Na Raha Koi Gila Unse,.

by Jaanasheen on July 15, 2009, 06:33:56 AM
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Umr Bhar Raha Faasla Unse,.
Na Raha Magar Koi Gila Unse,.

Rota Raha Tanhaaiyon Mein Aksar,.
Muskura Baitha Jab Bhi Mila Unse,.

Sitam Se Bhi Unke Khushi Milti,.
Kuch Aisa Taalukh Raha Unse,.

Wo Bewafai Bhi Kare To Koi Baat Nahi,.
Mera Hi Dil Jaa Laga Unse,.

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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2009, 06:37:34 AM »
Bahut Khoob Azeem, Bahut aacha likha hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kya kasoor nikale unka jab apna hi
dil mujhe chod pyaar jatata raha unse..

Socha tha ki daman hi choot raha hai
na maloom tha mohabbat ka saath bhi jaata raha unse,

Kis kadar bikharte hai armaan toot kar
jab door jaaye koi kaash koi batlaye unse..

Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2009, 07:16:26 AM »
Bahut Acche Azeem & Shally... Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai aap Dono Ne.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2009, 07:21:16 AM »
Bahut Khoob Azeem Ji And Shally Ji.
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2009, 08:20:54 AM »
Dhool meri turbat ki guzarti hain unki gali se

Kuch is tarah baad-e-kaza rishta raha unse...
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2009, 09:33:50 AM »
waah bahut acche Azeem bhai ...  bahut khoob... khaskar 3rd sher ... haan hota hai yun bhi ... unke ghum mien hi sakuun milta hai ... yhi ishq ka silsila hai .... na ranjish hai koi na gila hai ....  khair .... kucch ashar hamari aur se .... dil ka dard hai jubaan pe aa gya...




Mere dard ki bi koi dawa nahin
Jo chaha woh kabhi mila nahin

yun hath to milaye har kissi se
Magar kissi se dil mila nahin

usne zakham dar zakham diye mujhko
Phir bhi usse mujhe koi gila nahin!!


HumTum
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2009, 09:36:07 AM »
Mahut khoob Chote Bhai
N all other jis ne yahan mehfil jamai hai
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2009, 09:54:08 AM »

 kyaa khoob likhaa hai janaab Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2009, 10:35:55 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai aapne azeem ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2009, 02:25:26 PM »
Quote from: k.shael on July 15, 2009, 06:37:34 AM
Bahut Khoob Azeem, Bahut aacha likha hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kya kasoor nikale unka jab apna hi
dil mujhe chod pyaar jatata raha unse..

Socha tha ki daman hi choot raha hai
na maloom tha mohabbat ka saath bhi jaata raha unse,

Kis kadar bikharte hai armaan toot kar
jab door jaaye koi kaash koi batlaye unse..

Shally.

Shukriya Shaly And Nice LInes Yaar,.
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«Reply #10 on: July 16, 2009, 07:28:38 AM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mann Ji, Sammual Ji, Rajesh Ji, Shihab Ji & Ajeem Ji.. notworthy  notworthy

Shally.
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2009, 09:33:52 AM »
Quote from: Mann on July 15, 2009, 07:16:26 AM
Bahut Acche Azeem & Shally... Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai aap Dono Ne.. Applause Applause


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Shukriya Mann Bhai,.
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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2009, 09:47:01 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on July 15, 2009, 06:33:56 AM
Umr Bhar Raha Faasla Unse,.
Na Raha Magar Koi Gila Unse,.

Rota Raha Tanhaaiyon Mein Aksar,.
Muskura Baitha Jab Bhi Mila Unse,.

Sitam Se Bhi Unke Khushi Milti,.
Kuch Aisa Taalukh Raha Unse,.

Wo Bewafai Bhi Kare To Koi Baat Nahi,.
Mera Hi Dil Jaa Laga Unse,.

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bahut bahut umda likha hai Azeem Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 16, 2009, 09:47:34 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Azeem bhai,wonderful creation,beautiful lines by Shally ji,
Shihab ji,Hum Tum ji,Dastbardaar ji. Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2009, 09:54:01 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on July 15, 2009, 06:37:34 AM
Bahut Khoob Azeem, Bahut aacha likha hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kya kasoor nikale unka jab apna hi
dil mujhe chod pyaar jatata raha unse..

Socha tha ki daman hi choot raha hai
na maloom tha mohabbat ka saath bhi jaata raha unse,

Kis kadar bikharte hai armaan toot kar
jab door jaaye koi kaash koi batlaye unse..

Shally.


too good Shally dear kamaal likha hai tumne bhi
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