kaash kabhi aisa hota

by aaina on May 26, 2009, 04:12:18 AM
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Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota
Uski khamosh jheel aankho mai
Mere jeene ka silsila hota
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota

Uski zulfo.n se khailta mein
Uske aariz ko chedata mein
Usko baho.n ke daayere mai
Halke halke samaita mein
Kaash kabi aisa hota, wo mera hota

Wo jo kuch sochta mai kar jata
Banke muskaan chehre pe bikhr jata
Wo agr kehta doobne ke liyn
Mein chdte dariya mai utar jaata
Kaash kabhi aisa hota…………..

Chandni si raatian hoti.n
Kuch aankahi si batai.n hoti.n
Makhmali si uski baho.n mai
Garam meri saasai.n hoti.n
Kaash kabhi aisa hota, wo mera hota

Usko apni aankh.n mai basa kar
Har gham ko uske gale laga kar
Apna har sukh mein usko de daita
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota

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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2009, 04:18:02 AM »
wow aaina ji,kitna acha likha aapne,very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Nadan Bachi
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2009, 07:19:22 AM »
Kaash Kabhi Aisa Hota , Wo Mera Hota .!

Wah! Beautiful Creation Aaina Jee. Padh Kar Bohat Acha Laga.

Keep Writing And Keep Sharing!
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2009, 07:39:19 AM »
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota
Uski khamosh jheel aankho mai
Mere jeene ka silsila hota
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota

Uski zulfo.n se khailta mein
Uske aariz ko chedata mein
Usko baho.n ke daayere mai
Halke halke samaita mein
Kaash kabi aisa hota, wo mera hota

Wo jo kuch sochta mai kar jata
Banke muskaan chehre pe bikhr jata
Wo agr kehta doobne ke liyn
Mein chdte dariya mai utar jaata
Kaash kabhi aisa hota…………..

Chandni si raatian hoti.n
Kuch aankahi si batai.n hoti.n
Makhmali si uski baho.n mai
Garam meri saasai.n hoti.n
Kaash kabhi aisa hota, wo mera hota

Usko apni aankh.n mai basa kar
Har gham ko uske gale laga kar
Apna har sukh mein usko de daita
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota



Bohot hi Khoobsurat likha hai Aslam Ji..... "Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota" !!

Har ek lafz itna dard aur itni mohabbat chupaaye hue sa lagta hai....Bohot Khoob !
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vitasta
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2009, 07:52:25 AM »
wah wah aslam ji!  bahut khoob Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2009, 10:54:18 AM »
Aslam Ji,

Aisa bohot kam hota hai ki kisi ki ghazal ya nazm padhne ke baad main shayari main uska jawab doon...kaafi kam...par aapki ye poem padh ke kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....aap jaisa to kabhi nahin likh sakte, bas ek koshish....ummeed hai bura nahin lagega !


Kisi Ko Itna Na Chaho, Wabaal-e-Jaan Ho Jaaye,
Chaahat Se Tumhari Rooh Lahuluhaan Ho Jaaye

Kisi Ki Yaad Sahraaon Main Na Bhatka De Tumko,
Hayaat Ka Haseen Gulshan Hi Veeraan Ho Jaaye

Tanhaaiyon Main Khud Ko Itna Na Kho Dena,
Zindagi Ki Rahguzar Ye Sunsaan Ho Jaaye

Bewafa Mohabbat Main Dil Ko Na Tadpaao,
Ki Jeena Ho Jaaye Mushkil, Marna Aasaan Ho Jaaye

Kehte Hain Lafz Hote Hain Dil Ka Aaeena,
Shayari Aisi Likho, Diiwaan Ho Jaaye
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aaina
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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2009, 01:07:25 PM »
wow aaina ji,kitna acha likha aapne,very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnxxxx madhuwesh ji......
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2009, 06:25:36 AM »
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota
Uski khamosh jheel aankho mai
Mere jeene ka silsila hota
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota

Uski zulfo.n se khailta mein
Uske aariz ko chedata mein
Usko baho.n ke daayere mai
Halke halke samaita mein
Kaash kabi aisa hota, wo mera hota

Wo jo kuch sochta mai kar jata
Banke muskaan chehre pe bikhr jata
Wo agr kehta doobne ke liyn
Mein chdte dariya mai utar jaata
Kaash kabhi aisa hota…………..

Chandni si raatian hoti.n
Kuch aankahi si batai.n hoti.n
Makhmali si uski baho.n mai
Garam meri saasai.n hoti.n
Kaash kabhi aisa hota, wo mera hota

Usko apni aankh.n mai basa kar
Har gham ko uske gale laga kar
Apna har sukh mein usko de daita
Kaash kabhi aisa hota wo mera hota



Bahut bahut Khoob Aslam Bhai...Har Ek Sher,Har Ek Lafz Dil Ko Chuta Hai..
Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2009, 06:28:37 AM »
Aslam Ji,

Aisa bohot kam hota hai ki kisi ki ghazal ya nazm padhne ke baad main shayari main uska jawab doon...kaafi kam...par aapki ye poem padh ke kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....aap jaisa to kabhi nahin likh sakte, bas ek koshish....ummeed hai bura nahin lagega !


Kisi Ko Itna Na Chaho, Wabaal-e-Jaan Ho Jaaye,
Chaahat Se Tumhari Rooh Lahuluhaan Ho Jaaye

Kisi Ki Yaad Sahraaon Main Na Bhatka De Tumko,
Hayaat Ka Haseen Gulshan Hi Veeraan Ho Jaaye

Tanhaaiyon Main Khud Ko Itna Na Kho Dena,
Zindagi Ki Rahguzar Ye Sunsaan Ho Jaaye

Bewafa Mohabbat Main Dil Ko Na Tadpaao,
Ki Jeena Ho Jaaye Mushkil, Marna Aasaan Ho Jaaye

Kehte Hain Lafz Hote Hain Dil Ka Aaeena,
Shayari Aisi Likho, Diiwaan Ho Jaaye


Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Aapki Tareef Mein Kuch Bhi Kehna Kam Hoga..
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2009, 06:32:34 AM »
Aslam Ji,

Aisa bohot kam hota hai ki kisi ki ghazal ya nazm padhne ke baad main shayari main uska jawab doon...kaafi kam...par aapki ye poem padh ke kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai....aap jaisa to kabhi nahin likh sakte, bas ek koshish....ummeed hai bura nahin lagega !


Kisi Ko Itna Na Chaho, Wabaal-e-Jaan Ho Jaaye,
Chaahat Se Tumhari Rooh Lahuluhaan Ho Jaaye

Kisi Ki Yaad Sahraaon Main Na Bhatka De Tumko,
Hayaat Ka Haseen Gulshan Hi Veeraan Ho Jaaye

Tanhaaiyon Main Khud Ko Itna Na Kho Dena,
Zindagi Ki Rahguzar Ye Sunsaan Ho Jaaye

Bewafa Mohabbat Main Dil Ko Na Tadpaao,
Ki Jeena Ho Jaaye Mushkil, Marna Aasaan Ho Jaaye

Kehte Hain Lafz Hote Hain Dil Ka Aaeena,
Shayari Aisi Likho, Diiwaan Ho Jaaye


ahaa... bahut khoob... badiya likha hai..Dear Talat

(haan aap kisi ki gazal ya nazm mein reply shayri se nahi dete hai...
I also many times felt...but aaj ye reply padkar bahut accha laga.) Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2009, 12:20:46 PM »
Thanks so much Khwaish Dost and Roja dear
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: June 01, 2009, 10:34:39 AM »
bahot hi acha likha hai aapne Celmira ji hamesha ki tarah

n i think u really deserve to be ustaad-e-shayri coz hamesha
involve hoke likhti hain aap

har sher behad umda, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Thanks so much Kaash Ji
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2009, 12:58:55 PM »
Wah wah Aaina Ji
very good
SARVESH RASTOGI
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aaina
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2009, 07:34:45 AM »
Kaash Kabhi Aisa Hota , Wo Mera Hota .!

Wah! Beautiful Creation Aaina Jee. Padh Kar Bohat Acha Laga.

Keep Writing And Keep Sharing!


thnxxx so much NB.......
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aaina
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«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2009, 07:35:45 AM »
wah wah aslam ji!  bahut khoob Applause

thnxxx vitasta ji...
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