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Pyar ki duniya me hamne judai dekhi he,

Dilase denewale logo me khudai dekhi he,

DIL to tutta he kach ki tarah,

par usme hamne gehrai dekhi he....
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2010, 11:30:17 PM »
NAAAAAAICE THK Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2010, 11:49:08 PM »
KHUB

Pyar ki duniya me hamne judai dekhi he,

Dilase denewale logo me khudai dekhi he,

DIL to tutta he kach ki tarah,

par usme hamne gehrai dekhi he....

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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2010, 01:46:53 PM »
thanku so much
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2010, 03:03:42 PM »
Bahut khoob Deevangi Ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2010, 03:26:02 PM »
bahot bahot sukriya....
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2010, 04:14:44 PM »
Wah bahut khoob Deevangi,great and lovely creation.keep up the good work. Hats off to you!
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2010, 04:50:21 PM »
Wah devangi-ben wah.....shu vaat chhe.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aatlo badho aavo experience......tamne... icon_scratch
Naa hoy....aa tou kori kalpana chhe kem  ?.... Winking Winking Winking

Pyaar karne walon mai humne tou sachaayi dekhi hai
Pyaar me kuchh bhi kar gujarne ki uchayi dekhi hai

Toote honge kai dil kaanch ki tarah Hazaaro tukdo me   
Par uske Har tukde mai pyaar ki parchhayee dekhi hai



Pyar ki duniya me hamne judai dekhi he,

Dilase denewale logo me khudai dekhi he,

DIL to tutta he kach ki tarah,

par usme hamne gehrai dekhi he....

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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2010, 05:17:40 PM »
aa kori kalpanao nathi, baku haqiqat chhe.
hu je pan lakhu chhu ae vitelu j hoy chhe mara par....

bav j sundar.... reply karyo chhe... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2010, 07:06:26 PM »
Thanks a lot Dev-di....... icon_flower
Aatli nahni umra ma atlo badho experience... Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! to U wave wave wave hello hello hello hello hello

aa kori kalpanao nathi, baku haqiqat chhe.
hu je pan lakhu chhu ae vitelu j hoy chhe mara par....

bav j sundar.... reply karyo chhe... Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2010, 03:59:06 AM »
bahut khoob Dev ji...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2010, 04:25:28 AM »
Kya baat hai Devangi di...bahaut khoob...

Koyal di, awesome..apne bakhubi reply diya hai...
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«Reply #12 on: June 15, 2010, 04:36:17 AM »
Ek masoom si koshish...Galtiyon ke liye iss nadan ko maaf kar dijiyega..

Chalte hai sadkon par jab hum,
toh sirf khudki parchayi dekhi hai...

Haath badakar dukh batna chahta hoon tera,
'Devangi' tere lavson main humne tanhai dekhi hai...

Mohobat sachi ho kisi ki toh bewaffai kya aur judai kya,
'Koyal' tere lavzon main humne woh sachayi dekhi hai...

Tabah karde mohobat se bhare dil ko tukdon main,
yaaron humne woh bewaffai dekhi hai...

Jisse badke chaha ussi ke kareeb na reh sake 'Khamosh',
aisi bhi humne judai dekhi hai...



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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2010, 02:43:33 PM »
Thanks Rahim-bhai...... icon_flower

Aapne bahoot achha likha hai....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kya baat hai Devangi di...bahaut khoob...

Koyal di, awesome..apne bakhubi reply diya hai...
Ek masoom si koshish...Galtiyon ke liye iss nadan ko maaf kar dijiyega..

Chalte hai sadkon par jab hum,
toh sirf khudki parchayi dekhi hai...

Haath badakar dukh batna chahta hoon tera,
'Devangi' tere lavson main humne tanhai dekhi hai...

Mohobat sachi ho kisi ki toh bewaffai kya aur judai kya,
'Koyal' tere lavzon main humne woh sachayi dekhi hai...

Tabah karde mohobat se bhare dil ko tukdon main,
yaaron humne woh bewaffai dekhi hai...

Jisse badke chaha ussi ke kareeb na reh sake 'Khamosh',
aisi bhi humne judai dekhi hai...




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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2010, 03:10:47 PM »
Shukriya..teh dil se shukriya Koyal di!
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