Haan sirf main

by klaskar on April 13, 2010, 05:57:05 PM
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beete huye kuch lamho k baare me,
sochta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
tanha apne hi soch k ghere me,
rehta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...

apne hi aasuon k samundar me,
tairta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
unhi aasuon se pyaas apni,
bujhata hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...

aaine me surat teri dekhke use,
todta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
aur usme apne dil k tute tukdo ko,
jodta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...

zindagi ke suney safar me tujhe,
dhundta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
raat ki tanhaiyon me tujhe,
mangta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...

paththar ki bani us murti ko,
poojta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
adhure kuch sapno k kaaran usse,
roothta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 09:33:11 PM »
Wah wah Kapil ji,bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne,dil ko chu gayi aapke poem.excellent creation.keep it up.bahut acha likhte ho aap Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 10:04:25 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji. Bahut achcha laga jaanke ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi. Main to kuch bhi likh deta hoon par aapki taarifon se mere likhe huye kavitaon ki khoobsurti badh jaati hai. Hausla badhaane k liye bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji. Thanx a lot.

Wah wah Kapil ji,bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne,dil ko chu gayi aapke poem.excellent creation.keep it up.bahut acha likhte ho aap Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2010, 07:06:57 AM »
Wah wah Kapil ji, aapne to kamaal ki kavita likhi hai. Bahot khoob. Daad qubool farmayen.
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2010, 10:20:51 AM »
bahut khoob klaskar ji kamaal ka likha hai. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2010, 05:16:10 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji. Aapki daad qubool ki humne... main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!!

Wah wah Kapil ji, aapne to kamaal ki kavita likhi hai. Bahot khoob. Daad qubool farmayen.
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2010, 05:21:58 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

Bohot khoobsurat nazm pesh ki hai....Bohot Khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2010, 06:16:08 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji...!!!

bahut khoob klaskar ji kamaal ka likha hai. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2010, 10:19:56 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Celmira ji. aapki taarif se iski khoobsurti aur badh gayi. bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

Applause Applause Applause

Bohot khoobsurat nazm pesh ki hai....Bohot Khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2010, 05:23:03 AM »
beete huye kuch lamho k baare me,
sochta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
tanha apne hi soch k ghere me,
rehta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...

apne hi aasuon k samundar me,
tairta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
unhi aasuon se pyaas apni,
bujhata hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...

aaine me surat teri dekhke use,
todta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
aur usme apne dil k tute tukdo ko,
jodta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...

zindagi ke suney safar me tujhe,
dhundta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
raat ki tanhaiyon me tujhe,
mangta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...

paththar ki bani us murti ko,
poojta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
adhure kuch sapno k kaaran usse,
roothta hoon kabhi kabhi main,
main, haan sirf main,
aur koi nahi...


Bahut achchhi Peshkash hai Kapil Ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2010, 02:16:37 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!
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