"Laut Aaounga Toumhare Liye..."

by Amanush... on June 14, 2005, 11:31:34 AM
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Laut Aaounga Toumhare Liye...!(Pehchaan paaogi...? )

Meri Jaan to nahin jaayegi ek aur gham ke liye
Mere dil main ek jagah hai ek aur gham ke liye

Mein tere paas hi laut.ta houn naye chot ke liye
Jab jism par jagah nahin ek aur zakham ke liye

Kitne hi waade kiye hai tumne sirf torne ke liye
Meri wafaa tarasti hai teri ek aur kasam ke liye

Sazaa hum ko mili hai jaane kaun si galti ke liye
Keisse daaman pheilaaoun ek aur raham ke liye

Saare umbra kho diye humne teri talaash ke liye
Par tera har ek lamhaa tha ek aur sanam ke liye

Shaayad ye janam kam tha toujhe paane ke liye
Toumhare liye laut aaounga ek aur janam ke liye

Andheron main kouch dikhta nahin chalne ke liye
Khojta houn ek dagar mere ek aur kadam ke liye

Eh Khuda!Zinda hai “Amanush”ek waham ke liye
Haanth jorta houn bas tere ek aur karam ke liye


Amanush...

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vikas2210
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2005, 12:07:36 PM »
bahot khuub aman ji

bahut hi acche..............................
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Aryaan
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2005, 01:06:19 PM »
Bohat hi khoob Amanush................!!!!!
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Aman_rahi
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2005, 03:39:13 AM »
Amanush bhai......

bhaut khoob....yahan par bhi apne bhai ki daad kabool karoo.....
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2005, 04:25:12 AM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Laut Aaounga Toumhare Liye...!(Pehchaan paaogi...? )

Meri Jaan to nahin jaayegi ek aur gham ke liye
Mere dil main ek jagah hai ek aur gham ke liye

Mein tere paas hi laut.ta houn naye chot ke liye
Jab jism par jagah nahin ek aur zakham ke liye

Kitne hi waade kiye hai tumne sirf torne ke liye
Meri wafaa tarasti hai teri ek aur kasam ke liye

Sazaa hum ko mili hai jaane kaun si galti ke liye
Keisse daaman pheilaaoun ek aur raham ke liye

Saare umbra kho diye humne teri talaash ke liye
Par tera har ek lamhaa tha ek aur sanam ke liye

Shaayad ye janam kam tha toujhe paane ke liye
Toumhare liye laut aaounga ek aur janam ke liye

Andheron main kouch dikhta nahin chalne ke liye
Khojta houn ek dagar mere ek aur kadam ke liye

Eh Khuda!Zinda hai “Amanush”ek waham ke liye
Haanth jorta houn bas tere ek aur karam ke liye


Amanush...

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wah amanush,bohat hi khoob,har lafz me dard ka khazana hai,likhte rahiyega.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2005, 04:32:01 AM »
bahot khoob...........amanus........................... ..............
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2005, 03:31:24 PM »
beautiful chachu!!!

"Mein tere paas hi laut.ta houn naye chot ke liye
Jab jism par jagah nahin ek aur zakham ke liye

Kitne hi waade kiye hai tumne sirf torne ke liye
Meri wafaa tarasti hai teri ek aur kasam ke liye "


yeh liens to bohot hi pasand aye mujhe!!!!!

 :D
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nikki
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2005, 03:33:38 PM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Laut Aaounga Toumhare Liye...!(Pehchaan paaogi...? )

Meri Jaan to nahin jaayegi ek aur gham ke liye
Mere dil main ek jagah hai ek aur gham ke liye

Mein tere paas hi laut.ta houn naye chot ke liye
Jab jism par jagah nahin ek aur zakham ke liye

Kitne hi waade kiye hai tumne sirf torne ke liye
Meri wafaa tarasti hai teri ek aur kasam ke liye

Sazaa hum ko mili hai jaane kaun si galti ke liye
Keisse daaman pheilaaoun ek aur raham ke liye

Saare umbra kho diye humne teri talaash ke liye
Par tera har ek lamhaa tha ek aur sanam ke liye

Shaayad ye janam kam tha toujhe paane ke liye
Toumhare liye laut aaounga ek aur janam ke liye

Andheron main kouch dikhta nahin chalne ke liye
Khojta houn ek dagar mere ek aur kadam ke liye

Eh Khuda!Zinda hai “Amanush”ek waham ke liye
Haanth jorta houn bas tere ek aur karam ke liye


Amanush...

 Usual Smile


bahut hi khoob ...bahut hi acha n touching likha hai aapne
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2005, 04:20:04 PM »
WOW ....yaar yeh ssunn kar aankh bhaar aayee......so nice.......haar ek line main apna meaning hai......VERY GOOD!!!
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Aarzuu
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2005, 08:47:47 PM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Laut Aaounga Toumhare Liye...!(Pehchaan paaogi...? )

Meri Jaan to nahin jaayegi ek aur gham ke liye
Mere dil main ek jagah hai ek aur gham ke liye

Mein tere paas hi laut.ta houn naye chot ke liye
Jab jism par jagah nahin ek aur zakham ke liye

Kitne hi waade kiye hai tumne sirf torne ke liye
Meri wafaa tarasti hai teri ek aur kasam ke liye

Sazaa hum ko mili hai jaane kaun si galti ke liye
Keisse daaman pheilaaoun ek aur raham ke liye

Saare umbra kho diye humne teri talaash ke liye
Par tera har ek lamhaa tha ek aur sanam ke liye

Shaayad ye janam kam tha toujhe paane ke liye
Toumhare liye laut aaounga ek aur janam ke liye

Andheron main kouch dikhta nahin chalne ke liye
Khojta houn ek dagar mere ek aur kadam ke liye

Eh Khuda!Zinda hai “Amanush”ek waham ke liye
Haanth jorta houn bas tere ek aur karam ke liye


Amanush...

 Usual Smile



Simply beautiful.............................
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2005, 06:30:51 AM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Laut Aaounga Toumhare Liye...!(Pehchaan paaogi...? )

Meri Jaan to nahin jaayegi ek aur gham ke liye
Mere dil main ek jagah hai ek aur gham ke liye

Mein tere paas hi laut.ta houn naye chot ke liye
Jab jism par jagah nahin ek aur zakham ke liye

Kitne hi waade kiye hai tumne sirf torne ke liye
Meri wafaa tarasti hai teri ek aur kasam ke liye

Sazaa hum ko mili hai jaane kaun si galti ke liye
Keisse daaman pheilaaoun ek aur raham ke liye

Saare umbra kho diye humne teri talaash ke liye
Par tera har ek lamhaa tha ek aur sanam ke liye

Shaayad ye janam kam tha toujhe paane ke liye
Toumhare liye laut aaounga ek aur janam ke liye

Andheron main kouch dikhta nahin chalne ke liye
Khojta houn ek dagar mere ek aur kadam ke liye

Eh Khuda!Zinda hai “Amanush”ek waham ke liye
Haanth jorta houn bas tere ek aur karam ke liye


Amanush...

 Usual Smile


wahhhhhhhhhh.................... veryyyyyyyyyyy nice.....................
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Amanush...
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2005, 08:46:37 AM »
@ Vikas ji...! Daad ke liye bahout shukriya...!

 @ Aryan ji...! Isse pasand karne ke liye bahout dhanyavaad...!

 @ Aman Bhai...! Aap ke daad sar ankhon par...!Bahout shukriya...!

 @ Nidhi ji...! Hausla baDhaane ke liye aap ka shukriya...!

 @ Waheed ji...! Aap ka hamesha hamare kalaam ka taeef karna bahout acha lagta hai...!Younhi aate rahiyega!

 @ Meena Beti...! Chachu ko younhi hausla dete rehna...thik hai?

 @ Nikki ji...! Aap ko bhi hamari kavita pasand aayi...hum bahout khoush houe...thanks so much!

 @ Isha ji...! So nice to know that you like this one too...!Thanks a lot!

 @ Aarzuu ji...! Thanks for appreciating and keep coming...!

 @ Khushiiiii ji...! Bahout hi dhanyavaad...!

Aap sab apna apna khayaal rakhiyega...thik hai ?Aur deri se jawaab dene
ke liye hum maafi ke paatra hein...! Usual Smile

Amanush...

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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2010, 02:12:35 PM »
waah kya baat hai, icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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