Gar na rahi iss duniya me....

by punam on August 01, 2008, 06:17:53 AM
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Ankho me kyon badal ban kar yad tumhari aati hai,
Dil ke falak par jaise koi barak si lahra jati hai,

Jakhm hara kar jati hai e bade saba kyon sawan ki,
Dard badha kar mere dil ka ghata eh kyon muskati hai,

Kabhi eh moti ankhon wale,Jalan jigar ki kabhi-kabhi,
Aahen man ki, kyon ruk-ruk kar tumko roj bulati hai

Tujhe mubarak teri khusiyan mai to jee hi let hun,
Tere sang jine ki khwahis meri umra badhati hai,

Gar na rahi iss duniya me aansu ban kar aaungi,
Door se tujhko dekhungi e man ki lagan batati hai,

Tu apni mahfil me khush hai mere gam ka raj yahan,
Koi kare na pyar kabhi, Harjayee bahut rulati hai,

Ankho me kyon badal ban kar yad tumhari Aati hai,
Dil ke falak par jaise koi barak si lahra jati ha....

NM
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2008, 06:39:43 AM »
Waah..Fir Ek Badhiya si Nazm Sharing Ki Hai aapne,,Bahot Khoob Punam Ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2008, 06:42:49 AM »
Gar na rahi iss duniya me aansu ban kar aaungi,
Door se tujhko dekhungi e man ki lagan batati hai,

Tu apni mahfil me khush hai mere gam ka raj yahan,
Koi kare na pyar kabhi, Harjayee bahut rulati hai,

 Applause Applause
bahoot khoob punam..bada dard..hai...in lines me....
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2008, 06:52:19 AM »
Sukriya Muhammad ji...
Sanjeev bhaiya sukriya..dard kabhi had se jyada ho toh shayad aisa hi hota hai..

Kiyaa baadalon me safar zindagii bhar
Zamin par banaayaa na ghar zindagi bhar

Sabhi log jine kaa fan jaanate hain
Na aayaa hamen ye hunar zindagii bhar

Mohabbat rahi chaar din zindagi me
Rahaa chaar din kaa asar zindagi bhar...

NM...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2008, 07:44:42 AM »
Bohat khoob Punam dear ... Applause
Kuch khoshish kar rahi hun punam shayad aapko pasand aaye..
Gar na rahi iss duniya me tearyeyed

Gar na rahi iss duniya me.n
Mere dil ko tood na dena

Gar na rahi iss duniya me.n
Meri yaadon ko seene se laga na

Meri pyaar bhara khat sambhal lena
Soch the rahe sari zindagi aapke ban jaaye

Tumari saanson ko aapni naam qurban kar jaaye
Paas hoke bhi tum mujhse door ho ye dard na sahe jaaye
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punam
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2008, 08:01:06 AM »
Thanx Honey di...

Gar na Rahi is duiya me
mujhe sab yaad karoge na
Mujhe bhula ne ki
koshish me haar jaoge na..

mujhe yaad kar ke
aansoo bahoge na
mere liye na rone ki
kasam deke bakiyon ko
sambhal loge na....
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: August 01, 2008, 08:15:52 AM »
Pehle aapko iss duniya se na jaane denge
Hum aapko apne dil mein rakhenge

Koi sikwa na gila hone denge
Dukh ho agar toh mitta denge

Pehle aapko iss duniya se na jaane denge
Aap hai ek khilta kamal jiski khushbu se sajayenge

Aapki aansu ko hum dewaar bankar rokh lenge
Pehle aapko iss duniya se na jaane denge
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punam
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«Reply #7 on: August 01, 2008, 08:32:38 AM »
bahut khoob Honey di..ek koshish meri taraf se...

jeene ki koi aas nahi ab jana hoga
aansoo na bahaoge aap ko wada karna hoga...

sab ko ek na ek din is duniya se jana hoga
bas itna ki koi ek kadam aage toh koi piche hoga...

samay ke sath bhul jaoge dekho kuch aisa hoga
aaj mujhe na roko mujhe ab jana hoga...
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Muhammed
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2008, 08:59:55 AM »
Waah..Waah..
Pahele Punam Fir Honey..Fir Punam..Waqaee Kamaal Ka Likhte Ho aap Dono..
Badhiya dost aur dosti dekhne Ko Mili Muje...
Dil Khush Ho Gayaa..Yaar aise Bhi Is Jahan Me Dost Hai Kya...!!!!
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baadal102
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2008, 09:08:00 AM »
thanx a lot punam jo aap ne itne aache lines share ki
N
thanx a lot honey ji
waise kya baat hai punam ji aaj kal
bahut aache aache lines dhoond ke la rahe hai aap



Baadal
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punam
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2008, 09:20:20 AM »
Thanx Muhammad ji...wo Honey di meri badi behan hai ..haan hum ek khoon k na huye toh kya..

thanx Baadal ji..kuch zindagi sikha deti hai..aur aisa hota hai na uss waqt kuch humare hath lag jate toh kuch humare dil se  nikalta hai..bas ..
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2008, 09:42:03 AM »
Quote from: punam on August 01, 2008, 08:32:38 AM
bahut khoob Honey di..ek koshish meri taraf se...

jeene ki koi aas nahi ab jana hoga
aansoo na bahaoge aap ko wada karna hoga...

sab ko ek na ek din is duniya se jana hoga
bas itna ki koi ek kadam aage toh koi piche hoga...

samay ke sath bhul jaoge dekho kuch aisa hoga
aaj mujhe na roko mujhe ab jana hoga...

Quote from: punam on August 01, 2008, 09:20:20 AM
Thanx Muhammad ji...wo Honey di meri badi behan hai ..haan hum ek khoon k na huye toh kya..

     

Shukriya Punam dear aaj meri aankhon se aansu nikale aapke shabs se aise dard
chupa hue hai kya kahen.. tearyeyed

Shukriya Muhammad ji
Shukriya baadal ji..

Kuch dard ho to humse bhi kahe lena
Aapne zakhm ko aur na gehara hone dena
Kuch muskhilon ke daur se kabhi guzarte dekha
Tumhe aapne ghamon ko chuupate dekha
Mere haathon pe sar rakhe to dekho
Zara dil ke aaine se dukh mitta kar dekho
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2008, 10:08:09 AM »
Quote from: punam on August 01, 2008, 06:17:53 AM
Ankho me kyon badal ban kar yad tumhari aati hai,
Dil ke falak par jaise koi barak si lahra jati hai,

Jakhm hara kar jati hai e bade saba kyon sawan ki,
Dard badha kar mere dil ka ghata eh kyon muskati hai,

Kabhi eh moti ankhon wale,Jalan jigar ki kabhi-kabhi,
Aahen man ki, kyon ruk-ruk kar tumko roj bulati hai

Tujhe mubarak teri khusiyan mai to jee hi let hun,
Tere sang jine ki khwahis meri umra badhati hai,

Gar na rahi iss duniya me aansu ban kar aaungi,
Door se tujhko dekhungi e man ki lagan batati hai,

Tu apni mahfil me khush hai mere gam ka raj yahan,
Koi kare na pyar kabhi, Harjayee bahut rulati hai,

Ankho me kyon badal ban kar yad tumhari Aati hai,
Dil ke falak par jaise koi barak si lahra jati ha....

NM


bahut khoob punam
sabhi lines bahut acchi hain nice sharing...
very nice reply from ur side too jayadi
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k.shael
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«Reply #13 on: August 01, 2008, 10:56:38 AM »
NICE SHARING PUNAM JI,
& NICE REPLY FROM ALL OF
U DEAR FRIENDS....


AGAR NA RAHI ISS DUNIYA ME,
BATAO KYA MERE NAAM KE AANSOO BAHAOGE,
KYA APNE JAJBAATO KO MERI TASVEER SE ROOBRO
KARWAOGE,

AGAR NA RAHI ISS DUNIYA ME,
KYA MERE JANE KE GAMM KO APNE DIL ME
CHUPAOGE,
KYA MERI BAATOO MERI YAADO KO KHUD SE DOOR
KAR PAOGE,

AGAR NA RAHI MEIN ISS DUNIYA ME,
KYA MERI KABAR PE DIYA JALANE AAOGE,
KYA MUJH PAR WO PYARE GULAB KE PHOOL CHADAOGE,

AGAR NA RAHI ISS DUNIYA ME,
KYA MERI JAGAH APNE DIL ME KISI AUR KO
DE PAOGE....
BY. K.SHAEL
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baadal102
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«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2008, 11:07:08 AM »
 Applause Applause
shally ji good lines
thanx a lot





Baadal
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