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by nirala on January 29, 2011, 05:43:07 PM
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nirala
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ek umra guzar gai Intezaar me
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tadapta hai ab ruuh bhi
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charaag e roshan hai ab
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Murdon ke darbaar me
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ufanti rahi zazbaaton ki lahren
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shaant padi ab 'ans' ki goonj
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bilakh rahe ab Saaz o aawaz
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dhadkane bhi khamish hain
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lafz  alfaaz  shabd  hahaha
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qurbaan the kabhi ----------
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' AnS ' ka resha resha uffff
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qayamat ki ab intehaaan si
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salaam salaam tujhko
MOHABBAT
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kishan8888
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2011, 05:21:43 AM »
nice but titel dedo kuch achha rahega Usual Smile
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sbechain
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2011, 12:12:31 PM »
ek umra guzar gai Intezaar me
   -------
tadapta hai ab ruuh bhi
   -------
charaag e roshan hai ab
   -------
Murdon ke darbaar me
   -------
ufanti rahi zazbaaton ki lahren
   -------
shaant padi ab 'ans' ki goonj
   -------
bilakh rahe ab Saaz o aawaz
   -------
dhadkane bhi khamish hain
   -------
lafz  alfaaz  shabd  hahaha
   -------
qurbaan the kabhi ----------
   -------
' AnS ' ka resha resha uffff
   ------
qayamat ki ab intehaaan si
   ------
salaam salaam tujhko
MOHABBAT

nice nirala ji
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2011, 02:14:20 PM »
thanx
mai aisi chijen nahi likhta
fir bhi apka sukriya
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2011, 02:22:47 PM »
Niarla ji iska title jab aapko samajh nahin aaya to hum kya batayen ,
alfaz achhe hain,zazbaat bhi theek hain. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2011, 02:25:39 PM »
hahaha
suresh ji
aap koi title bata do
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2011, 07:05:01 PM »
gud 1 narala ji.....
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