Main Tujhse Juda Hokar Kehta Bhi Kya "Khwaish"

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Yeh Nazm Ek Aise Insaan Ki Zubaani Hai Jo Apne Mehboob Se Juda Hokar,
Apne Aap Se Kuch Sawaal karta Hai,
Ke Aakhir Main Usse Juda Hone Ke Ilaawa Aur Kar Bhi Kya Sakta Tha ??
Kuch Uski Majbooriyan, Kuch Pareshaaniyan Aur Ek Aisa Dard,
Jo yeh Sawaal Paida Kar Deta Hai Ke Usse Juda Hokar Main Kya Kehta Usse...
Umeed Karta Hoon Yeh Ehsaas Aap sab ke Dil Ko chuu Sake..Shukriya..


Main Tujhse Juda Hokar Kehta Bhi Kya???

Ke Tujhse Juda Hote Waqt,
mere Aankhon Mein Nami Thi
Har Cheez Thi Paas mere
Par Teri Kami Thi 

Kya Tujhe Mere Uss Baat Par AItbaar Hota!!!
Kya Tujhse Ab Aur Intezaar Hota!!!

Tu Uss Dard Ko Aur Ab sehta Bhi Kya!!!
Main Tujhse Juda Hokar Kehta Bhi kya???

Tujh Bin Jeena Mere Liye Bhi Asaan Nahi,
Ishq To ishq Hai Koi pal Do Pal ka Mehmaan Nahi
Kaash mere paas Kuch pal To Aur Hota
Aaj Tujhe Yaad Kar main Naa Rota

Inn Aankhon mein Ashko Ke Siwa Aur Behta Bhi Kya!!!
Main Tujhse Juda Hokar Kehta Bhi Kya???

 Mujhe Aaj Bhi Yeh Yakeen Zaroor Hai,
Tu Dil Ke Paas hai chaahe faaslo mein Door Hai!!!
Yehi Duniya Hai har Koi Yahan Majboor Hai!!
Kayi Khwaabo Ki Tasveer Toothkar Choor Hai!!

Kisi Se Bichad Kar Koi Khush Rehta Bhi Kya!!!
Main Tujhse Juda Hokar Kehta Bhi Kya???

faasle badhne Se Rishte Mar To Nahi jaate,
Par Sach To yeh Hai Ke Kuch Baaki Rehta Bhi Nahi
Door Hone Se Dooriyan badh Hi jaati Hai!!
Chaahe Lafzon se Koi yeh Baat kehta Bhi Nahi!!!

Jahan Majbooriyan sab Bol De,Wahan Main Chup Rehta Bhi Kya!!!
 Main Tujhse Juda Hokar  Kehta Bhi Kya???


Kuch Rishte Ehsaas Ke Dhaage Mein Piroye Hote Hai,
  Kuch Lamho Ko Bas Yaad kar Hum Rote Hai
 Kuch Ashko Ko palkon mein Qaid kar Sote Hai
 Koi Chaahkar To Apno Se Door Nahi Hote Hai!!!!
 
"Khwaish" Dil To Dil hai Yeh Chup Rehta Bhi Kya!!!
  Main Tujhse Juda Hokar Kehta Bhi Kya???

                     ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2011, 01:07:09 PM »
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lajawaab shayari

Very wonderful
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2011, 04:19:42 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause

lajawaab shayari

Very wonderful

Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Noorji..

Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega... icon_flower

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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2011, 04:37:40 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2011, 11:04:42 PM »
Dost,
Mere dil kay zakhmon ki awaz suna di apne mujhe..
Main sirf wah wah aur wah keh sakta hoon mager tariff kay liye itne shabd nahin mere paas..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2011, 07:05:11 AM »
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Inn Taaliyon Ki Ghoonj To yahan Tak pahunch Gayi Sureshji Par pata nahi Aapke Lafz Kahan Ghoom gaye??? tongue3 tongue3

Aapka Humesha Ki tarah Bahut bahut Shukriya icon_flower


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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2011, 08:15:29 AM »
Dost,
Mere dil kay zakhmon ki awaz suna di apne mujhe..
Main sirf wah wah aur wah keh sakta hoon mager tariff kay liye itne shabd nahin mere paas..
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Khush rahiye..!

Mujhe Aise Hi Comments ka Intezaar Tha Jo Dil Se Nikle Ho, Aapka Tehhhhhhhhhhhhh Dilllllll Se shukriya Bhai Rahim..

Yuhi Huemsha Saath Dete rahiyega Dost!!! icon_flower


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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2011, 09:56:42 AM »
wah wah khwaishji... bahut khub likha hai aapne....

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rishto main ahsas agar zinda rahta.
fir tu mujhko chhod ke ik pal na rahta.
dard bhari rahon mian gar sath aata tu,
kyo ye safar itna dard bhara rahta.......
 
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2011, 11:27:14 AM »
wah.
Kuch der ke liye main to kho gaya is me.
Bahot khoob likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2011, 01:46:11 PM »
wah wah khwaishji... bahut khub likha hai aapne....

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

rishto main ahsas agar zinda rahta.
fir tu mujhko chhod ke ik pal na rahta.
dard bhari rahon mian gar sath aata tu,
kyo ye safar itna dard bhara rahta.......
 

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut shukriya Anju ji...

Yuhi Saath dete rahiyega... icon_flower

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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2011, 01:59:51 PM »
kya kahne khwaish ji...
bht bht bht khoob...
2nd last is very nice..
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2011, 03:45:03 PM »
wah.
Kuch der ke liye main to kho gaya is me.
Bahot khoob likha hai aapne.
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Aapne Inn Ehsaaso Ko Mehsoos Kiya Issi Liye Aap Iss kalaam mein Kuch Der ke Liye Kho gaye..yuhi saath dete rahiyega,Aapka bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2011, 05:23:29 PM »
Bahut wadiya ji..
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2011, 12:01:30 PM »
kya kahne khwaish ji...
bht bht bht khoob...
2nd last is very nice..


Thankyou Soooooooo Much Priyaji.... icon_flower

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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2011, 01:10:02 PM »
Very Nice Poetry .... Khwaish Ji !

dil se daad ........ Applause Applause Applause
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