"" jurm bas itna tha 'nirala' "

by nirala on January 13, 2011, 08:26:52 AM
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kuch utpatang si kosis kar rha hun doston--azeeb lag rha likhne me issliye ye adhoora sa lagega shayad--

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hasraten dil ki mita gaya
apni hi kasti duba gaya

dard ka paimaana jab bhar gaya
aankhon se bhi thoda chalak gaya

kiston me ronewale ko
woh ekmoost rula gaya

mshfilen jawan rangeen thi kahin
     jurm bas itna tha 'nirala'---
mohabbat ki sazaa sangeen thi kahin
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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2011, 08:48:06 AM »
wah wah niralaji....

bahut khub....
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2011, 09:04:51 AM »
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thanx manju
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 09:16:09 AM »
likhne batha tha kuch
      tu kuch aur hi likh gaya
apne dil ki bechaini ko
      kaagaz pe tu udel gaya
anjana sa dard tha koi
      jo tu yahan par sab keh gaya
nirala tu mastana banke
      haste hue har dard ko
      apni hasi me chhupa gaya....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 11:23:41 AM »
ooh K mam aapka yun talkhiyon me comnt dena hume bha gaya.
wese aapne kya khubb pahchaana. kamaal hai.
sarahne ke liye
thanx
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2011, 01:45:21 PM »
Bahut Khub Nirala JI
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