~*Nahi Rehena*~

by honeyrose on September 26, 2008, 04:38:41 PM
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Nahi rehena hai mujhe teri aankhon mein
Jo kamiyab hue tum umeedon ko tohdne mein

Nahi rehena hai mujhe teri saanson mein
Tasveer na dikhao humen ashq nikalte hai aankhon mein

Nahi muskurana hai mujhe teri khushyon mein
Pahunchuna chahun dil tak zakhm bangaye khwabon mein

Nahi jeena tere dil mein nafrat ban gaye ho dil mein
Kuch haseel hoga tujhe mere muhabbat paane mein

Nahi shamil hona teri zindagi ke raahon mein
Pathar dil ko chaha aur dil toota jazbaaton mein


^^**honeyrose**^^
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2008, 04:43:19 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB HONEY DIDI,
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2008, 04:45:58 PM »
bohat achha khayal likha apne.... honey ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2008, 04:48:48 PM »
kya khoob likhti ho,
bada sunder likhti ho
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2008, 04:50:53 PM »

Good one HR ji.... Keep it up.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2008, 04:52:28 PM »
Thank you so much Shally dear... notworthy

Shukriya Saurabh ji.. notworthy

Shukriya Sanjeev ji... notworthy

Thank so much natural... notworthy
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2008, 05:10:48 PM »
Nahi rehena hai mujhe teri aankhon mein
Jo kamiyab hue tum umeedon ko tohdne mein

Nahi rehena hai mujhe teri saanson mein
Tasveer na dikhao humen ashq nikalte hai aankhon mein

Nahi muskurana hai mujhe teri khushyon mein
Pahunchuna chahun dil tak zakhm bangaye khwabon mein

Nahi jeena tere dil mein nafrat ban gaye ho dil mein
Kuch haseel hoga tujhe mere muhabbat paane mein

Nahi shamil hona teri zindagi ke raahon mein
Pathar dil ko chaha aur dil toota jazbaaton mein


^^**honeyrose**^^

Sentimental and very Touching...
OverAll.. A very good work.. HoneyRose.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2008, 05:53:53 PM »
Thank you Mahiya... notworthy
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2008, 06:32:03 PM »
nafraton ke is mahal me ab mujhe nahi rahna,
tumhe bhala lage ya bura, chup mujhe ab nahi rahna,
bahoot gumgeen hun, bahoot siska hun tanha mai,
khule aakash ko chumunga, ab is kaid me nahi rahna

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«Reply #9 on: September 26, 2008, 06:52:45 PM »
nafraton ke is mahal me ab mujhe nahi rahna,
tumhe bhala lage ya bura, chup mujhe ab nahi rahna,
bahoot gumgeen hun, bahoot siska hun tanha mai,
khule aakash ko chumunga, ab is kaid me nahi rahna



Bahut khoob Sanjeev ji..
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«Reply #10 on: September 26, 2008, 06:53:56 PM »
Nahi rehena hai mujhe teri aankhon mein
Jo kamiyab hue tum umeedon ko tohdne mein

Nahi rehena hai mujhe teri saanson mein
Tasveer na dikhao humen ashq nikalte hai aankhon mein

Nahi muskurana hai mujhe teri khushyon mein
Pahunchuna chahun dil tak zakhm bangaye khwabon mein

Nahi jeena tere dil mein nafrat ban gaye ho dil mein
Kuch haseel hoga tujhe mere muhabbat paane mein

Nahi shamil hona teri zindagi ke raahon mein
Pathar dil ko chaha aur dil toota jazbaaton mein


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Kya baat hai Honey...itna emotional...ek ek sher se dard ka ehsaas ho raha hai...Very good work  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2008, 06:54:20 PM »
nafraton ke is mahal me ab mujhe nahi rahna,
tumhe bhala lage ya bura, chup mujhe ab nahi rahna,
bahoot gumgeen hun, bahoot siska hun tanha mai,
khule aakash ko chumunga, ab is kaid me nahi rahna



Very nice reply Sanjeev
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2008, 07:17:32 PM »
 
nafraton ke is mahal me ab mujhe nahi rahna,
tumhe bhala lage ya bura, chup mujhe ab nahi rahna,
bahoot gumgeen hun, bahoot siska hun tanha mai,
khule aakash ko chumunga, ab is kaid me nahi rahna



Very nice lines Sanjeev ji...

Thanks you so much Celmira sis..



Muhabbat unone dikhaya nahi
Khamoshi se zakhm humen sehana nahi
Sirf dard sahete sahete humen jeena seeka nahi
Aapna samaj kar aaye the gair bankar humen rahena nahi
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«Reply #13 on: September 27, 2008, 01:36:34 PM »
ITNI NAFRAT ITNI MAYUSI ITNA DARD
PARESHAN SHEHAR KO TUMNE AUR PARESHAN KAR DIYA.

                                     -SG-
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«Reply #14 on: September 27, 2008, 04:09:11 PM »
ITNI NAFRAT ITNI MAYUSI ITNA DARD
PARESHAN SHEHAR KO TUMNE AUR PARESHAN KAR DIYA.

                                     -SG-

Nice lines SG..

Chaha tha khushi gam ke siwa kuch na mila
Kyun duniya ilzaam lagaye humen jab pyaar na mila..
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