Hum Bhi To Kabhi Rangin The...

by majid on January 14, 2010, 10:49:23 AM
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                    Sabhi Arbab e Sukhan Ko Mera Aadab
                    Aap Sab Ahle Nazar Ke Aage Apni Ek
                 Chhoti Aur Nakaam Si Koshish Rakh Raha Hun
                    Umeed Hai Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aayegi..!


               Safar-e-Zindagi  Mein  Aise  Kahaan  Ghamgin The
               Hum  Bhi  To Kabhi Aey  Dost  Mizaj-e-Rangin The.

               Thi  Haasil  Kabhi  Raunaqein Meri  Bhi  Raahon Ko
               Yun  Azal  Se  Bhala  Kab  Hum , Gosha-Nashin The.

               Mufajat  Kuch  Yun  Uchhale  Waqt  Ne Phir Sang Ki
               Toot  Ke  Bikhar  Se  Gaye , Jo Bhi Khwab Hasin The.

               Aaj Bhi Yaad Hai Mujhey Woh Saqib-e-Daur Shihab
               Bakhuda Woh Pal  Bhi Kitne Mitthe Aur Namkin The.

               Janta Hai Tu ,Yahan Tujhe Koi Samajhne Wala Nahi
               Phir Q Likh  Diye Tune, Jo Tere Jazbaa-e-Hazin The.

                            
                                  {Shihab}
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riyaz106
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2010, 10:59:47 AM »
Nice creation Shihab JI. Bahut achhi lagi ye ghazal. Thanks for posting.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2010, 11:04:15 AM »
Wonderful Creation Shihab.. Bahoot Khoob . Daad kabool Kijiye ...
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2010, 11:14:19 AM »
KYA BAAT HAI    SHIHAB JI....

HAMARA BHI ZAMAANA THA HAM BHI TOH KABHI RANGEEN THE
HAR KHAWAB JO DEKHTE THE  HAR KHAWAB HASEEN THE
HAR LAMHA JO GUJARTA THA METTHE AUR NAMKIN THE
WAQAT KI THOKAR LAGI HAI WARNA KAHAN HAM ITNE SANGIN THE.
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2010, 12:13:15 PM »
Bahut Bahut majid Bhai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2010, 09:20:26 AM »
Great and very touching creation Shihab ji,bahut khoob,beautiful lines by Cara ji. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2010, 02:55:52 PM »
Nice Majid Ji
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kameeney
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2010, 07:12:28 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2010, 07:57:20 PM »
bahoot khoob shihab ji!!!
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shabbir143
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2010, 12:38:54 PM »


Arey Wah Meri Jaan Kya Baat Hai
Badi Sadgi Ke Saath Tumne Haal e Dil Ko
Lafzon Mein Piroya Hai Baho Khoob Yaar.
Good Job

Sach Mein Tu Bhi Bada Rangin Tha Yaar Kabhi


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malli
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2010, 06:56:49 PM »
Bahut accha likha hai aapne dear majid...(ooh abhi pata chal gaya ke aap b kabhi rangeen the  Usual Smile )
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malli
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2010, 07:32:56 PM »
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Pyaari Behna Pasand Karne K Liye
Aur Aapka Tahe Dil Se Mashkur Va Manun Hun Ki Aapne Apna Waqt Diya...
Aur Khuda Ka Shukar Hai Aapko Pata To Chala hmhm

Khair Bahut Khushi Hui Aapko Dobara Dekhkar

Welcome Back... angel11

Khush Rahiye... Usual Smile

Shihab


Thanks majid and wo kaun hai bhai jo aapko fir se rangeen bana diya?  Winking
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malli
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2010, 03:54:06 AM »
Aksar Jazbaat Lafzon Mein Bole Nahi Jaate
Ab Sare Raz To Mehfilon Men Khole Nahi Jate.!


So Behna Is Raz Ko Raz Hi rehne Dijiye hmhmhm

Meri shararati baaton ko dil pe na lena bhai
Kinse aapki rangeeniyan fir shuruwat hoyi hai, ye sunna tha mujhe
Tum naam batadete uska, to meri dua mein wo b shamil ho jaati... love4
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2010, 05:46:00 AM »
Shihab bhaa'ii:

Aadaab ar'z hai!

aapki Ghazal paRhii! umdaa'h aNdaaz-e-bayaan haMeshaa ki taraH..! Ghazal ka mat'laa mujhe Khaas pasaNd aayaa! aapki koShiSh ko paRhne ke baad.. Khursheed omer saaHeb kii Ghazal kabhee paRhii thee wo yaad aa gayiiN... uNki Ghazal ke do Sher yahaaN ar'z kar rahaa huuN

zindagii kii raunaq ko yuu.N sajaanaa pa.Dataa hai
dard sahanaa pa.Dataa hai Gam chhupaanaa pa.Dataa hai

jo havaa se bikhare.nge us gulo.n ko dekho to
har sabaa ke jho.nke pe jhuul jaanaa pa.Dataa hai

yuuNhi liKhate raheN aage bhee.. aap Khoob liKhate hoN..! dil se DheroN saari daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #14 on: January 31, 2010, 12:22:41 PM »
Shihab bhaa'ii:

Aadaab!

daaG dehlvi saaHeb ki Ghazal aapne jo baaNTii hai wo Ghazal mujhe be-Had pasaNd haii.. maiN aapka ShuKraGuzaar huuN!

liKhate rahe.n aage bhee!

KhuSh rahen.. duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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