~.. Hansta hua sa maiN

by janumanu on August 22, 2012, 04:33:25 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Author  (Read 1516 times)
janumanu
Guest
jane kahaN wo kho gaya hastaa hua sa maiN
bikhra pada yahaN wahaN tootaa hua sa maiN
 ..
tasveer aisi chhod kar aayaa huN uske pas
aatee huee udaasi aur jaataa hua sa maiN
 ..
kya chand se hi aayega mere liye koe
kab tak rahuN khudaa bata tanhaa hua sa maiN
 ..
rone lagi kuch aise jyuN darya mai ho ufaan
chup chaap dekhta raha sahra hua sa maiN
 ..
kab ja ke aayaaga mujhe aaeenaa dekhna
khud ko laguN kabhi kabhi dekha huaa sa main
..
usne kaha tumhari to dunia hi aur hai
dair-o-haram se aa gaya bhataka hua sa maiN
..
in waaijoN ki baat mai ab aanaa hi nahiN
luN maikdae ki raah ye kahta hua sa maIN
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2012, 05:30:07 AM »
jane kahaN wo kho gaya hastaa hua sa maiN
bikhra pada yahaN wahaN tootaa hua sa maiN Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 ..
tasveer aisi chhod kar aayaa huN uske pas
aatee huee udaasi aur jaataa hua sa maiN Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 ..
kya chand se hi aayega mere liye koe
kab tak rahuN khudaa bata tanhaa hua sa maiN Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
 ..
rone lagi kuch aise jyuN darya mai ho ufaan
chup chaap dekhta raha sahra hua sa maiN Applause Applause Applause( sahmaa)
 ..
kab ja ke aayaaga mujhe aaeenaa dekhna
khud ko laguN kabhi kabhi dekha huaa sa main Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
..
usne kaha tumhari to dunia hi aur hai
dair-o-haram se aa gaya bhataka hua sa maiN Applause Applause Applause Applause
..
in waaijoN ki baat mai ab aanaa hi nahiN
luN maikdae ki raah ye kahta hua sa maIN
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
Logged
sbechain
Guest
«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 10:24:08 AM »
jane kahaN wo kho gaya hastaa hua sa maiN
bikhra pada yahaN wahaN tootaa hua sa maiN
 ..bahut khoob ji bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
tasveer aisi chhod kar aayaa huN uske pas
aatee huee udaasi aur jaataa hua sa maiN
 ..kyaa kahne wah wah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kya chand se hi aayega mere liye koe
kab tak rahuN khudaa bata tanhaa hua sa maiN
 ..oye hoye kya kahne bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
rone lagi kuch aise jyuN darya mai ho ufaan
chup chaap dekhta raha sahra hua sa maiN
bahut khoob.........! Applause Applause Applause
 ..
kab ja ke aayaaga mujhe aaeenaa dekhna
khud ko laguN kabhi kabhi dekha huaa sa main
..waah waah waah. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
usne kaha tumhari to dunia hi aur hai
dair-o-haram se aa gaya bhataka hua sa maiN
..kya kah diya janab. meri to bolti band ho gayi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
in waaijoN ki baat mai ab aanaa hi nahiN
luN maikdae ki raah ye kahta hua sa maIN

lo ek aur ashiq bann gaya rind saaqi.



bahut khoob vaise bahut diljale maloom hote ho ji aap.........!

 please do'nt mind my comments. your ghazal is outstanding
Logged
janumanu
Guest
«Reply #3 on: August 22, 2012, 10:29:05 AM »


veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice


shukriyaa ji Usual Smile
Logged
janumanu
Guest
«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 10:30:05 AM »


bahut khoob vaise bahut diljale maloom hote ho ji aap.........!

 please do'nt mind my comments. your ghazal is outstanding


Sheba ji shukriyaa aapne ek ek misre ko saleek se padha... aur kuch jydaa hi tareef kar di ..........
and maien MIND nahi kiya..
hai jo nahi Usual Smile
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 11:07:05 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
laaiba
Guest
«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2012, 11:13:17 AM »
oomda qafia radeef chuna ap ne bohat barmala asaar ke saath aik achi ghazl pash kee aap ne ......bohat c daad
Logged
janumanu
Guest
«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 11:14:48 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriyaaa janaab
Logged
janumanu
Guest
«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2012, 11:15:28 AM »
oomda qafia radeef chuna ap ne bohat barmala asaar ke saath aik achi ghazl pash kee aap ne ......bohat c daad

shukriyaaa apne sarahaa............ koshish mai hun acha kahne ki
Logged
Sanjeev kash
Guest
«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2012, 11:18:44 AM »
bahut Khub janumanu ji Applause Applause
Logged
janumanu
Guest
«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2012, 11:19:34 AM »
bahut Khub janumanu ji Applause Applause


thanks dear ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Logged
Sps
Guest
«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2012, 12:44:27 PM »
behad khoobsurat,,,,aur aina dekhne wali line ne to poora dard ek baar me hi bata dia...
Logged
mkv
Guest
«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2012, 04:18:24 PM »
Jabardast ghajal hai.
wah wah wah
aap to khoobsurat likhne vaalo me se ek hai..aapka intjaar rahta hai mujhe. post ke saath apna naam suffix karenge to sahooliyat hogi padhne me.
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2012, 04:25:22 PM »
wah kya khoob likha hai aapne  Applause Applause Applause
Logged
ParwaaZ
Guest
«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2012, 05:26:52 PM »
Vikas Bhai Aadaab!

kaise haiN janab... Ummid hai khairiyat se hoNge... Usual Smile
Bade dinoN baad aapki koi kalaam se ruberu hone ka
mouka diya hai.... iske liye shukraguzar haiN... Usual Smile

Behad khoobsurat gazal hai bhai... Aapki har kalaam meiN
gazab ka nayapan dekhne milta hai... YeH kalaam bhi behad
umdaa rahi... sabhi ashaar la jawaab hai ...

Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                   



jane kahaN wo kho gaya hastaa hua sa maiN
bikhra pada yahaN wahaN tootaa hua sa maiN
 ..
WaaH kia baat hai ... behad khoob matla hai
Behad umdaa khayaal aur umdaa adaaygi... Usual Smile                   


tasveer aisi chhod kar aayaa huN uske pas
aatee huee udaasi aur jaataa hua sa maiN
 ..
Waah waaH waaH Bhai kia kahne waaH ...
behad umdaa daad daad daad ...                   


kya chand se hi aayega mere liye koe
kab tak rahuN khudaa bata tanhaa hua sa maiN
 ..
Behad khoob Bhai daad ...                   

rone lagi kuch aise jyuN darya mai ho ufaan
chup chaap dekhta raha sahra hua sa maiN
 ..
Bahut khoob achcha sher hai daad...                   

kab ja ke aayaaga mujhe aaeenaa dekhna
khud ko laguN kabhi kabhi dekha huaa sa main
..
Kia kahne BHai gazab kar diya behad umdaa...                   

usne kaha tumhari to dunia hi aur hai
dair-o-haram se aa gaya bhataka hua sa maiN
..
bahut khoob bahut umdaa daad daad daad....                   

in waaijoN ki baat mai ab aanaa hi nahiN
luN maikdae ki raah ye kahta hua sa maIN

Hahahaha Fikra Sahaab sahiN hai daad daad daad...
Bhai Maqta kahaaN gaya... Huh?
                   


Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
March 29, 2024, 08:50:58 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 08:02:59 PM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]

[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:26:05 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:25:04 PM]

[March 16, 2024, 03:21:26 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.18 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8502 Real Poets and poetry admirer