dard

by salil2002 on October 17, 2009, 08:14:26 AM
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salil2002
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dil ko kisi k dard ka ehsaas ab nahin hota
main kaun hoon main kya hua yeh ehsaas ab nahin hota
thehri huyi hawa se poochha kii maine ye kya hua
woh ro padi saahil kii ab pyaar kyun nahin hota

main kya kahooon kaise kahoon,main bezubaan kyun ho gaya
main sochta hoon bas yeh ab kii yaar main nahin rota
magar haqeeqat aur hai , yeh ashq mere keh rahe
mere mehboob kii yaad main dil rota hai main nahin rota
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2009, 08:28:01 AM »
dil ko kisi k dard ka ehsaas ab nahin hota
main kaun hoon main kya hua yeh ehsaas ab nahin hota
thehri huyi hawa se poochha kii maine ye kya hua
woh ro padi saahil kii ab pyaar kyun nahin hota

main kya kahooon kaise kahoon,main bezubaan kyun ho gaya
main sochta hoon bas yeh ab kii yaar main nahin rota
magar haqeeqat aur hai , yeh ashq mere keh rahe
mere mehboob kii yaad main dil rota hai main nahin rota

Wah wah dear bahut accha likha hai. second para bahut bahut pasand aaya mujhe.
Nice creation Saahil dear.. Thumbs UP
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cara
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2009, 01:23:23 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI   SAAHIL JI....

KOUN KAHETA HAI HAM UNKO ABHI BHI YAAD KARTE HAI,
AB TOH UNKE GUM MEIN, MEH ROTA BHI NAHIN,
YEH TOH DIL HAI,BAGAIR UNKO YAAD KIYE SOTA BHI NAHIN.
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2009, 03:37:05 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI   SAAHIL JI....

KOUN KAHETA HAI HAM UNKO ABHI BHI YAAD KARTE HAI,
AB TOH UNKE GUM MEIN, MEH ROTA BHI NAHIN,
YEH TOH DIL HAI,BAGAIR UNKO YAAD KIYE SOTA BHI NAHIN.

Wah cara sb.. simply superb  Thumbs UP
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: October 17, 2009, 03:41:17 PM »
Mere ghar tak vo aa nahi sakte
Apne dar tak bhula nahi sakte

Gam apna chupa nahi sakte
Zakham unko hum dikha nahi sakte

Unke dil mein hai kauf-e-rusvayee
Meri bigdi bana nahi sakte

Dard-ulfat se jo nahi wakif
Dil pe merhum laga nahi sakte

Hai khudayi ke bahut davedar
Murda dil mein Jaan dila nahi sakte

Ye khuda aur gam nahi ut.te
Kya "Roja" ko zindagi se uta nahi sakte?


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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: October 17, 2009, 04:05:50 PM »
Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai Saahil. Roja and Cera ..
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #6 on: October 17, 2009, 10:05:34 PM »
Nice and excellent Sahil bro  Applause Applause Applause

and cara ji aur roja ji apne bhi bahut accha likha h
Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #7 on: October 17, 2009, 10:56:27 PM »
Wah bahut bahut khoob Saahil ji very touching n marvelous creation,wonderful lines by Cara ji n Roja ji.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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