Dard

by thycreator on January 07, 2005, 01:47:13 PM
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Dard sahenge kuch na kahenge, har aansoo pee jayenge,
    Ek khushi pane ke liye hum hath nahi failayenge.
    Hum toh khud hi deewane hai, pagal jaise rehte hai,
    Aap mera gam kya samjhenge, kya mujhko samjhayenge.
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: January 07, 2005, 01:50:28 PM »
Wah!! too good!!! good start!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2005, 03:25:42 PM »
Good creation. Keep it up. Like to see more from u.
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2005, 04:14:55 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhh creator ji bohot hi ache!!!!!!

gum tera bhi hai hai, gum mera bhi hai,
par har raat ke baat ek sawera bhi hai!
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2005, 05:34:46 AM »
Wah!! Meena!!

Us savere ki aas me kabse baithe hain
Jaane ye raat is qadar lambi kyun hai!!!!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2005, 09:01:53 AM »
Thanx a lots frnds. I am also trying to give the best. Will be back wid more. Seeking ur appreciation.
Amit
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Arifa
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«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2005, 09:55:06 AM »
good one creator
bhaat achay that really impressed mee
and touchyyyyy
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2005, 11:15:42 AM »
nice oneeee talat sis!

subhe ki ane ki aas mat chodna,
apne hi gum me doob mat jana,
Khuda khud roshni ka diya lekar ayega,
bas yehi baat apne dil ko bhi samjhana!
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«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2005, 04:50:20 PM »
wah...amit ji;pehla wala sher bohat khoob kaha apne.
Very nice talat and meena............

"Samjhaya hai itna khud ko,
 ki ab samjhane ka matlab bhool gaye,
 unhone tadpaya hai itna hamko,
 jeena kya hai wo ham aaj bhool gaye."
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«Reply #9 on: January 08, 2005, 05:11:12 PM »
wow noce work all......yahan  to dard hi dard...bahot khoob  likha sabhi logon ne.....& good starting thycreator...........

Yadoon Sey Khelati Rahi Tanhai Raat Bher
Khushbu Key Intazaar Mein Shab Bheghati Rahi....
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: January 09, 2005, 11:19:13 AM »
shukriya dosto!

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh nidhi and waheed ji!

 :D
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thycreator
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2005, 12:03:17 PM »
thanx doston,
    Aap sabhi ke liye.....

    Jindagi ne kayi zakhm diye, dard o gum diye,
    Itna tadpe ki ankhon ke aansoo bhi tham gaye.
    Socha ye  tha ki phir pyar ki na humko jhalak mile,
    Apka sath mila toh phir wahi ashq chalak pade.
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«Reply #12 on: January 09, 2005, 01:02:47 PM »
Thanx 2 all.........and wonderful work by all.

"Ashq dil mein chupaoge kahan,
 toote dil mein kuch theharta nahin."
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Arifa
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«Reply #13 on: January 09, 2005, 01:52:10 PM »
bhaaat achaay every oneeeeee
aaap sab nay bhaat accha likha hay
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«Reply #14 on: January 09, 2005, 03:22:53 PM »
Quote from: "thycreator"
thanx doston,
    Aap sabhi ke liye.....

    Jindagi ne kayi zakhm diye, dard o gum diye,
    Itna tadpe ki ankhon ke aansoo bhi tham gaye.
    Socha ye  tha ki phir pyar ki na humko jhalak mile,
    Apka sath mila toh phir wahi ashq chalak pade.


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

behene do apne akhon ke samundar ko,
humne haath phelaye kade hai usko tamne ko!

 :D
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