khilauna....sheba

by Sheba on October 03, 2011, 11:09:34 AM
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                        phir ek khilauna tootaa mujhse..,
                        saath bachpan ka chootaa mujhse..,

                        bankar mera humsafar wo aaj,
                        meri hasrato.n ko lootaa mujhse,

                       kar naa saki pyaar taqseem baraabar,
                        har rishta mera roothaa mujhse,

                        aanso.n se zayadaa nazar daulat pe thi,
                        kiyaa waadaa sabne jhootaa mujhse,

                        taakhir itni hui milne mein sheba...!
                        etmaad ka gharaa phootaa mujse.



           taakhir= delay.
           taqseem= distribute
           etmaad=  believe
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2011, 11:31:40 AM »
Sheba ji--
aapki post parh kar bahot acha laga --
lekin muaaf kijiega--aapki nagme ki theame mai samjh nahi saka sad5

muskurate rahiye
khus rahiye
 
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2011, 12:11:38 PM »
Bht khoob sheba ji...
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2011, 12:31:30 PM »


                        phir ek khilauna tootaa mujhse..,
                        saath bachpan ka chootaa mujhse..,

                        bankar mera humsafar wo aaj,
                        meri hasrato.n ko lootaa mujhse,

                        kar naa saki pyaar taqseem baraabar,
                        har rishta mera roothaa mujhse,

                        aanso.n se zayadaa nazar daulat pe thi,
                        kiyaa waadaa sabne jhootaa mujhse,

                        taakhir itni hui milne mein sheba...!
                        etmaad ka gharaa phootaa mujse.



Sheba Ji,Main Humesha yeh kehta Aaya Hoon Ke Aapki Soch-Samaj Bahut Gehri Hai..yeh Ghazal kis Theme Par Likhi gayi Hai Nahi Jaanta Main Par Har A'shaar Apne Hisse Ki gehraai Liye Hue Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2011, 05:39:50 PM »
NICE ONE


                        phir ek khilauna tootaa mujhse..,
                        saath bachpan ka chootaa mujhse..,

                        bankar mera humsafar wo aaj,
                        meri hasrato.n ko lootaa mujhse,

                        kar naa saki pyaar taqseem baraabar,
                        har rishta mera roothaa mujhse,

                        aanso.n se zayadaa nazar daulat pe thi,
                        kiyaa waadaa sabne jhootaa mujhse,

                        taakhir itni hui milne mein sheba...!
                        etmaad ka gharaa phootaa mujse.

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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2011, 05:39:07 AM »
Just beautiful...!Congrats.
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2011, 12:39:02 PM »
Sheba ji--
aapki post parh kar bahot acha laga --
lekin muaaf kijiega--aapki nagme ki theame mai samjh nahi saka sad5

muskurate rahiye
khus rahiye
 
koi aap ke jazbaat se khele
 koi aapke etmaad(vishwaas) se khele,
 koi aapke hasrato.n se khele,
 to saare ek khilaune ki tarah hue...!!
  mere khyaal se mazeed byaan karne ki zarurat nahin aap samajh gaye honge.
 shukriya..!
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2011, 04:27:49 PM »
bahut khoob sheba ji...

bahut hi gehrayi ki baat keh di aapne...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2011, 08:10:31 PM »
Kya baat hai Sheba jee..
Wah Wah Wah..
Ek alag hi soch lati hai kalamein apki..
 Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2011, 06:19:04 AM »
Bht khoob sheba ji...

thank you manzil
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2011, 08:54:37 AM »

Sheba Ji,Main Humesha yeh kehta Aaya Hoon Ke Aapki Soch-Samaj Bahut Gehri Hai..yeh Ghazal kis Theme Par Likhi gayi Hai Nahi Jaanta Main Par Har A'shaar Apne Hisse Ki gehraai Liye Hue Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you khawaish ji
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2011, 08:57:30 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sheba ji bahut hi khoobsoorat kavita hai.
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sbechain
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2011, 12:48:59 PM »
NICE ONE

thank you manoj ji
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«Reply #13 on: October 09, 2011, 01:19:38 PM »


                        phir ek khilauna tootaa mujhse..,
                        saath bachpan ka chootaa mujhse..,

                        bankar mera humsafar wo aaj,
                        meri hasrato.n ko lootaa mujhse,

                        kar naa saki pyaar taqseem baraabar,
                        har rishta mera roothaa mujhse,

                        aanso.n se zayadaa nazar daulat pe thi,
                        kiyaa waadaa sabne jhootaa mujhse,

                        taakhir itni hui milne mein sheba...!
                        etmaad ka gharaa phootaa mujse.



           taakhir= delay.
           taqseem= distribute
           etmaad=  believe



Sheba ji,
Beauuuuuuuu...tiful!
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Sadiq Rizvi
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«Reply #14 on: October 09, 2011, 02:15:36 PM »

VERY GOOD
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