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mere geeto mein jo tumhe aag dikhaai deti hai
yeh toh woh sach jo apni jubaan khud hi kehti hai
dard jitne mile hain mujh ko zamaane se
aaj mere geeto mein bas unki taap dikhaayi deti hai
jab bhi kured deta hai koi mere zakhamo ko
ek jhankaar ,laye .aah inmein dikhaayi deti hai
kabhi toh badlega is dikhawati zamaane ka mijaaz bhi
mere geeto mein wahi ek madhur aas dikhaayi deti hai
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2006, 12:54:17 PM » |
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beete hue pal fir na doharaye jaayenge
mere geeto mein tere lafaz toh fir bhi aayenge
kis tarah daalenge hum seep mein fir se bichara moti
tute hue phoolo se kaise bagbaan meheka jaayenge
na jaane kab milegi mere bahakti zindagi ko panaah
is dil ki banjar jameen ko ab sirf mere ashq hi khila paayenge
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2006, 01:04:04 PM » |
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meri tanha raat mein fir se koi dard jaga do
band na ho meri palke ,aaj koi zakham fir se naya do
meri aankho mein ab naa aane paaye khawab koi
ab chand ,sitarro ko mera humsafar bana do
koi aa ke palko per ruki hai shab ki baraat
ek dhudhali hui is tasveer mein ab na koi rang naya do
jamti ja rahi hai sab avaaze tamaam
ek sanaate ka libaas fir se meri tanahi ko pehna do
hai nahi shikva koi mujhe tere kiye vaado se
ho sake toh apna naam hamaari in yaado se mita do
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2006, 04:52:18 PM » |
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wah kay abaat hai, bahoot khoob Ranju.....
meri kavita mai uska hi roop najar atta hai
shabdo mere, kaha naam uska ruk paata hai
her shikwa shikayat yaha ho jaati hai
haqiqat mai to baat hi nahi ho paati hai....
geeto mai usko gunguna leti hu
dil ka haal suna deti hu
apne dhoko per, ansoo baha leti hu
kuch issi tarah se khud ko bahla leti hu
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2006, 06:03:14 PM » |
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shukriya pooja ..bahut khoob likha hai ..
aakhir kab tak in lafazo ke khel mein khud ko behlaaye
koi toh aa ke ab humaare ruthe dil ko manaaye
shaam dhalte hi yeh tanha raat hame daarti hai bahut
koi jaa ke ab suraj ko fir se roshan kar aaye
jal rahi hai dil mein kuch aarzooe.n
koi ab mere ratjaago ko khawab toh dikhaaye
mere geeto mein hai sirf aqs unka
koi mere yeh geet ab toh ja ke unke kaano mein gungunaaye
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2006, 06:09:19 PM » |
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very nice sharing Ranjana...... Pooja sis........
Tere firaaq mein be-asar nahi tha main
tere khayal mujhe poochne ko aata tha....
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2006, 06:19:06 PM » |
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tere hi khyaalo mein basar hoti hain meri zindagi
har waqt teri yaado ka kaafila saath mere chalata hai
tu kehta hai apni baat chahye kisi bhi andaaz se
wahi lafaz ab mere geeto mein ja ke dhalata hai
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2006, 06:27:52 PM » |
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bahot khoob Ranajan ..... nice sharing..
yaad karta hoon jab gujre lamhon ke pal
mujhko sabar dilaati hain aankhen aansuon se
dard uthta hai jab yaadon se jakham se
marham phir lagatri hai aankhen aansuon se........
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2006, 06:41:58 AM » |
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bahut khoob waheed.....
hum apne aansu se dawa ka kaam lete hain
yeh zheher hum hanste hanste gale se utaar lete hain
baat hoti hai ek choti si ishq mein yahan per
log afsaana bana ke khawabo ko tod diya karte hain
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2006, 08:24:22 AM » |
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woow nice thread
very good Ranjana Pooja and Waheed
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2006, 08:25:26 AM » |
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yeh jo aansu hai aag bhujhane chale aate hai
ban barish ki bunde kambhakht aag aur laga jate hai....
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2006, 08:39:06 AM » |
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shukriya Vikas........
kabhi kabhi aisa bhi ho jaata hai
aasaman bhi dard dekh ke hamara aansu bahta hai
tab boonde nahi barasti in badalo se
yeh barsta paani aur aag laga jaata hai
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2006, 08:42:20 AM » |
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good ranju.....
aasman mera mere sang roya karta hai
jahan bhi jata hun dard saath chala aata hai
chod diya hai maine maikhane mai jana
muhko har paimane mai tera chehra nazar aata hai
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2006, 08:51:40 AM » |
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good one....
har chehre mein talasha hai unhe
ek ajnabipan hi haath aaya
jab bhi uthaya duao ke liye haath
khuda bhi na jaane kyu laga paraaya
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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2006, 09:16:00 AM » |
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paraya hai dard mera
apna kuch bhi nahi
tere dil mai koi aur hai
teri yaado pe bhi mera koi haq nahi
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