ye to dard chipaane ka mehaz ek jaariya hai

by purani_jeans_aur_guitar on September 04, 2007, 02:21:03 PM
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hudood-e-ashk per meri bheega nazariya hai  (hudood-e-ashk = boundries of tears,)
ek dil hi mera soona hai baaki sab dariya hai
na jaana mere chehre ki ibtsaam per yaaro.n  (ibtsaam = smile)
ke ye to dard chipaane ke mehez ek jaariya hai

.............................@fahi@.....................................
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2007, 08:29:53 PM »
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hudood-e-ashk per meri bheega nazariya hai  (hudood-e-ashk = boundries of tears,)
ek dil hi mera soona hai baaki sab dariya hai
na jaana mere chehre ki ibtsaam per yaaro.n  (ibtsaam = smile)
ke ye to dard chipaane ke mehez ek jaariya hai

.............................@fahi@.....................................


BAHOOT KHOOB BHAI...BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2007, 01:57:50 AM »
wonderful, just too good, its so touching sad5
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SHONA
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2007, 04:52:06 PM »
Beautiful..
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2007, 01:38:29 AM »
Bohot achcha likha hai Fahi...but I think 2nd line can re-written to complete the meaning of 4 lines. Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2007, 12:11:52 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya talat ji........mujhe meri galti batane ke liye..accha lagta hai jab kisi se apni galtiyo ko jaanne ka mauka milta hai..well,koshish rahegi next time jyada concentrate karke likhne ki.....but gar koi galti ho to next time bhi zaroor bataiyega............thanx shona ,angel and khwaish for liking it
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