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aaj phir se hum tujhko bhula aaye
phir se apni yaadein dafna aaye
kar aaye hai khuda se ek dua phir se
tu jeeye hazaro saal aur
teri baghiya mai khinza kabhi na aaye
na hansengi yeh aan khe aaj ke baad kabhi
pata hai manjur ho jayegi yeh sada meri
apni aakno ka noor hum kisi aur ko de aaye
jo vida hogi teri doli aaj tere aangan se
kasam khuda ki na lunga saans ek aur bhi pal
jahe kkuda khud zameen pe utar aaye
meri dadkte dil se nikalti bas ek hi sada
tere badle ke aansu bhi hum baha jaaye.....
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2006, 06:05:56 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Vikas...
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2006, 07:29:02 PM » |
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Bohot khoob Vikas
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2006, 08:53:13 PM » |
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bahoot se accha likha hai Janab!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2006, 09:44:02 AM » |
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Gud One Vikas Bhai.....!!!
Meri Khushian uski Wafa ko Raas na ayi.....
Dil toda usne Sar-e-aam or kar dee Bewafai.....
Dafan hai Armaan ab na jaane konsi yeh ghadi aayi......
Binn bulaye aayi hai Maut-e-mahobbat iss Tang Kabr me kaise le ab Angdai........
Meri Khushian uski Wafa ko Raaas na aayi.....!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2006, 10:32:32 AM » |
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yeh zindagi ki shaam kuch yun gajarati rahi
karte rahe hun wafa aur dil ki ruswaai unki milti rahi
khoye khoye se sapane kuch yun tut kar bikhar gaye
dil mein unke tuane ki kasak chubhati rahi
har aas milne ki bandhi aur tadpati rahi
zindagi ek bin maangi saja ki tarah katati rahi!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2006, 11:21:00 AM » |
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Shukriya Aaryan Talat and Tosha.
Gaurav ji Shukriya aur aapne bhi bahut accha likha hai....
Ranju very nice...
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2006, 11:52:32 AM » |
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Main Khush tha Bahut magar.....
Chal gaya yeh Mahobbat ka Safar......
Toot gayi Shaksiyat se apni Door.....
Aur hum phir rahe hai dekho Darbadar......
Galiyan unki hui band......
Aur Raste ab choot gaye hai......
Kaafila apni Chahat ka kaise paar lagaon......
Tu hee bata main ab tere liye kya Daav pe lagaon...!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2006, 09:16:07 PM » |
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Aaj hum Phir khade akele....
Aur khud se bichad rahe hai hum....
Lagta hai jaise Jaag rahi Dunia....
Aur Sadion se so rahe hai hum....
Aandhi me bhi Mahobbat ka Deep jala rahe hai hum.....
Koi nahi khair-o-Khabar poochna wala hamari....bas aankhein bhigo rahe hai hum....!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2006, 01:01:02 PM » |
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woo very nice Gaurav.....
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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2006, 01:05:48 PM » |
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khusiyon ko mari, meri hi nazar lag gai
saman ko meri, meri ho koi baat buri lag gai
merei aankho mai lagta hai barsat ki jhadi la gai
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«Reply #11 on: September 21, 2006, 01:15:41 PM » |
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roye toh they hum chupake se sabki nazare bacha ke
na jaane kaise unke dil mein koi tapad jag gayi
yeh thaa koi dard ka puranna rishta unse
ya mere baat koi unke dil ko chub gayi !!
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