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Tum hi se mera chaand khiltha tha
Tum hi se mujhe chandni milati thi
Tum hi se meri subaah hoti thi
Tum hi se meri sham dhalati thi
Tum hi se mehkati har kali thi
Tum hi se har phool khila kartha tha
Tum hi to bas ek mere apnae the
Tum hi se sub gilae-sikave karte the
Tum hi to chahat meri huva karti thi
Tum hi se mera dil machala karta tha
Tum hi se meri zindagi huva karti thi
Tum hi se mere sare silsiley hote the
Jab tujh hi se mujhe sub kuchh mila tha
Fir kyon na mujh ko miley tum ??
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«Reply #1 on: August 17, 2010, 09:00:20 AM » |
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bht pyara likha hai aapne rancho ji.....
yunhi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: August 17, 2010, 09:02:09 AM » |
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sukriya anamika ji...
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«Reply #3 on: August 17, 2010, 09:04:57 AM » |
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bahut Ache Rancho ji..
Bahut Khoob 
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«Reply #4 on: August 17, 2010, 09:49:19 AM » |
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sukriya khwaish ji...
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«Reply #5 on: August 17, 2010, 06:22:31 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Khayaal hai.... per past tense per kyuN janab aaj ka bhi kah dete ke aaj ka kya haal hai...... 
Achchi koshish hai daad janab........
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2010, 09:41:06 AM » |
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wah
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2010, 10:28:04 AM » |
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 10:31:53 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Khayaal hai.... per past tense per kyuN janab aaj ka bhi kah dete ke aaj ka kya haal hai......
Achchi koshish hai daad janab........ sukriya dost.. par aaj yeh aalam hai ki kya kahe.. chali ussi andaz me fir se kahete hai..
Na ab mera chaand khiltha hai
Aur nahi ab mujhe chandni milati hai
Meri subaah bhi ab hoti hai
Aur meri sham bhi yun hi dhalati hai
Mmehkati to har kali aaj bhi
Aur har phool bhi khila kartha hai
Bas aab ek uska nam nahi mere apnae main
Fir kya aab gilae-sikave kareein
Na rahi ab woh chahat meri
Aur nahi ab yeh dil machalata hai
Na rahi ab woh zindagi meri
Par mere sare silsiley chalte hai
Jab sab kuchh mil ke bhi mujhe kuchh nahi mila
Isliye aaj yeh intezar nahi raha
kyon na mujh ko miley woh??
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2010, 10:59:37 AM » |
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wah ek aur alag andaaz.... 
sukriya dost.. par aaj yeh aalam hai ki kya kahe.. chali ussi andaz me fir se kahete hai..
Na ab mera chaand khiltha hai
Aur nahi ab mujhe chandni milati hai
Meri subaah bhi ab hoti hai
Aur meri sham bhi yun hi dhalati hai
Mmehkati to har kali aaj bhi
Aur har phool bhi khila kartha hai
Bas aab ek uska nam nahi mere apnae main
Fir kya aab gilae-sikave kareein
Na rahi ab woh chahat meri
Aur nahi ab yeh dil machalata hai
Na rahi ab woh zindagi meri
Par mere sare silsiley chalte hai
Jab sab kuchh mil ke bhi mujhe kuchh nahi mila
Isliye aaj yeh intezar nahi raha
kyon na mujh ko miley woh??
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2010, 11:04:58 AM » |
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wah dost kuchh bahut purana ghaav aaj hara kar diya~
he samandar or dariya meri shayari me samaye huye,
or me ab bhi "Abhi" ek boond pyaar ko pyasa hun~
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 11:08:59 AM » |
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wah kya baat hai koyal ji, fir se aapka sukriya adaa karta hu.. |
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 11:09:40 AM » |
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abhi tumhara reply dene ka andaz bahot hi pyar hai dost wah dost kuchh bahut purana ghaav aaj hara kar diya~
he samandar or dariya meri shayari me samaye huye,
or me ab bhi "Abhi" ek boond pyaar ko pyasa hun~
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2010, 11:10:47 AM » |
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dono hi kavita aapki dil ko chhu gai....
kuch kahe bina raha nahin gaya.....
dekhiye pasand aata hai kya iss idiot ko.....
aaj bhi din ki shuruat hoti hai tere naam se
aaj bhi meri raat dhalti hai tere khayal se
aaj bhi main roti hun to tere seene se lag jati hun
aaj bhi tadapti hun to tujhe hi sab sunati hun
aaj bhi tere khayal mujhe bechain karte hain
aaj bhi teri baatein mujhe aksar rulati hain
aaj bhi main kai baar khadi hoti hun tere saamne
aaj bhi tujhme main apna hi aks paati hun
aak bhi ye dil tujhse hi pyaar karta hai
aaj bhi main bas tera intezar karti hun...
haan janu main aaj bhi bas tujhi se pyaar karti hun..!!!
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