koi manaata nahi....

by isha_verma7 on July 22, 2005, 11:16:55 AM
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isha_verma7
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Geela kagaz ki tarah hai zindgi apni
Koi jalata bhi nahi
Aur koi bahata bhi nahi
Is kadar akela hai rahoon main dil
Ki koi saatata bhi nahi
aur koi manaata bhi nahi!
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2005, 07:47:25 PM »
nice ishu!!

woh manayenge hume, yeh bhram tha humara,
tanhai ke aur yeh pehla kadam tha humara,
hum to rooth gaye unke pyar ke barose,
aurwoh samjhe unke lyie yhe sitam tha humara!
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2005, 11:46:53 PM »
bahut achaa meena ji...........very nice as usual!!!!!! VERY NICE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2005, 11:49:31 PM »
Wow .........
What a beauty Isha ...
It was fantastic one ...
And nice too Meena ...
Keep it up both ...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2005, 11:51:09 PM »
bahot  khoob.............Isha.....................&  Meenu............. keep  it  up........... tongue3
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akela
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«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2005, 11:55:52 AM »
nice wordin 's meena ji .........isha ji...........very touchin........
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2005, 12:10:20 PM »
Thanks for appreciating Waheed n' Akela!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2005, 06:35:45 PM »
Humesha muskuraa ke aansuo ko chupaaya,
Gum ko chupaane ka yahi rasta nazar aaya,

Kis kis ko bataate behte ashko ka sabaab,
Ka dard-e-dil dil mein kisne jagaaya,

Mehfilo mein kahi bhi mazaa na raha,
Rakha dil pe patthar to khud ko sajaaya,

Baat be baat apni aahain dabaa kar,
Yaaron ke darmiyaan kis qadar muskuraaya,

Na thi chah kabhi mujhe maikashi ki,
Jaam-e-wafa kisi bewafa ne pilaaya,

Kya muqaddar se shikwa karte rahe,
Jo kismat mein tha wohi kuchh to paaya,

Yeh kis mod pe aagayi hai ummeede,
Ke saaya-e-manzil nazar mein na aaya,

Apno ne palat ke dekha tak nahin,
Gairo ne aake gale se lagaaya,

Achha hua ke raaz khul hi gaya,
Dil-e-nadaan pe khanjar kisne chalaaya ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2005, 07:12:08 PM »
very nice Isha, Meena & JHL....
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2005, 07:14:45 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
very nice Isha, Meena & JHL....



Thanks a lot Aryan ...
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2005, 08:19:36 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya dosto....
aur bohot ache JHL ji..........

 :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2005, 08:23:12 PM »
Thanks a lot Meena for appreciation ...


Na hum bardaasht karne ke liye pite hai,
Na khudko barbaad karne ke liye pite hai,
Duniya kehti hai insaan sach bolta hai pine ke baad,
To suno ...
Hum unhe apni mohabbat se aazaad karne ke liye pite hai ...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #12 on: July 31, 2005, 01:47:58 AM »
"Hum unhe apni mohabbat se aazaad karne ke liye pite hai" ..........WOW...........bahut khoob!!!!!!!!!!111
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«Reply #13 on: July 31, 2005, 10:51:15 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thanks a lot Meena for appreciation ...


Na hum bardaasht karne ke liye pite hai,
Na khudko barbaad karne ke liye pite hai,
Duniya kehti hai insaan sach bolta hai pine ke baad,
To suno ...
Hum unhe apni mohabbat se aazaad karne ke liye pite hai ...


Na do dagga apne aap  ko piker bhi mahobat ko azad na kar payooge
Yeh aisa dard hai karoge ilaz lakh sahi tum..
par iski tab se na bach payoge
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«Reply #14 on: July 31, 2005, 06:59:37 PM »
bahut achaa ishaji...
kya baat hai bhota khub likha hai app na...
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