khilauna....sheba

by Sheba on October 03, 2011, 11:09:34 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 11, 2011, 01:02:16 PM »
VERY GOOD

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«Reply #16 on: November 11, 2011, 01:11:20 PM »
boht khoob
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«Reply #17 on: November 11, 2011, 03:48:00 PM »
Fikr achchi hai but try to right in meter

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«Reply #18 on: November 11, 2011, 04:06:02 PM »


                        phir ek khilauna tootaa mujhse..,
                        saath bachpan ka chootaa mujhse..,

                        bankar mera humsafar wo aaj,
                        meri hasrato.n ko lootaa mujhse, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

                        kar naa saki pyaar taqseem baraabar,
                        har rishta mera roothaa mujhse, Applause

                        aanso.n se zayadaa nazar daulat pe thi,
                        kiyaa waadaa sabne jhootaa mujhse,
 Applause Applause
                        taakhir itni hui milne mein sheba...!
                        etmaad ka gharaa phootaa mujse.



           taakhir= delay.
           taqseem= distribute
           etmaad=  believe

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«Reply #19 on: November 30, 2011, 09:54:41 AM »


thank you
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«Reply #20 on: December 10, 2011, 12:46:38 PM »
boht khoob


thank you
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«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2014, 03:39:43 AM »

Sheba ji,
Beauuuuuuuu...tiful!
Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #22 on: June 16, 2014, 03:42:49 AM »
Waah kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai,Bahut Umda.
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«Reply #23 on: August 12, 2014, 08:54:17 PM »
Waah kya baaaaaaaaaaaaaaat hai,Bahut Umda.


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