"" Mai Roi Itna---""

by nirala on February 27, 2011, 10:38:39 PM
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mai roi itna ke ab ashq nhi
mai khoi itna ke ab rasq nhi

jhulas gai mohabbat me teri
bachi na ab jeene ki arzoo meri

rah gai bezaar tamannao ki zirn avsesh hai
kya karun mai zaleem,jee rahi ab bhi ke ye zindhi bhi ab maut ka hi to bhesh hai !

kya chahat me kami thi meri ya thi mai bewafa
thukra gaya yun-----------------
sad5sad5sad5sad5
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2011, 10:47:51 PM »
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bht mast likha hai nirala ji....

tadap tere adhure pyaar ki mujhe jine nahin deti
ek sham tere naam ki mujhe kisika hone nahin deti.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2011, 11:04:56 PM »
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good one Niralaji......
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2011, 11:08:00 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala Ji Bahut Mast Likha Hai
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2011, 11:44:49 PM »
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Bahut khoob nirala ji...
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2011, 04:47:36 PM »
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kya baat hai niralaji.... wah kya kahun iske lie.... bahut hi mast hai....
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2011, 05:00:37 PM »
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bht khoob nirala ji....
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2011, 05:06:58 PM »
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thanx aap sabka jo mere uljuluul chijon ko sarahte hain--
aap me se koi iss kavita ko complete kar sakta ho to kar dijiye---
mai likh nahi paya--kuki mai aisi baate likhna nai janta
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thanx again
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