khilauna....sheba

by Sheba on October 03, 2011, 11:09:34 AM

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«Reply #15 on: November 11, 2011, 01:02:16 PM »

Quote from: Sadiq Rizvi on October 09, 2011, 02:15:36 PM

VERY GOOD

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Re: khilauna....sheba

«Reply #16 on: November 11, 2011, 01:11:20 PM »

boht khoob


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Sadiq Rizvi

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Re: khilauna....sheba

«Reply #17 on: November 11, 2011, 03:48:00 PM »

Fikr achchi hai but try to right in meter

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Re: khilauna....sheba

«Reply #18 on: November 11, 2011, 04:06:02 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on October 03, 2011, 11:09:34 AM

phir ek khilauna tootaa mujhse..,
saath bachpan ka chootaa mujhse..,

bankar mera humsafar wo aaj,
meri hasrato.n ko lootaa mujhse,

kar naa saki pyaar taqseem baraabar,
har rishta mera roothaa mujhse,

aanso.n se zayadaa nazar daulat pe thi,
kiyaa waadaa sabne jhootaa mujhse,

taakhir itni hui milne mein sheba...!
etmaad ka gharaa phootaa mujse.

taakhir= delay.
taqseem= distribute
etmaad= believe