najdikiyon ka silsila mit ta chala gaya

by sunildehgawani on October 04, 2011, 09:56:57 AM
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                         kitna matlab parast ho gaya hai aadmi
 
kyon mehmaniyat najdikiyon ka silsila mit ta gaya
dusron ke liye jeene ka hausla mit ta gaya
kyon ho gaya itna khudgarj aadmi
kyon inssan ka insaaniyat se fasla hota gaya
                ab kyob ghumne tere ghar parinde nahi aate
                sahar ke geet pedon par ab pakshi nahi gate
tujhse unka bhi bharosha kyon uth ta chala gaya  
                koi mehma nahi aaya ghar hai diwali ka
                yahi jinda sboot hai teri is mehrawani ka
daliyan riston ki tu khud hi kat ta chala gaya
                yeh kaynat sari hai gulista ek mali ka
                likha hi usi ne fasana teri bhi jindgani ka
tu majahab ke darmiyan isse bant ta chala gaya
                ye manjar tabahi ke tune khud banaye hain
                tabhi to jindagi ne teri itne gum uthaye hain
tu kante raston main apne khud bichhata chala gaya
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roushan
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2011, 01:33:35 PM »
superb.....
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2011, 04:08:24 PM »

 
                         kitna matlab parast ho gaya hai aadmi
 
kyon mehmaniyat najdikiyon ka silsila mit ta gaya
dusron ke liye jeene ka hausla mit ta gaya
kyon ho gaya itna khudgarj aadmi
kyon inssan ka insaaniyat se fasla hota gaya
                ab kyob ghumne tere ghar parinde nahi aate
                sahar ke geet pedon par ab pakshi nahi gate
tujhse unka bhi bharosha kyon uth ta chala gaya 
                koi mehma nahi aaya ghar hai diwali ka
                yahi jinda sboot hai teri is mehrawani ka
daliyan riston ki tu khud hi kat ta chala gaya
                yeh kaynat sari hai gulista ek mali ka
                likha hi usi ne fasana teri bhi jindgani ka
tu majahab ke darmiyan isse bant ta chala gaya
                ye manjar tabahi ke tune khud banaye hain
                tabhi to jindagi ne teri itne gum uthaye hain
tu kante raston main apne khud bichhata chala gaya

Sunil ji,
Wah, janab kya kahne. Bahut gahri baat, ye kadwa sach aap itni asani se kah gaye.
Apki rachna bahut kuch sochne ko majboor karti hai.
Bahut umda. Har line jaandar hai.
Daad kubul kijiye.
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2011, 05:32:01 PM »
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                         kitna matlab parast ho gaya hai aadmi
 
kyon mehmaniyat najdikiyon ka silsila mit ta gaya
dusron ke liye jeene ka hausla mit ta gaya
kyon ho gaya itna khudgarj aadmi
kyon inssan ka insaaniyat se fasla hota gaya
                ab kyob ghumne tere ghar parinde nahi aate
                sahar ke geet pedon par ab pakshi nahi gate
tujhse unka bhi bharosha kyon uth ta chala gaya 
                koi mehma nahi aaya ghar hai diwali ka
                yahi jinda sboot hai teri is mehrawani ka
daliyan riston ki tu khud hi kat ta chala gaya
                yeh kaynat sari hai gulista ek mali ka
                likha hi usi ne fasana teri bhi jindgani ka
tu majahab ke darmiyan isse bant ta chala gaya
                ye manjar tabahi ke tune khud banaye hain
                tabhi to jindagi ne teri itne gum uthaye hain
tu kante raston main apne khud bichhata chala gaya
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sunildehgawani
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2011, 10:10:05 AM »
thnks rousan ji ,,,,,lazjon ko srahne ke liye
superb.....
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sunildehgawani
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2011, 10:12:13 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya hausla afjai ke liye ,,,,,aur apna beshkeemati ,,,baqt dene ke liye ,,,usha rajesh ji ,,,,
Sunil ji,
Wah, janab kya kahne. Bahut gahri baat, ye kadwa sach aap itni asani se kah gaye.
Apki rachna bahut kuch sochne ko majboor karti hai.
Bahut umda. Har line jaandar hai.
Daad kubul kijiye.
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sunildehgawani
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2011, 10:13:08 AM »
thnks ,,,
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