Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA):Shayri-E-Dard

neelgold

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There must be some mistakes pls dont mind ...... jst read it with the feelings i hope evry single person can connect with this some how .

Kehni thi ek baat jo kbahi unse, jo keh nahi paye
Bina kahe hi Voh ek doosre se juda ho gaye ...
(Yeh kahani hai un saab logon ki jo apni dil ki baat keh nahi pate )

Meri har raah tumse hi aah milti thi

Samz nahi paye tab yeh shyed mohbat hi thi

Maine apne sare raste tumse modh liye

Naye raah pe jo nikli fir bi tum saath ho liye

Nahi milna hai tumse yeh muze to yakin tha

Na nafrat aur na hi mohabat thi , Yeh to kuch aur hi janoon tha

Ankaian band kar fir naye kafile ke saath ho liye

Jaha bi pade mere kadam teri mohbat ke hi phool mile

Ek nayae duniya aur ab ek naya thikana tha

Tum se door hone ka bus yehi ek bahana tha

Bhool nahi paye tume kabhi bi ek pal ke liye

Ankhion main ansoo sahi, hoton pe the hansi liye

Sadiyain guzar gaye tum se bichde hue

Tum bi bhool gaye hoge yeh yakin liye hue

Aur aaj sochte hai

Pata nahi chala ya samaz hi nahi paye ki voh kya tha

Dosti thi , pyar tha ya yeh koi aur hi silsala tha

Jab tak samaz hum pate itne door ho chuke the

Milna to door dekhne ko bi mazboor ho chuke the

Raah juda ho gaye hum tum bi juda ho gaye

Main kahin aur , Aur, tum apni naye duniya main kho gaye

Mazboriyan itni badi ki voh nafrat ban gaye

Nafrat youn pigli ki voh fir mohbat ban gaye

Na ranzo gum hai ab na hi koi shikva, gila

Dil ko sakoon hai bus muze tu jo hai mila

Jaha bi ho hamesha khush reho ,abad reho

Mere paas nahi ho par fir bi mere paas reho

Milonge tum ek din jaroor yeh dil ko aitbaar tha

Keh nahi paye shyed tumko humi se hi pyar tha

Milonge aab jab to batyange hum bi tume
Ke kyon hum tum se mil ke bi na mile

.........SONA........


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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #1 on: September 18, 2010, 12:13:57 AM »

Very Impressive ... Bhagwaan se duaa karta hoon ... aapka pyar aapko Zarur mil jaye ...

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #2 on: September 18, 2010, 02:53:24 AM »

Neel Jee adaab!

Aapke is post ki feelings bahut touchi hai... Aur aapne
Achche se bayaaN bhi kiya hai...is par Daad, par aise feeling ko daad se jyada dua ki zarurat hai jo Naresh jee ne bhi dii hai..
Hum bhi dua kareNge Allah aapki us mohobbat ko kamyaab kare..aameen

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez.......


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neelgold

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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2010, 04:08:11 AM »

Thanks a lot ....... Anshu ji

Aree aise koi baat nahi .......
Par app ki duaon ke liye shukriya ... beeti purani batain , Kuch dabe hue unkahe ehsas jo shyd mere khyal se har kissi ki jindagi main hote honge bus maine unne shabd dene ki khosish ki hai ... main janti hoon muze words bi nahi milte par fir bi likhne ki ek choti si khosish ki hai

Pasand aye Dil se behad shukriya Janab..........

Quote from: Anshumali on September 18, 2010, 12:13:57 AM

Very Impressive ... Bhagwaan se duaa karta hoon ... aapka pyar aapko Zarur mil jaye ...

khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...


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neelgold

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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #4 on: September 18, 2010, 04:12:24 AM »

Thanks a lot Shihab Ji ....

Hausla badne ke liye behad shukriya janab...

Ek baat jaroor bolongi aap ki yeh pic jo lagyi hai apne.. like it vry much .......

Keep smiling alwyaz.......

Quote from: Shihab on September 18, 2010, 02:39:30 AM

Bahut Khub Neelgold Ji
Dil Ke Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Mein
Bahut Achchey Se Piroya Hai Aapney.

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~


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neelgold

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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2010, 04:16:28 AM »

Parwaaz ji ... Thanks a lot ......

U feel it tht's more than enof for me... Dont knoe much about writing but i m sure that ki agar app dil se likhte ho to padne vale bi dil se padte hai .... ya ki youn kahiye .. Dil ki baat dil taak poonch hi jati hai .....

Apki dua ke liye shukriya ...

Thanks .....
Keep smiling..!!!!

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 18, 2010, 02:53:24 AM


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2010, 09:38:36 PM »

Bahut khoob SONA Ji


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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2010, 10:24:33 PM »

Hmmmm... to kahaan se shuru kiya jaaye... shuru se ya jahan aapne chhoda tha wahaan se.... haan aapko poem likhna nahi aata, aapko pata nahi hai shayari kise kehte hain... aapko shabdon ko sajaana nahi aataa... koi rules nahi pata ki poems kaise likhe jaate hain... nahi aata aapko shabdon ko maala me pirona... par jo aapko aata hai wo shayad kisi aur ko nahi aata... haan aapko aata hai apne shabdon ki jaadugari se logon ke dil me bas jaanaaa, aapko aata hai dil ki gehraayi me utar jaanaa, aapko aata hai eshaason ko khoobsurat andaaz me pesh karna, aapko aata hai ki kaise apno ka dil jeeta jaaye... yahi wajah hai ki ghoom ghoom ke aapke poems padhta hoon... aapko nahi pata aapke na hone se hum kya miss kar rahe the... aapka andaaz hi alag hai... sach dil khush ho gaya aapki ye post padhke... ek ek sher jaise khud me ek poori kahaani ho... bahut khoob Neel ji bahut khoob...!!!

kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai humne shayad aapko pasand aaye...!!!

kahaani hai ye har dhadkan ki har dil ki,
kisi ki judai to kisi ki manzil ki,

kuch aisi hi kahaani hamaari bhi hai mere dost,
tumne kahaa to hum bhi chup na reh paaye mere dost,

thi ek shehzaadi jo khwaabon me aati thi hamaare,
aake tadpa jaati thi humein shaam savere,

uski ek jhalak se chehre pe muskaan aa jati thi,
jiski har maasoom si adaa dil ko lubhaati thi,

kehte the hum use apna sachcha dost, sachcha saathi,
par shayad wo mere liye dost nahi kuch aur hi thi,

sochte rahe umra bhar ki kya naata hai usse hamaara,
par samajh na paaye ab tak kya rishta hai usse hamaara,

har rishte se badhke lagta usse wo rishta mera,
par sach ko kabhi samajh hi na paaya dil mera,

achcha lagta tha uske sang hasna khilkhilaana,
dil khush hota tha hamaara dekh uska muskuraana,

aankhon me kuch aisi kashish uski ki kya bataun,
lagta tha koi sharaab ka pyaala ho aur main pi jaun,

kuch alag hi baat thi uske har andaaz har baat mein,
ki wo yaad aati thi humein har subah har raat mein.

ab bhi yaad aati hai uski mujhe jab tanha hota hoon,
bas yaad kar un dino ko tanhaai me main rota hoon,

keh nahi paaya jo baat thi dil me mere uske liye,
dosti ka hi naam diya maine apne pyaar ka uske liye,

ab sochta hoon kaash keh paata main usse apne dil ki baat,
aaj uske mohabbat ke chirag se roshan ho raha hota mera har din ,
meri har raat,

par ab bahut der ho chuki hai khud ko ye samjhaata hoon main,
kehta to khud ki bhool ja use,
par sach to ye hai ki aaj bhi use chaahta hoon main...


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neelgold

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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2010, 11:22:44 PM »

OMG Kapil yaar.......

Bus bus itni tareef karonge to moti ho jaongi .. yaar age hi bhut workout karna padta hai ...
Muze ek baat samz nahi ati tum tareef ke liye itne words itni sari batian late kahan se ho .. you knoe muze nahi milte ... mere do char words hai tareef karne ke usi se kaam chala leti hoon ...
But you knoe itne sab logon ki tareef jab milti hai na to hausla badh jata hai .....
Tahe dil se shukriya Dost ...s achi ......Thanks a lot!!!!!!

& ur poem is awesum ........ full f feelings .... apne aap main puri ek kahani ...jaise ki tumne kaha .... very very gud ...

Thnaks.........

Quote from: klaskar on September 18, 2010, 10:24:33 PM

Hmmmm... to kahaan se shuru kiya jaaye... shuru se ya jahan aapne chhoda tha wahaan se.... haan aapko poem likha nahi aata, aapko pata nahi hai shayari kise kehte hain... aapko shabdon ko sajaana nahi aataa... koi rules nahi pata ki poems kaise likhe jaate hain... nahi aata aapko shabdon ko maala me pirona... par jo aapko aata hai wo shayad kisi aur ko nahi aata... haan aapko aata hai apne shabdon ki jaadugari se lohon ke dil me bas jaanaaa, aapko aata hai dil ki gehraayi me utar jaanaa, aapko aata hai eshaason ko khoobsurat andaaz me pesh karna, aapko aata hai ki kaise apno ka dil jeeta jaaye... yahi wajah hai ki ghoom ghoom ke aapke poems padhta hoon... aapko nahi pata aapke na hone se hum kya miss kar rahe the... aapka andaaz hi alag hai... sach dil khush ho gaya aapki ye post padhke... ek ek sher jaise khud me ek poori kahaani ho... bahut khoob Neel ji bahut khoob...!!!

kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai humne shayad aapko pasand aaye...!!!
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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2010, 12:02:30 AM »

Thank you hai ji...!!!

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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2010, 11:37:31 AM »

bahut khoob neelgold ji.
sundar tareeke se ehsaason ko piroya hai.
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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2010, 11:39:19 AM »

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Neelji

Bahuttttt Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas!!!

Just Loved it


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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2010, 01:29:07 PM »

Fabulous ... I am very impress with the lovely creation... You made me cry...

Wonderful creation , very sensitive feelings... Appreciable !!!

Applause

And Kapil ji.. YOu too did a great job.. Very Very Nice Creation.. !!! Applause


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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2010, 01:50:09 PM »

Bahut khoob neel ji bahut dard hai apki kavita mein...toooooooo gud ji...


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neelgold

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Re: Kyon hum mil ke bi na mile..................... ( SONA)

«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2010, 07:23:16 PM »

Rajesh ji Thanks a lot!!!!!!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 18, 2010, 09:38:36 PM

Bahut khoob SONA Ji


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