"" galti ""

by nirala on March 01, 2011, 09:35:00 PM
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kaun khus hai zamaane me
vyast hain sab maasoomo ko sataane me

ye pyaar kitno ko rulayega
galti hai pyar,har koi satayega

koi bezaar tadap raha
koi khabon me marr jayega

har kisi ka nahi hai 'nir' pattha sa dil
guroor na kar ik din tu bhi fafak jayega

samjhta nhi hai wo,masoom
chadh raha hasiye par,dheere dheere katt jayega

dard bhi to haskar pee raha aaj bechaara
kal sailaabo me doob jayega

bahalate hai khud ko,ye sachh nhi jhoot hai
aagosh e maut ke sachh me khud ko lipta payega
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 10:43:30 PM »
Bahaut acha likha hai Nirala jee..
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Kuch zindagi ki sachiyan hai iss  me..
Samajne wale samajaenge..!
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 11:53:09 AM »
thanx Dost--
actually tense hone par mai aisi faltu baate likh jaata hu.
warna mai kabhi nhi likhta aisi chije.
samjhnewalo ke liye hi likha hai bas.
thanx dost aapko pasand aai ye.
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2011, 02:13:53 PM »
wakai me kuch na keh k bhi bht sara keh gaye nirala ji..aur aapki yehi bat mast lagti hai mujhe...
bht badi gehri bat halke fulke andaaz me keh jate ho....
thnx for this lovely post ji......
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2011, 04:33:59 PM »
Kasak ji-- lovely post to nhi tha ye!!
wese aapka bahut saara thanx ki aapko bhi meri Galti pasand ai Usual Smile
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: March 03, 2011, 12:12:58 AM »
Bahut Khub Nirala JI
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«Reply #6 on: March 03, 2011, 12:20:44 AM »
Thanx Rishi dear
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«Reply #7 on: March 03, 2011, 11:09:30 AM »
very lovely niralaji....  Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 03, 2011, 11:12:32 AM »
kya baat hai niralaji....

samjhta nahin hai wo.... sach kaha aapne dil esa hi hota hai samjhta hi nahin.. chot pr chot khata hai fir bhi usi raste par jata hai....... bahut khub

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«Reply #9 on: March 03, 2011, 11:48:02 AM »
thanx Tamanna ji--
Manjum ji--aapko bhi thanx
aapne bhi samjha mera ye likhne ka maksad.
ye saari baate bewkoof dil ko indicate hai sirf.
iska main character dil hi hai.
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thanx bahut saara
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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2011, 11:53:45 AM »
hanji samjh liya tha hamne...
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