Main ab bhi jee raha hun!

by mohdabrar on November 04, 2013, 01:26:54 PM
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Baarish mein hun khada hua, jal raha main na bujh raha hun,
Aag hai yeh kaisi lagi, na chal raha main na ruk raha hun,

Hun qaid pinjre mein lekin, hun kahan main na samajh raha hun,
Aashiyan se hun dur kahin, parinda hun main udd raha hun,

Manzil,raaste,humsafar,Mohabbat, yeh main kya soch raha hun,
Haste khelte is nadan dil se, jane kyun main khel raha hun,

Udti kati patang ko dekh main, dheeme se kyun has raha hun,
Bachpan ki un yaadon ko main, yaad kar ab taras raha hun,

Zindagi se haar raha main, fir bhi kyun usse lad raha hun,
Kya likhun kaafiye ghazal ke, Jab sher hi na samajh raha hun,

Mar gaya hun sawar raha hun, dekh main kya kar raha hun,
Mar kar main mara na raha, "Abrar" main ab bhi jee raha hun...
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«Reply #1 on: November 04, 2013, 01:44:13 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah Abrar saab behad khoob... badi hi achchi kalaam hui.. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho..
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2013, 01:52:44 PM »
Zindagi se haar raha main, fir bhi kyun usse lad raha hun,
Kya likhun kaafiye ghazal ke, Jab sher hi na samajh raha hun,

Waah-waah kya bat hai bahut khoob.
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khujli
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2013, 02:08:19 PM »
Baarish mein hun khada hua, jal raha main na bujh raha hun,
Aag hai yeh kaisi lagi, na chal raha main na ruk raha hun,

Hun qaid pinjre mein lekin, hun kahan main na samajh raha hun,
Aashiyan se hun dur kahin, parinda hun main udd raha hun,

Manzil,raaste,humsafar,Mohabbat, yeh main kya soch raha hun,
Haste khelte is nadan dil se, jane kyun main khel raha hun,

Udti kati patang ko dekh main, dheeme se kyun has raha hun,
Bachpan ki un yaadon ko main, yaad kar ab taras raha hun,

Zindagi se haar raha main, fir bhi kyun usse lad raha hun,
Kya likhun kaafiye ghazal ke, Jab sher hi na samajh raha hun,

Mar gaya hun sawar raha hun, dekh main kya kar raha hun,
Mar kar main mara na raha, "Abrar" main ab bhi jee raha hun...

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«Reply #4 on: November 04, 2013, 07:41:18 PM »
waah waah
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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #5 on: November 04, 2013, 11:26:24 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2013, 10:25:12 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah Abrar saab behad khoob... badi hi achchi kalaam hui.. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho..

Bohot bohot Shukriyah Aqsh sahab... yunhi saath dete rahe...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,
Abrar.
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mohdabrar
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2013, 10:26:21 PM »
Zindagi se haar raha main, fir bhi kyun usse lad raha hun,
Kya likhun kaafiye ghazal ke, Jab sher hi na samajh raha hun,

Waah-waah kya bat hai bahut khoob.

Bohot bohot shukriyah ravi Jii..
yunhi saath dete rahe...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,
Abrar.
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2013, 10:27:03 PM »
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Bohot bohot shukriyah Janaab, aate rahe...

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,
Abrar.
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mohdabrar
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«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2013, 10:27:40 PM »
waah waah

Shukriyah Saini Ji,

Duaon ke saath Ijazat,
Abrar
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2013, 10:28:22 PM »
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Shukriyah Rajan sahab...

Duaon ke saath ijazat,
Abrar.
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Saman Firdaus
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«Reply #11 on: November 17, 2013, 10:38:14 PM »
Wahh!!! wahh!!! wahh!!! behad umda... bahot hi khoob...
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«Reply #12 on: November 17, 2013, 10:43:23 PM »
umdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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