Meri Pehechan

by Meena on February 04, 2005, 08:46:52 PM
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Meena
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Pehechan meri yeh hai ke ek ulji hui paheli hoon mai,
Dost jo isse suljana chahate hai unke liye koj ban gayi mai,

Mohabbat ki rahon me jo ek shaks se takrar hui to,
Uske pane ki talab me uske dil ka rog ban gayi mai,

Apno ki kushi me hi jeeti rahi zindagi tamam,
Par zimedariyon ka unke liye boj ban gayi mai,

Badakti rahi humesha apne wajood ki talash me,
Jab na mila to "Meena" har roz ban gayi mai!


Creator ji mafi chahati hoon apse permission li bina apki kavita "Woh Ladki" se inspiration li maine!
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pandit
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2005, 08:52:35 PM »
wah meena ji kya dard hai..................
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2005, 08:55:50 PM »
shukriya ji shukirya!

 :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2005, 09:02:45 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Pehechan meri yeh hai ke ek ulji hui paheli hoon mai,
Dost jo isse suljana chahate hai unke liye koj ban gayi mai,

Mohabbat ki rahon me jo ek shaks se takrar hui to,
Uske pane ki talab me uske dil ka rog ban gayi mai,

Apno ki kushi me hi jeeti rahi zindagi tamam,
Par zimedariyon ka unke liye boj ban gayi mai,

Badakti rahi humesha apne wajood ki talash me,
Jab na mila to "Meena" har roz ban gayi mai!


Creator ji mafi chahati hoon apse permission li bina apki kavita "Woh Ladki" se inspiration li maine!



iss kalam ko apney jis andaz-e-lafzo mein dhaal ker pesh-e-kidmat kiya hai woh kabil-e-tariff hai.... dil se daad kabool kijiye meena ji....
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2005, 09:08:47 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Pehechan meri yeh hai ke ek ulji hui paheli hoon mai,
Dost jo isse suljana chahate hai unke liye koj ban gayi mai,

Mohabbat ki rahon me jo ek shaks se takrar hui to,
Uske pane ki talab me uske dil ka rog ban gayi mai,

Apno ki kushi me hi jeeti rahi zindagi tamam,
Par zimedariyon ka unke liye boj ban gayi mai,

Badakti rahi humesha apne wajood ki talash me,
Jab na mila to "Meena" har roz ban gayi mai!


Creator ji mafi chahati hoon apse permission li bina apki kavita "Woh Ladki" se inspiration li maine!



chalteY rehteY hain ke chalna hai musafir ka naseeb
sochtey rehtey hian ke kis raah-guzar ke hum hain...
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2005, 09:09:07 PM »
thank u ji thank u!

 :D
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thycreator
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2005, 09:25:06 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Pehechan meri yeh hai ke ek ulji hui paheli hoon mai,
Dost jo isse suljana chahate hai unke liye koj ban gayi mai,

Mohabbat ki rahon me jo ek shaks se takrar hui to,
Uske pane ki talab me uske dil ka rog ban gayi mai,

Apno ki kushi me hi jeeti rahi zindagi tamam,
Par zimedariyon ka unke liye boj ban gayi mai,

Badakti rahi humesha apne wajood ki talash me,
Jab na mila to "Meena" har roz ban gayi mai!


Creator ji mafi chahati hoon apse permission li bina apki kavita "Woh Ladki" se inspiration li maine!


Mafi kis bat ki ji, meri kavita kisi ko inspire kare toh mere liye toh its a matter of proud na.... :wink:
Bahut accha likha apne waise..... tongue3

Khud ko kissi aur ka naam aap yu na dijiye,
Gum hai agar bheend mein, khud ko talash kijiye,
Har ek ki pehchaan bas aap(by him/herself) se hi banti hai,
Aap bhi khud ke liye bas ek pehchaan lijiye,
Rahon mein milenge apko chahne wale kai,
Apne pyar ko pehchaniye aur hath tham lijiye.
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2005, 10:05:45 PM »
thank u creator ji!

 :D

very well written!

pehechan jo apni mil jati to kyu badakte aise khud ki talash me,
majbooriyan le doobti hai insaanko,
wohi to jeene nahin deti hum is samajh me!
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2005, 10:06:43 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
Pehechan meri yeh hai ke ek ulji hui paheli hoon mai,
Dost jo isse suljana chahate hai unke liye koj ban gayi mai,

Mohabbat ki rahon me jo ek shaks se takrar hui to,
Uske pane ki talab me uske dil ka rog ban gayi mai,

Apno ki kushi me hi jeeti rahi zindagi tamam,
Par zimedariyon ka unke liye boj ban gayi mai,

Badakti rahi humesha apne wajood ki talash me,
Jab na mila to "Meena" har roz ban gayi mai!


Creator ji mafi chahati hoon apse permission li bina apki kavita "Woh Ladki" se inspiration li maine!



chalteY rehteY hain ke chalna hai musafir ka naseeb
sochtey rehtey hian ke kis raah-guzar ke hum hain...


Wahhhhhhhhhh sahi kaha apne!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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pandit
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2005, 10:07:34 PM »
nice meenaji and thyji................
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2005, 10:14:02 PM »
good work, meena sis! sincerely speaking, first two lines were not much good, rest was amazing! brilliant .. 1000 excellents....... for meena sis :hug:
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: February 04, 2005, 10:15:56 PM »
thank u heart!!!!! aur mujeh acha laga ke tumne woh bih likha jo tume pasand nahin aya. bcos galtiyon se hi insaan sikhta hai na!

 :D  :D
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thycreator
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«Reply #12 on: February 04, 2005, 10:26:27 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
thank you creator ji!

 :D

very well written!

pehechan jo apni mil jati to kyu badakte aise khud ki talash me,
majbooriyan le doobti hai insaanko,
wohi to jeene nahin deti hum is samajh me!


Majburiyan kiski nahi hoti hai ye batao jara,
Yahan har koi kahi na kahi majboor hai,
Phir bhi jindagi ko haq se jiya karte sabhi,
Tum bhi dekho dhyan se, khushi tumse door nahi.
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thycreator
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2005, 10:28:49 PM »
Quote from: "pandit"
nice meenaji and thyji................


Thanx pandit ji... tongue3
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pandit
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«Reply #14 on: February 04, 2005, 10:29:21 PM »
wah thyji...........
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