"" Its a Code -- ""

by nirala on February 26, 2011, 12:33:57 PM
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kuch code word me batana chahunga YO se related--
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kuch aise bhi log he jahan me
chun chun kar maarne ka sauk rakhte he--

kuch aur bhi he jahan me
gine chuno ko maarne me yakeen kakhte he--

kuch to aise bhi hai(nir) jahan me
bematlab sabhi ko maarne ka hunr rakhte he--

kuch aage badhe to dikhte he kuch log
har kisi ko maarne ko apni duty samajhte he--

kuch aise bhi log he jahan me
jinhe na maaro to wo sikayat karte he--

fanaa he nir deewano me
apno me anjaano me--!!
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kuch smjhe!
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2011, 12:53:15 PM »
hmmm.........

mere bhi dil me kuch esa hi aya tha .....kuch activities dekhkar........apne shabd de diye unhe......
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2011, 01:13:30 PM »
Hmm likha bahaut acha hai Nirala dost..
Apki akhri do lines: 'Fanna hai Nir deewanon main,
apnon main anjanon main..' mujhe bahaut achi lagi..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2011, 01:35:06 PM »
thanx aapdono Mahatmao ka.
aaplogo ko ye baat samjh aai uske liye sukriya.
RAHIM DOST--apka sukriya meri aakhri lines ko pasand krne ka--wo bas kabhi kabhi galti se aisa likh jaata hu:)
Matrix Yaara--aap kamaal ho.
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2011, 02:42:35 PM »
aapki galtiya subhanallah. aisi hi galti ek-do aur ho jai to maja bad jayega Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2011, 03:04:35 PM »
lo kar lo baat--
log galti na karne ki gujaris karte hain aur aap Kamal galti karne ko kah rhe !!!
aap bhi na ek Nirala ho Usual Smile
thanx aapko bhi samjh aai ye code.
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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2011, 12:08:15 AM »
BAhut Khub Nirala Bhai
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2011, 12:12:19 AM »
Rishi dear--aap samjh gaye honge jaroor.
so thanx very much
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