"" mujhko to chale hi jaana hai ""

by nirala on January 22, 2011, 08:39:15 AM
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Musafir hun raat ka
  mujhko to chale hi jaana hai

subah ki nai Dhoop ko
  mere naseeb me kab aana hai

musibaten taqdeer me samai hain
  inko kaise thukraana hai

khuch khushiyan hain, roothi hui si
  labon me band kuch, muskurahat bhi hain chupi hui si

haste zakhmon ko, na sahlaye koi
  muskurate ashkon ko, na behlaye koi

feeke armaano ka saath hai ab
  toote khuwabon ka hi dil me aas hai ab

musafir hun yaaron raat ka
  mujhko to chale hi jaana hai
""
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2011, 09:04:19 AM »
mast creation nirala mastana ji......

raat ko muflisi me ghut kar reh jana hai
dil jage hume to shokhiyon me lehrana hai

do do ruup hain zindagani k ee dost yahan
kabhi dard, kabhi khushi ko saamne aana hai..!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2011, 09:11:02 AM »
wah kya mast jawab hai aapka.
lekin
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gamo ke baad khusiyon ka aana zaruri nahi
  thahakon me dard ko bhul jaana bhi mumkeen nahi
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thanx K mam
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2011, 09:55:54 AM »
sahi kaha nirala mastana ji....

gamon ko yaad kar ke ansu bahana zaruri nahin
hasi me apne gum ko chhupana bhi zaruri nahin
jo mila hai use apnakar pure dil se kubul karen
har bar khuda se shikayat karte rehna koi zaruri nahin...
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2011, 10:07:20 AM »
hahah
"
aise bhi kuch log hain jahan me
   khushiyan jinhe gawara nahi
gamo me hi rahte hain bechare
   shikayat khuda se baar baar karte hain
khushiyon ko apnate nahi
   gamo ko dafnaate nahi
kuch aise bhi log hote hai jahan mei Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2011, 12:48:01 PM »
kya kahne nirala ji....
bht bht khoob....

na haar hausla.. rakh thoda sabr tu..
raat ko to dhal hi jaana hai...
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2011, 01:26:42 PM »
"
raat ko to dhal hi jaana hai
     raat ke baad fir raat hi aana hai--
tu abhi iss baat se anjaana hai
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thanx Manzil ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2011, 02:35:39 PM »
""
Musafir hun raat ka
  mujhko to chale hi jaana hai

subah ki nai Dhoop ko
  mere naseeb me kab aana hai

musibaten taqdeer me samai hain
  inko kaise thukraana hai

khuch khushiyan hain, roothi hui si
  labon me band kuch, muskurahat bhi hain chupi hui si

haste zakhmon ko, na sahlaye koi
  muskurate ashkon ko, na behlaye koi

feeke armaano ka saath hai ab
  toote khuwabon ka hi dil me aas hai ab

musafir hun yaaron raat ka
  mujhko to chale hi jaana hai
""

Very Nice Creation ....... Nirala Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... !

khush rahen ...
duaaoN ke saath ...
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nirala
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 02:58:06 PM »
thanx
anshumali ji.
par aaap super shayr hain
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2011, 05:32:57 PM »
Bahut Khub Nirala Ji U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye
And Nice Reply Anamika Ji


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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 05:38:26 PM »
bahut saara sukriya Rishi ji.
aap bhi kuch likhte to achha lagta.
umda shayr hain aap--
dost hai humare kuch Khatta meetha sa likhte at least.
"
thanx
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2011, 12:07:58 AM »
bahut khoob nirala ji as usual. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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