~*~ Har muskurahat sachi nahin hoti ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 18, 2011, 01:29:29 PM
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Aj fursat mili toh dil ko chhan liya,
Qasam se sirf arman hi arman nikle..

Kabhi kabhi jaisa dikhta hai waisa hota nahin,
Jinhe mante the apna woh bilkul anjan nikle..

Jinse thi mohobat itni kay sab kuch loota diya,
Unke liye dhool mitti se sajhe hum koi saman nikle..

Jinke daman ko maine bhar diya khushiyon se,
Mere liye unki panahon se sirf sitam hi sitam nikle..

Har muskurahat sachi nahin hoti yeh mehsoos hua ‘Khamosh’,
Hasti ankhon main bhi qasam se sirf ghum hi ghum nikle..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2011, 01:49:48 PM »
Bahut khoob rahim padhne waqt kahin kahin rhythem chhoot gyi per acha likha hai...
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2011, 03:02:31 PM »
bahot aacha rahim ji ........bahot hi khubsurat likha he...jesa ki geet ji ne kaha rythm miss hua last ke 2 para me but words bht khubsurat he puri poetry me...bahot khub ji bht khub
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2011, 03:25:34 PM »
Shukriya Geet di aur Utkarsh jee..
Haan akhri do main ryhtm gayi hogayi kyun ki original
post ka hissa nahin the yeh do shaer..
Khair, teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2011, 06:02:30 PM »
Nice Rahim Ji
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2011, 06:26:32 PM »
Bahut Hi Umda---bilkul haqeeqat
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dead heart
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2011, 07:06:31 PM »
Shukriya Rishi jee aur Nirala jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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Anshumali
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2011, 05:06:28 PM »
Aj fursat mili toh dil ko chhan liya,
Qasam se sirf arman hi arman nikle..

Kabhi kabhi jaisa dikhta hai waisa hota nahin,
Jinhe mante the apna woh bilkul anjan nikle..

Jinse thi mohobat itni kay sab kuch loota diya,
Unke liye dhool mitti se sajhe hum koi saman nikle..

Jinke daman ko maine bhar diya khushiyon se,
Mere liye unki panahon se sirf sitam hi sitam nikle..

Har muskurahat sachi nahin hoti yeh mehsoos hua ‘Khamosh’,
Hasti ankhon main bhi qasam se sirf ghum hi ghum nikle..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut Khoob .... Rahim JI !

Good Expression ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... Applause Applause Applause

aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen .. !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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dead heart
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2011, 06:27:23 PM »
Dil se shukriya Naresh jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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