sukhe patte ki tarah

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sukhe pat.te ki tarah bikhar kar reh gayi meri zindgi
ek an suljhi paheli ban gayi meri zindgi
 
ak khuli kitaab jiske har panne par naam tha uska likha
ashko k saaye mei kahin gal gayi meri zindgi
 
mein zinda laash hoon jisme koi umeed na koi armaan hai baaki
chand saanso se bandhi ak cut.t ban gayi meri zindgi
 
rutha-rutha waqt mujhe har chaurahe par hai mila
yu badkismati ki lakir ban gayi meri zindgi
 
na derd se koi aah nikle na koi zakhmo ka asar "bhawna" par
dard sahe itne to samjh aaya khud dard ban gayi meri zindgi

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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2008, 05:15:26 PM »
na derd se koi aah nikle na koi zakhmo ka asar "bhawna" par
dard sahe itne to samjh aaya khud dard ban gayi meri zindgi


Aap Ki Aakhri Do Line Chhoo Gayi Dil Ko,
Bahot Khoob Bhawana Ji Likhte Ho Aap.
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2008, 06:39:18 PM »
Nice One kaushik Ji,. Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2008, 06:43:33 PM »
Is Tarah Hume Zindagi Ne Ghamo Ki Kitaab Padhaai Hai,.
Har Panne Mein Dard Dikhta Hai, Aur Zindagi Mein Sirf Tanhaai Hai,.

Maujein Aisi Aati Rahi Dil Ke Sahil Par "Azeem",.
daag Dil Ke Mitt Na Sake, Zindagi Se Humne Kuch Aisi Thokar Khaai hai,.

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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2008, 01:47:29 AM »
bahoot khoob bhawna... Nice lines lil bro!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2008, 02:20:51 AM »
Bohot Khoob Bhawna Applause

Nice one Azeem
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2008, 10:18:38 AM »
shukriya muhammed ji
pooja ji
celmira ji and jaanasheen ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2008, 09:55:08 PM »
bahoot khoob bhawana ji
keep it up




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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2008, 10:03:47 PM »
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mein zinda laash hoon jisme koi umeed na koi armaan hai baaki
chand saanso se bandhi ak cut.t ban gayi meri zindgi

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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2008, 01:45:33 AM »
sukhhe patte ki tarah........................
bahut khoob...keep it up bhawnaji. dil ko chhone wala likhto ho aap
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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2008, 10:58:33 AM »
shukriya baadal ji, sonia ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2008, 06:21:24 PM »
Shukriya,.
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