**~** PAIGAAM **~**

by _Vicky_ on April 13, 2006, 12:12:54 PM
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_Vicky_
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CHITRA JI.... this is specialy for  U...
dil se padiyega...............................

Kal sham se ek paigam ne, humko bahut sataya hai,
mery sanam ne khud apni shadi ka paigam jo bhijwaya hai......

khwab mere, khwab ban kar hi raha gaye meri aakhon main,
aangan ko ashqon se humne, apne bahut sajaya hai.........

socha tha ek din, wo meri dulhan ban kar aayegi,
dulhan to ban rahi hai wo, par koi aur lene use aaya hai........

hum to AKELE the, AKELE hain, AKELE hi raha jayenge,
khushiyan jo meri thi, aaj usi ne dil mera dukhaya hai......

jab jana hi tha, to kyun usne raaton ka khwab sajaya tha,
sikhaya tha jisne hans-na, usi ne aaj humko rulaya hai.......

mery muradon ki raat, wo kisi aur ke sath bitayegi,
hum manayenge matam, ab ghamo ka hum par saya hai........

tu khush rahe aabad rahe, jaye kahin par bhi tu,
teri khusi se hi khush hoon, humne to sath nibhaya hai.........

ummeed hai, gar mar gaye hum, tum jaroor aaogi,
laal jode se tune aaj, kafan jo mera banaya hai.......

ja kar uske paas, khuda se phir tujhko hi mangenge,
milenge agle janam main phir, ab yeh armaan jagaya hai.......

KAL SHAM SE EK PAIGAM NE, HUMKO BAHUT SATAYA HAI,
MERE SANAM NE KHUD APNI SHADI KA PAIGAM JO BHIJWAYA HAI......




**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2006, 03:32:37 PM »
Moved From Shayari-e-husan to shayri-e-dard by Pooja.



Vicky bahoot hi achi kavita likhi hai apne. magar galat section mai thi.
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Meena is back
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2006, 05:00:47 PM »
wah wah vicky ji..very touching...a beautiful poem!! keep it up!!

 :D
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2006, 05:48:07 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya POOJA JI aur MEENA JI ... shukra hai kam se kam aapne to mera dard samjha
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2006, 05:24:46 PM »
Jab mere humsafar ke  tewar badal gaye,
kareeb manzil ke pahunchte hi hum phisal gaye....

do kadam bhi unhone mera sath na diya,
hum sagar se kuch door hi pyase mar gaye.....

aise chot ki usne mere nadan dil par,
ki maut se bhi pahaly bemaut mar gaye....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2006, 06:02:15 PM »
Bohat khoob Vicky...
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2006, 07:39:28 AM »
hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ARYAAN BHAI
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2006, 11:44:05 AM »
wonderfull  Vicky........  bahot  accha aap ne likha
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2006, 05:24:57 PM »
shukriya waheed ji...........
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2006, 05:17:07 AM »
Quote from: "vicky AKELA"
Jab mere humsafar ke  tewar badal gaye,
kareeb manzil ke pahunchte hi hum phisal gaye....

do kadam bhi unhone mera sath na diya,
hum sagar se kuch door hi pyase mar gaye.....

aise chot ki usne mere nadan dil par,
ki maut se bhi pahaly bemaut mar gaye....


wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob!!! bahoot acha likha hai Vicky apne!!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2006, 07:46:24 AM »
shukriya POOJA JI...............

Mar kar bhi tadapta hoon, tere intzaar me,
aag lag gai hai, is dil-e-bekarar me,
milan me kya, maza hai jo intzaar me,
dard ubharta hai kadam rakhte hi pyar me,
zillat jo uthai humne tere pyar me,
ki MAJNU mujhe kahane lage sabhi bazar me.......
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: May 01, 2006, 07:18:18 AM »
vicky ........aapki kavitaa reallybahut sundar hai........ek gahri schaai hai inmein..........dil ko chhoo gayi aapki yah rachna.......

Jab mere humsafar ke tewar badal gaye,
kareeb manzil ke pahunchte hi hum phisal gaye....

do kadam bhi unhone mera sath na diya,
hum sagar se kuch door hi pyase mar gaye.....

aise chot ki usne mere nadan dil par,
ki maut se bhi pahaly bemaut mar gaye....

very  nice lines.......

with best wishes

ranju
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2006, 08:55:55 AM »
RANJANA JI bahut bahut shukriya...
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keertika
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«Reply #13 on: May 01, 2006, 09:16:41 AM »
very touching one vicky!!~~~~ Keep it up!~~~
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: May 01, 2006, 03:42:52 PM »
bahoot hi khoob Vicky and Ranjana wah kaya kamal ka likha hai app dono ne!!!! bahoot khoob!!1
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