi sabhi chut gaye hai ap to
koi nahi saath mere siwaye aansuo ke
darta hun kahi jaldi yeh bhi saath chod den
zakham sharir se zayada dil pe khaye hai maine
sukhte zakhmo ko kasam de ha na bharne ki
ro ro kar aankhe sujayi hai maine
dard ko ab jana hai maine.......
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2006, 02:58:58 PM » |
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welcome back Vikas ..........bahut khub likha aate hi
dil ko fir se kuch yun samjahan padta hai
dard ko hanste hue seene mein chhipana padta hai
waqt jab aata hai bura insaan per ......
toh hans ke har hadasa seh jana padta hai
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vikas2210
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2006, 03:23:05 PM » |
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hhadse se bhari ha zindgi meri
muskurahat ab nahi labo pe meri
utha hun jab se chita se khud ki
jeene ki chaha nahi baaki koi.....
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2006, 04:08:50 PM » |
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hadaso se dar ke koi jeena nahi chor deta
ghav ko yun koi nasur banane nahi deta
hai umeed abhi bhi jindagi ki rahao mein
yun hadaso ke dar se koi manzil nahi chor deta
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2006, 04:17:17 PM » |
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very nice vikas ji............
dard ne bhi aaj dard ko pehchaan liya hoga
isliye khusiyo ka daman dard ne bhi chod diya
....................@fahi@.....................
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2006, 04:28:54 PM » |
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Very Nice Vikas, Ranjana and PJAG...
Saans letey hai jab bhi to dard ki mehek aati hai,
Is kadar sama gaya hai yeh dard meri zindagi mey....
Naam merey kar gaya ruswaiiya sarey jahan ki,
Parchaii ban kar cha gaya meri har ek khushi pey...
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ranjana
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2006, 04:36:27 PM » |
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nice fahi N shikha.........
apne dil-a-nadaan ko hamne bahut samjhaya hai
hamari jindagi ko uljhano ne bahut uljhaya hai
woh apna bhi hai aur nadeek bhi hai dil ke
magar usne hi hame bahut tadapaya hai
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vikas2210
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2006, 04:46:52 PM » |
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very nice ranju, PJAG and Shikha.
bahut khoob
dard mera mere seene se lipta jata hai
kisi ki kam,i puri kiye jata hai
labo pe jab naam uska aata hai
aankho se ek do boond baha le jata hai.....
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2006, 04:50:58 PM » |
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Beautiful work Ranjana and Vikas....
Wohi dil ko is kadar tadpatey hai,
jinhey zindagi kehtey hai hum...
Wohi dard aksar dey jaatey hai,
jinki paanah mey rehtey hai hum....
Woh kehtey hai ab kaho afsana dil ka,
jinsey zindagi ka yeh fasana hai...
Chahtey hai zikr karey unka sabsey,
jinki berukhi roz sehtey hai hum....
Jinkey be'ger hum jee nahin patey,
chaley jaatey hai wohi du'r humsey...
wohi dushman ho gaye meri saanso key,
jinhey jaan apni kehtey hai hum....
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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2006, 05:00:39 PM » |
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Bhaut he khoob each n every one
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vikas2210
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2006, 05:02:11 PM » |
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woow superb Shikha...
bahut khoob and thanks.
Yaad mai teri jeeta hun
bahana hai yehi to jeene ka
warna kab ka FANAAH ho kaya hota
is bedard zamane mai....
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2006, 05:06:37 PM » |
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bahut khub Shikha and Vikas................
pucha aaj hamne jindagi se yeh silsila kya hai
ek dard ke siva mujhe aur mila kya hai
ek saath thaa unka woh bhi chhut gaya
ab baki jindagi mein bacha kya hai
ab toh yaade hai teri, baate hain teri
varana jindagi jeene ki aur wazah kya hai
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vikas2210
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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2006, 05:17:49 PM » |
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bahut khub Shikha and Vikas................
pucha aaj hamne jindagi se yeh silsila kya hai
ek dard ke siva mujhe aur mila kya hai
ek saath thaa unka woh bhi chhut gaya
ab baki jindagi mein bacha kya hai
ab toh yaade hai teri, baate hain teri
varana jindagi jeene ki aur wazah kya hai Shukriya and bahut khoob likha aapne...... zindgi meri kat jati yun hi bina maksad bina yaado ke tujhse gar mulakat nahi hui hoti pana tujhko meri majbori hai ab khona tujhko meri kismat..... |
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Shikha12
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«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2006, 05:26:27 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Vikas and Ranjana....
Roz chaley jaatey hai woh hum ko tanha karkey,
pee jaatey hai hum ashkon ka pyala bharkey...
Unsey kehtey nahin ki yeh ruswaii hogi humari,
Chup reh jaatey hai dil toot jaaney key darr sey...
Woh Kehtey hai jee to logi na yaad karkey mujhey,
Hum kehtey hai bhala kaun jiya hai ek baar markey....
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«Reply #14 on: June 21, 2006, 05:36:48 PM » |
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NICE BOTH OF U.............
yeh jinadgi ab toh hamare liye bas naam ki hai
bas rahi hai is jindagi mein bas dharkan tumhari
jab teri yaado ke dard ne babas kar diya hame
toh apne ashaqo mein hamne teri tasveer chhipa li.
tujse mil ke dil ko milta thaa sakun aur qarar
ab toh bas bebasi hai aur hai ek ajab si beqarari
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