Dard ZAKHM me na raahat DAWAA me hai...!!

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Taqreeban ek saal baad kalaam chali hai, naya takhallus rakhne ke baad pehli baar hi aana hua hai yahaann, jo chand atpate alfaaz nikle to khayaal baaNtne ke liye aa gaya, waise maine to socha tha ki ab shayad khayaal hi nahi aayenge kabhi, par kuch uljhe khayal haiN aur kuch ulte seedhe alfaaz, to kosish rahegi ki kalam ki jang utar jaaye dheere-dheere...


bandh nazaroN se bhi tu rubaroo hai, har saaNs me ab bhi teri khusboo hai,, toda mera dil is bedardi se par kyuN,, ab bhi zindagi ko kyuN teri justjoo hai,, jaate ho jo aap gairon ki baahoN meN, aakhir ye mohabbat ki kaisi aabroo hai....



Kuch aisi bechainee aab-o-hawaa me hai,
Dard zakhm me na raahat dawaa me hai,

Ek ho sake hum-tum na do hi hue kabhi,
Apni hasti dedh to kabhi sawaa me hai.

Taraash kar tujhko eh haseeN, sunaa hai
Aaj vo khuda bhi bahut ghumaa me hai.

Chahe ho door jitni,dil ke kareeb rahi vo,
Kuch to khaas bahut,us bewafaa me hai.

Sazaa daynaoN* ko kya pataa hoga "taish",
Tabassum unka chipa meri har khataa me hai.
*People who criticise you severely.
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2012, 07:35:07 AM »
Keyo ho gaey thai ruswa yoindia say?
sheel didi
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2012, 07:49:39 AM »
Taqreeban ek saal baad kalaam chali hai, naya takhallus rakhne ke baad pehli baar hi aana hua hai yahaann, jo chand atpate alfaaz nikle to khayaal baaNtne ke liye aa gaya, waise maine to socha tha ki ab shayad khayaal hi nahi aayenge kabhi, par kuch uljhe khayal haiN aur kuch ulte seedhe alfaaz, to kosish rahegi ki kalam ki jang utar jaaye dheere-dheere...


bandh nazaroN se bhi tu rubaroo hai, har saaNs me ab bhi teri khusboo hai,, toda mera dil is bedardi se par kyuN,, ab bhi zindagi ko kyuN teri justjoo hai,, jaate ho jo aap gairon ki baahoN meN, aakhir ye mohabbat ki kaisi aabroo hai....



Kuch aisi bechainee aab-o-hawaa me hai,
Dard zakhm me na raahat dawaa me hai,

Ek ho sake hum-tum na do hi hue kabhi,
Apni hasti dedh to kabhi sawaa me hai.

Chubhona,gudgudana,rulanaa,hasanaa,
AdayeN teri sari is kambakht fizaa me hai.

Taraash kar tujhko eh haseeN, sunaa hai
Aaj vo khuda bhi bahut ghumaa me hai.

Chahe ho door jitni,dil ke kareeb rahi vo,
Kuch to khaas bahut,us bewafaa me hai.

Sazaa daynaoN* ko kya pataa hoga "taish",
Tabassum unka chipa meri har khataa me hai.
*People who criticise you severely.


waah wah.. aap bahut bahut accha likhte hai Taish jee. Aate rahiyega. Aapko padna accha lag raha hai. really very very nice  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2012, 08:15:06 AM »
very nice, keep writing
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2012, 09:05:15 AM »
Keyo ho gaey thai ruswa yoindia say?
sheel didi


sheel di ruswa nahi hue the, waise v shayar haiN aaj yahaaN to kal wahaaN, koi thikana thode hi na hota hai hum jaise fate haal shayaroN ka... tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2012, 09:22:27 AM »
wah janab wah kya  baat hai bemisal creation jitni taref ki jaye kam hai .... hazaron daad hazaron salaam.......... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2012, 09:28:17 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2012, 09:46:17 AM »
waah wah.. aap bahut bahut accha likhte hai Taish jee. Aate rahiyega. Aapko padna accha lag raha hai. really very very nice  Thumbs UP


suman ji kosish to yahi rehti hai ki aate raheN par Zindagi ke apne alag hi bahaane hote haiN hume mashroof rrakhne ke... sad5
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«Reply #8 on: October 29, 2012, 02:33:56 PM »
very nice, keep writing

Bahukhandi sahab, ye humari khushkismati aur aapki jehmiyat, jo aapne iski tareef ki bas yuNhi sadaa hausla afzaayi karte rahiyega....
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«Reply #9 on: October 29, 2012, 03:34:30 PM »
Taqreeban ek saal baad kalaam chali hai, naya takhallus rakhne ke baad pehli baar hi aana hua hai yahaann, jo chand atpate alfaaz nikle to khayaal baaNtne ke liye aa gaya, waise maine to socha tha ki ab shayad khayaal hi nahi aayenge kabhi, par kuch uljhe khayal haiN aur kuch ulte seedhe alfaaz, to kosish rahegi ki kalam ki jang utar jaaye dheere-dheere...


bandh nazaroN se bhi tu rubaroo hai, har saaNs me ab bhi teri khusboo hai,, toda mera dil is bedardi se par kyuN,, ab bhi zindagi ko kyuN teri justjoo hai,, jaate ho jo aap gairon ki baahoN meN, aakhir ye mohabbat ki kaisi aabroo hai....



Kuch aisi bechainee aab-o-hawaa me hai,
Dard zakhm me na raahat dawaa me hai,

Ek ho sake hum-tum na do hi hue kabhi,
Apni hasti dedh to kabhi sawaa me hai.

Taraash kar tujhko eh haseeN, sunaa hai
Aaj vo khuda bhi bahut ghumaa me hai.

Chahe ho door jitni,dil ke kareeb rahi vo,
Kuch to khaas bahut,us bewafaa me hai.

Sazaa daynaoN* ko kya pataa hoga "taish",
Tabassum unka chipa meri har khataa me hai.
*People who criticise you severely.


waah waah janaab--
kya khoob khyalaat kahe aapne
sach kahen to aise post padh kar kuch likhne ka mann hum jaison ka bhi ho jata hai--
daad kubul karen bhai
aate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #10 on: October 29, 2012, 03:38:52 PM »
Taqreeban ek saal baad kalaam chali hai, naya takhallus rakhne ke baad pehli baar hi aana hua hai yahaann, jo chand atpate alfaaz nikle to khayaal baaNtne ke liye aa gaya, waise maine to socha tha ki ab shayad khayaal hi nahi aayenge kabhi, par kuch uljhe khayal haiN aur kuch ulte seedhe alfaaz, to kosish rahegi ki kalam ki jang utar jaaye dheere-dheere...


bandh nazaroN se bhi tu rubaroo hai, har saaNs me ab bhi teri khusboo hai,, toda mera dil is bedardi se par kyuN,, ab bhi zindagi ko kyuN teri justjoo hai,, jaate ho jo aap gairon ki baahoN meN, aakhir ye mohabbat ki kaisi aabroo hai....Kya baat hai, Bohut Umda ghazal hai, dhedh aur sawa k kya khoob qafia banaya hai , bohut umda, mubarakbaad qubool kijiye....



Kuch aisi bechainee aab-o-hawaa me hai,
Dard zakhm me na raahat dawaa me hai,

Ek ho sake hum-tum na do hi hue kabhi,
Apni hasti dedh to kabhi sawaa me hai.

Taraash kar tujhko eh haseeN, sunaa hai
Aaj vo khuda bhi bahut ghumaa me hai.

Chahe ho door jitni,dil ke kareeb rahi vo,
Kuch to khaas bahut,us bewafaa me hai.

Sazaa daynaoN* ko kya pataa hoga "taish",
Tabassum unka chipa meri har khataa me hai.
*People who criticise you severely.

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«Reply #11 on: October 29, 2012, 07:54:58 PM »
wah janab wah kya  baat hai bemisal creation jitni taref ki jaye kam hai .... hazaron daad hazaron salaam.......... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

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Saudagar sahab, itni tareef ke kaabil to na the jitni aapne kar di, aapki tareef humare sar aaNkhon pe, umeed karta huN aapka saath aage v yuNhi milta rahegaaa...
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2012, 02:43:32 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Ghayal ji... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2012, 05:10:12 AM »
Taqreeban ek saal baad kalaam chali hai, naya takhallus rakhne ke baad pehli baar hi aana hua hai yahaann, jo chand atpate alfaaz nikle to khayaal baaNtne ke liye aa gaya, waise maine to socha tha ki ab shayad khayaal hi nahi aayenge kabhi, par kuch uljhe khayal haiN aur kuch ulte seedhe alfaaz, to kosish rahegi ki kalam ki jang utar jaaye dheere-dheere...


bandh nazaroN se bhi tu rubaroo hai, har saaNs me ab bhi teri khusboo hai,, toda mera dil is bedardi se par kyuN,, ab bhi zindagi ko kyuN teri justjoo hai,, jaate ho jo aap gairon ki baahoN meN, aakhir ye mohabbat ki kaisi aabroo hai....



Kuch aisi bechainee aab-o-hawaa me hai,
Dard zakhm me na raahat dawaa me hai,

Ek ho sake hum-tum na do hi hue kabhi,
Apni hasti dedh to kabhi sawaa me hai.

Taraash kar tujhko eh haseeN, sunaa hai
Aaj vo khuda bhi bahut ghumaa me hai.

Chahe ho door jitni,dil ke kareeb rahi vo,
Kuch to khaas bahut,us bewafaa me hai.

Sazaa daynaoN* ko kya pataa hoga "taish",
Tabassum unka chipa meri har khataa me hai.
*People who criticise you severely.


kaise ho mirzaa............ adaab ............

bhayee ghazal to pahle suni huee hai zubaani ... magar ye jo sawa ... ka Qafiyaa hai... bahut maza deta hai ..
ek baat aur .. yaar Qafiye gadbad ho gaye hain..
tumko sare qafiye Wa.... pe bandhne honge ,,,
yaa matle main chhooT le lo... taaki aa pe qafiye bandhy ,,,,

fir milte haiN
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«Reply #14 on: October 30, 2012, 07:04:59 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob

shukriya sir ji, bas yuNhi aashirwaad dete raheN...
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